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香爐燭臺
Censer and Candles
頂上放一張桌子,桌上有一個香爐,爐中香煙靄靄。兩邊有兩隻燭臺,臺上風燭煌煌。爐邊靠著一個金牌,牌上鐫的是雷神名號。顶上放一张桌子,桌上有一个香炉,炉中香烟霭霭。两边有两只烛台,台上风烛煌煌。炉边靠着一个金牌,牌上镌的是雷神名号。
逐句解 Line by line
頂上放一張桌子,桌上有一個香爐,爐中香煙靄靄。
顶上放一张桌子,桌上有一个香炉,炉中香烟霭霭。
On the top was set a table, and on the table an incense-burner, with the incense-smoke curling thick from the burner.
桌子: 子 = zi. 爐中: 中 = zhōng. 香煙靄靄 (ǎi ǎi) "the incense smoke hanging thick."
兩邊有兩隻燭臺,臺上風燭煌煌。
两边有两只烛台,台上风烛煌煌。
On either side were two candle-stands, and on the stands the wind-candles blazed bright.
風燭 "wind candles," made to stay lit outdoors. 煌煌 (huáng huáng) "blazing bright."
爐邊靠著一個金牌,牌上鐫的是雷神名號。
炉边靠着一个金牌,牌上镌的是雷神名号。
Beside the burner leaned a golden placard, on which were engraved the names of the thunder-gods.
靠著: 著 = zhe, propped and staying propped. 鐫 (juān) "to engrave." 雷神名號 "the names and titles of the thunder gods" -- and names matter here, because the rite works by summoning named officials, not by asking the sky nicely.
總評 Commentary
The catalogue moves up to the platform: table, censer, two candle stands, and a gold placard with the thunder gods' names cut into it.
That placard is the key to how this magic is supposed to work. The Daoist rite treats heaven as a civil service with departments, ranks and correct forms of address. You do not pray for rain; you file with the right office, using the right names, and the office is obliged to act.
Which is a perfectly coherent system, and completely useless against someone who outranks the office.