三打令牌 The Third Crack
那道士心中焦躁,仗寶劍,解散了頭髮,念著咒,燒了符,再一令牌打將下去。只見那南天門裡,鄧天君領著雷公、電母到當空,迎著行者進禮。那道士心中焦躁,仗宝剑,解散了头发,念着咒,烧了符,再一令牌打将下去。只见那南天门里,邓天君领着雷公、电母到当空,迎着行者进礼。
逐句解 Line by line
The Daoist, agitated in his heart, gripped his precious sword, loosed his hair, chanted his spell, burned a talisman, and struck the command-tablet down once again.
那道士: 那 = nà. 心中: 中 = zhōng. 解散了頭髮: 散 = sàn, to loosen -- letting the hair down is part of the rite, not a sign of disarray, though it reads as both here. 念著咒: 著 = zhe. 打將下去: 將 = jiāng, carrying the stroke downward.
And there, within the Southern Gate of Heaven, Marshal Deng, leading the Thunder Lord and the Lightning Mother, came into the mid-air and, facing Pilgrim, made their salutes.
那南天門: 那 = nà. 領著 and 迎著: 著 = zhe. 鄧天君 is Marshal Deng, a senior officer of the thunder court; 雷公 the Thunder Lord and 電母 the Lightning Mother, who are exactly what their names say. 當空: 當 = dāng.
The third attempt is the most frantic -- hair unbound, sword drawn, the full Five-Thunder rite -- and it works. The great thunder deities come down through the Southern Gate of Heaven.
And they come down to salute Wukong. That is the passage's quiet joke: the summoning succeeds perfectly and delivers its results to the wrong man. The immortal is not being exposed as a fraud here; he is being outranked.
The next passage makes that explicit, and it is the point on which the whole contest turns from comedy into something with a rule behind it.