Canonical Classics ← 第二十五回
第二十五回
zhènyuánxiāngǎnzhuōjīngsēng
sūnxíngzhěnàozhuāngguàn

The Immortal Zhenyuan Pursues and Seizes the Scripture-Seeking Monk · Sun the Pilgrim Makes Great Havoc at the Five-Villages Abbey

空中惡鬥
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原文 Original text 繁體 Traditional Reader's edition 含詞賦 With rhapsody

空中惡鬥 A Fierce Battle in the Air

shāsēngchèbǎozhàngjièdīngshèng使shǐtiěbàngshàngqiánxiānwéizhùzàikōngzhōngluànluànzhùzhèchángèdòuyǒushīwéizhèngshīyuēshāsēngchèbǎozhàngjièdīngshèng使shǐtiěbàngshàngqiánxiānwéizhùzàikōngzhōngluànluànzhùzhèchángèdòuyǒushīwéizhèngshīyuē

kōngshízhènyuánxiānshìtóngjūnmiàogèngxuánkōngshízhènyuánxiānshìtóngjūnmiàogèngxuán
sānjiànshénbīngshīměngliègēnzhǔwěipiāoránsānjiànshénbīngshīměngliègēnzhǔwěipiāorán
zuǒzhēyòudǎngsuíláiwǎnghòujiàqiányíngrènzhuǎnxuánzuǒzhēyòudǎngsuíláiwǎnghòujiàqiányíngrènzhuǎnxuán
zhāoláinántuōyānliúdào西tiānzhāoláinántuōyānliúdào西tiān

逐句解 Line by line

shāsēngchèbǎozhàngjièdīngshèng使shǐtiěbàngshàngqiánxiānwéizhùzàikōngzhōngluànluànzhù shāsēngchèbǎozhàngjièdīngshèng使shǐtiěbàngshàngqiánxiānwéizhùzàikōngzhōngluànluànzhù

Wujing drew his precious staff, Bajie raised his nine-tooth rake, the Great Sage plied his iron cudgel, and all together they pressed forward, hemming the Great Immortal in mid-air, striking and hammering in a wild mêlée.

Three weapons at once, which the reader should recognise as an escalation: Wujing's 寶杖, treasure-staff, Bajie's 釘鈀, nine-toothed rake, and the iron cudgel. 圍住在空中, hemming him in mid-air. 亂打亂築, striking and hammering wildly — being the verb for the rake, which pounds rather than cuts. , chè, whipping a weapon out.

zhèchángèdòuyǒushīwéizhèng zhèchángèdòuyǒushīwéizhèng

This fierce combat has a poem to prove it.

有詩為證, "there is a poem to bear witness," takes as wéi, "to serve as." The chapter's second inset poem, and it arrives at the fight.

shīyuē shīyuē

The poem says:

詩曰, "the poem says" — and the register changes.

kōngshízhènyuánxiānshìtóngjūnmiàogèngxuán kōngshízhènyuánxiānshìtóngjūnmiàogèngxuán

Wukong knew not the Immortal Zhenyuan, / Coeval Lord of the world, whose art is deep and strange more still;

The poem opens by naming the mismatch: Wukong did not know who he was fighting. 鎮元仙, Zhènyuán, is the Great Immortal himself, Patriarch of the Earthly Immortals; 與世同君, Yǔshì-Tóngjūn, "Coeval Lord of the World," is his title. 妙更玄, miào gèng xuán, his art deeper and stranger still — , the dark and profound, is one of the keywords of Daoist writing, and the word the Daodejing reaches for in its very first chapter to name what cannot be named.

sānjiànshénbīngshīměngliègēnzhǔwěipiāorán sānjiànshénbīngshīměngliègēnzhǔwěipiāorán

three divine weapons plied their fury, / one deer-tail whisk floated free of itself;

The line the whole poem is built on: three divine weapons against one deer-tail whisk. 三件神兵, the three weapons; 一根麈尾, the single whisk, 自飄然 — drifting of its own accord, as if it were not involved. The contrast between 猛烈, fury, and 飄然, floating, is the fight in four words.

zuǒzhēyòudǎngsuíláiwǎnghòujiàqiányíngrènzhuǎnxuán zuǒzhēyòudǎngsuíláiwǎnghòujiàqiányíngrènzhuǎnxuán

warding left and fending right, he moved with their coming and going, / guarding behind and meeting before, he turned and wheeled at will;

左遮右擋, warding left and blocking right, is the phrase used of him in the prose too. 任轉旋, rèn zhuǎn xuán, wheeling at will — here is "as he pleases," a man moving entirely on his own terms.

zhāoláinántuōyānliúdào西tiān zhāoláinántuōyānliúdào西tiān

night gone and morning come, they could not break away— / and lingering, on what day would they reach the Western Heaven!

And the closing line lifts the stakes off the fight altogether. 夜去朝來, night going and morning coming, with as zhāo, "morning" — time passing while nothing is resolved. 難脫體, no getting the body free. Then the question: 淹留何日到西天淹留, yān liú, is being detained, held up somewhere you did not mean to stay — and if they are held up here, what day will they ever reach the West? For one line the poem puts the entire pilgrimage in doubt.


總評 Commentary

The three disciples attack together and it makes no difference at all. The poem states the arithmetic plainly — 三件神兵施猛烈一根麈尾自飄然: three divine weapons in full fury, one deer-tail whisk drifting about as though it had wandered in by accident.

Its first line diagnoses the whole problem. 悟空不識鎮元仙: Wukong did not know who Zhenyuan was. He has spent the chapter treating this as a quarrel with a country abbey over a piece of fruit, when the man he struck at is the Patriarch of the Earthly Immortals and as old as the age. Every mistake in the chapter follows from that one.

And then the poem does something the prose never does: it looks up from the fight and asks whether the journey will happen at all. 淹留何日到西天 — held up here, what day will they reach the Western Heaven? It is a real question, left hanging at the end of the verse, and the chapter will not answer it. The next one will.