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第八十八回
禪chán到dào玉yù華huá施shī法fǎ會huì
心xīn猿yuán木mù土tǔ授shòu門mén人rén

Chan Reaches Yuhua and a Dharma Assembly Is Held · The Mind-Ape and the Wood and the Earth Take Disciples

五色祥雲
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原文 Original text 繁體 Traditional Reader's edition

五色祥雲 Three Hundred Paces Above the Ground

好hǎo大dà聖shèng,唿hū哨shào一yì聲shēng,將jiāng觔jīn斗dǒu一yì抖dǒu,兩liǎng隻zhī腳jiǎo踏tà著zhe五wǔ色sè祥xiáng雲yún,起qǐ在zài半bàn空kōng,離lí地dì約yuē有yǒu三sān百bǎi步bù高gāo下xià。把bǎ金jīn箍gū棒bàng丟diū開kāi個gè「撒sā花huā蓋gài頂dǐng」,「黃huáng龍lóng轉zhuǎn身shēn」,一yí上shàng一yí下xià,左zuǒ旋xuán右yòu轉zhuǎn,起qǐ初chū時shí人rén與yǔ棒bàng似sì錦jǐn上shàng添tiān花huā;好hǎo大dà圣shèng,唿hū哨shào一yì声shēng,将jiāng觔jīn斗dǒu一yì抖dǒu,两liǎng只zhī脚jiǎo踏tà着zhe五wǔ色sè祥xiáng云yún,起qǐ在zài半bàn空kōng,离lí地dì约yuē有yǒu三sān百bǎi步bù高gāo下xià。把bǎ金jīn箍gū棒bàng丢diū开kāi个gè「撒sā花huā盖gài顶dǐng」,「黄huáng龙lóng转zhuǎn身shēn」,一yí上shàng一yí下xià,左zuǒ旋xuán右yòu转zhuǎn,起qǐ初chū时shí人rén与yǔ棒bàng似sì锦jǐn上shàng添tiān花huā;


逐句解 Line by line

好hǎo大dà聖shèng,唿hū哨shào一yì聲shēng,將jiāng觔jīn斗dǒu一yì抖dǒu,兩liǎng隻zhī腳jiǎo踏tà著zhe五wǔ色sè祥xiáng雲yún,起qǐ在zài半bàn空kōng,離lí地dì約yuē有yǒu三sān百bǎi步bù高gāo下xià。 好hǎo大dà圣shèng,唿hū哨shào一yì声shēng,将jiāng觔jīn斗dǒu一yì抖dǒu,两liǎng只zhī脚jiǎo踏tà着zhe五wǔ色sè祥xiáng云yún,起qǐ在zài半bàn空kōng,离lí地dì约yuē有yǒu三sān百bǎi步bù高gāo下xià。

Fine Great Sage! With one whistle he shook out his somersault, set both feet on a five-coloured auspicious cloud, and rose into mid-air some three hundred paces above the ground.

好大聖, fine Great Sage, is the storyteller's cue that a set piece is starting — and this is the chapter's only use of the Great Sage title, against twenty-five plain Pilgrims. It is saved for the one moment he does something spectacular. 觔斗 is the cloud-somersault, and both characters take readings that surprise: the second is dǒu, the dipper, not the dòu of fighting. 著 is zhe, marking the feet as planted and staying planted.

把bǎ金jīn箍gū棒bàng丟diū開kāi個gè「撒sā花huā蓋gài頂dǐng」,「黃huáng龍lóng轉zhuǎn身shēn」,一yí上shàng一yí下xià,左zuǒ旋xuán右yòu轉zhuǎn,起qǐ初chū時shí人rén與yǔ棒bàng似sì錦jǐn上shàng添tiān花huā; 把bǎ金jīn箍gū棒bàng丢diū开kāi个gè「撒sā花huā盖gài顶dǐng」,「黄huáng龙lóng转zhuǎn身shēn」,一yí上shàng一yí下xià,左zuǒ旋xuán右yòu转zhuǎn,起qǐ初chū时shí人rén与yǔ棒bàng似sì锦jǐn上shàng添tiān花huā;

He set the gold-banded rod going in "Scattering Flowers Over the Crown" and "Yellow Dragon Turns Its Body", up and down, spinning left and wheeling right. At the start, man and rod together were like flowers added to brocade;

The two named forms are real staff techniques and the novel quotes them the way a match report quotes moves. 撒花蓋頂, scattering flowers over the crown, is the overhead whirl that makes a canopy of the weapon; 黃龍轉身, yellow dragon turning its body, is the whole-body spin. 錦上添花, adding flowers to brocade, is still one of the commonest phrases in Chinese for an improvement on something already fine.


總評 Commentary

The chapter has been holding the Great Sage title in reserve for eighty-eight lines and spends it here. Everywhere else he is simply Pilgrim.

The named techniques are the mark of a storyteller who expects an audience that knows staff work. They are not invented and they are not explained, and the effect is the same as a commentator naming a shot without stopping to define it.

Note the direction of the compliment in the last clause. Man and weapon are lovely together — and the very next line takes the man away.