前緣姻眷 A Match of Former Karma
行者道:「陛下的駙馬是上界的奎星,令愛乃侍香的玉女,因思凡降落人間。不非小可,都因前世前緣,該有這些姻眷。那怪被老孫上天宮啟奏玉帝,玉帝查得他四卯不到,下界十三日,就是十三年了。──蓋天上一日,下界一年。──隨差本部星宿收他上界,貶在兜率宮立功去訖。老孫卻救得令愛來也。」那國王謝了行者的恩德,便教:「看你師父去來。」行者道:「陛下的驸马是上界的奎星,令爱乃侍香的玉女,因思凡降落人间。不非小可,都因前世前缘,该有这些姻眷。那怪被老孙上天宫启奏玉帝,玉帝查得他四卯不到,下界十三日,就是十三年了。──盖天上一日,下界一年。──随差本部星宿收他上界,贬在兜率宫立功去讫。老孙却救得令爱来也。」那国王谢了行者的恩德,便教:「看你师父去来。」
逐句解 Line by line
Pilgrim said, "Your Majesty's son-in-law was the Kui star of the upper realm, and your daughter the incense-tending jade-maiden, who for yearning of the mortal world came down among men.
Wukong addresses a king in properly polite Chinese, which is worth noticing. 駙馬, fù mǎ, is the title of a ruler's son-in-law; 令愛, lìng ài, "your esteemed daughter," uses the same courteous 令 prefix he used to the princess of her sons. 思凡降落, sī fán jiàng luò, to come down for longing of the mortal world — here 降 is jiàng, "descend."
It was no small matter, but all owing to the karma of a former life, that they should be joined in this marriage-bond.
A line the edition prints in a form that does not quite parse. 不非小可 carries one negative more than the sense needs: 非小可 on its own already means "no trifling matter," which is plainly what is wanted. The 世德堂本 prints the doubled negative and it has been encoded as printed rather than quietly mended. 前世前緣, qián shì qián yuán, the karmic affinity carried over from an earlier life; 姻眷, yīn juàn, the ties of marriage.
The fiend, upon old Sun's going up to the Heavenly Palace and reporting to the Jade Emperor, was found by inquiry to have missed four musters — thirteen days below, which is thirteen years.
四卯不到, sì mǎo bù dào, absent from four roll-calls. He repeats the celestial arithmetic to the court exactly as he heard it, attendance record and all.
— for a day in Heaven is a year in the world below.
The novel breaks its own sentence to explain the exchange rate — a day above, a year below — which is why thirteen days of absenteeism cost this family thirteen years.
— whereupon his own bureau was sent to fetch him back to Heaven, and he was demoted to earn merit in the Tushita Palace.
本部星宿, běn bù xīng xiù, the star-officers of his own bureau; 隨差, dispatched thereupon, with 差 read chāi, "to send on a charge." 去訖, qù qì, "has gone, and there an end" — a clerk's way of closing a file.
And so old Sun has rescued your daughter and brought her home."
救得, jiù de, to have managed to rescue. He signs off the report with the result.
The king thanked Pilgrim for his kindness, and said, "Go now and see to your master."
恩德, ēn dé, kindness, benefaction. The king thanks him and immediately sends him to deal with the tiger, which is the last thing outstanding.
Wukong's public account translates the celestial disclosures into a form the mortal court can take in, and restates the chapter's governing idea: the whole affair, demon and princess alike, was the earthly unfolding of a bond contracted among the stars. The aside on the time-ratio, thirteen heavenly days as thirteen earthly years, supplies the mechanism by which so brief a truancy above produced so long a captivity below.
The passage completes the transfer of understanding from Heaven to earth that the reunion required, and the king's simple thanks and his bidding to see to the master turn the narrative to the last unfinished task. With the cosmic account settled, what remains is the freeing of the pilgrim and the mending of the band.