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兩個象奴 Like Two Elephant Grooms
真個獃子舉鈀柄,走一步,打一下;行者牽著鼻子:就似兩個象奴,牽至坡下。真个呆子举钯柄,走一步,打一下;行者牵着鼻子:就似两个象奴,牵至坡下。
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真個獃子舉鈀柄,走一步,打一下;
真个呆子举钯柄,走一步,打一下;
The fool did indeed take the rake by the handle, and at every step he took he landed a blow.
走一步 and 打一下 are set against each other: one step, one blow, and so on all the way down.
行者牽著鼻子:就似兩個象奴,牽至坡下。
行者牵着鼻子:就似两个象奴,牵至坡下。
Wukong led it by the nose, and the pair of them were for all the world like two elephant grooms bringing it down to the foot of the slope.
著 reads zhe, the leading kept up. 象奴 — a keeper of elephants, a real trade at any court that kept them.
The comparison is the joke and it is a very precise one. An elephant groom is a real occupation — courts that kept elephants for processions employed men to walk them — and the picture of two of them bringing a beast down a hill is entirely ordinary. What is being walked down the hill is a demon king.
Bajie's contribution is exactly measured: one step, one blow, with the handle, on a creature already held by the nose. The prose puts the two phrases side by side so that the rhythm of it comes through, and the effect is of a man doing a job thoroughly and without any risk whatever.