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小龍中傷
The Dragon Wounded
他兩個在雲端裡戰夠八九回合,小龍的手軟觔麻,老魔的身強力壯。小龍抵敵不住,飛起刀去,砍那妖怪。妖怪有接刀之法,一隻手接了寶刀,一隻手拋下滿堂紅便打。小龍措手不及,被他把後腿上著了一下。急慌慌按落雲頭,多虧了御水河救了性命,小龍一頭鑽下水去。那妖魔趕來尋他不見,執了寶刀,拿了滿堂紅,回上銀安殿,照舊吃酒睡覺不題。他两个在云端里战够八九回合,小龙的手软觔麻,老魔的身强力壮。小龙抵敌不住,飞起刀去,砍那妖怪。妖怪有接刀之法,一只手接了宝刀,一只手抛下满堂红便打。小龙措手不及,被他把后腿上著了一下。急慌慌按落云头,多亏了御水河救了性命,小龙一头钻下水去。那妖魔赶来寻他不见,执了宝刀,拿了满堂红,回上银安殿,照旧吃酒睡觉不题。
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他兩個在雲端裡戰夠八九回合,小龍的手軟觔麻,老魔的身強力壯。
他两个在云端里战够八九回合,小龙的手软觔麻,老魔的身强力壮。
The two fought a full eight or nine rounds up among the clouds; but the little dragon’s hands went weak and his sinews numb, while the old demon’s frame was strong and his force unspent.
回合 is a "round, bout"; 觔麻 (= 筋麻) is "sinews gone numb"; 身強 ("strong of frame") takes 強 as qiáng. The dragon, a water-creature far from his element, tires first.
小龍抵敵不住,飛起刀去,砍那妖怪。
小龙抵敌不住,飞起刀去,砍那妖怪。
Unable to hold his ground, the little dragon flung his sword flying at the demon.
抵敵不住 ("could not withstand"); 那 is deictic nà. In desperation he throws the very weapon he had won.
妖怪有接刀之法,一隻手接了寶刀,一隻手拋下滿堂紅便打。
妖怪有接刀之法,一只手接了宝刀,一只手抛下满堂红便打。
But the demon had a trick for catching blades: with one hand he caught the treasured sword, and with the other flung down the "hall-filler" to strike.
接刀之法 ("a method for catching a thrown blade") turns the dragon’s gambit against him — the demon seizes the sword mid-air and counters at once.
小龍措手不及,被他把後腿上著了一下。
小龙措手不及,被他把后腿上著了一下。
The little dragon, caught off guard, took a blow upon his hind leg.
措手不及 is "caught unprepared." In 著了一下 the graph 著 is read zháo (the resultative — "was struck, took a hit"), a different reading from the durative zhe.
急慌慌按落雲頭,多虧了御水河救了性命,小龍一頭鑽下水去。
急慌慌按落云头,多亏了御水河救了性命,小龙一头钻下水去。
In frantic haste he brought his cloud down, and — thanks to the Imperial Moat — saved his life, plunging headlong into the water.
御水河 is the "Imperial Water-River," the palace moat. The wounded dragon escapes into water, his native element, which alone preserves him.
那妖魔趕來尋他不見,執了寶刀,拿了滿堂紅,回上銀安殿,照舊吃酒睡覺不題。
那妖魔赶来寻他不见,执了宝刀,拿了满堂红,回上银安殿,照旧吃酒睡觉不题。
The demon gave chase but could not find him; so, gripping the treasured sword and taking up the "hall-filler," he returned to the Silver-Peace Hall and, as before, drank and slept — but of that no more.
照舊 ("as before"); 睡覺 ("to sleep") takes 覺 as jiào; 那 is deictic nà. The demon resumes his revel, victor for the night, and the narrator sets the thread aside.
總評 Commentary
The dragon’s defeat restores the chapter’s grim balance: the first counter-stroke since the master’s capture fails, and the last of the free disciples is driven, wounded, into hiding. The cause is pointedly physical — the water-dragon, fighting a sustained battle in the air, tires as the earthbound demon does not. Even a true dragon cannot prevail alone and out of his element.
His escape into the 御水河, the palace moat, is fitting: water is the dragon’s proper realm, and only by returning to it does he survive. The image quietly reinforces the coming lesson — that this crisis cannot be resolved by the pilgrims’ own scattered strength, but only by recalling the one who is absent.