查點人夫 Counting Out The Bearers
卻說那館中有兩個大使,乃是一正一副,都在廳上查點人夫,要往那裡接官。忽見唐僧來到,個個心驚,齊道:「是甚麼人?是甚麼人?往那裡走?」却说那馆中有两个大使,乃是一正一副,都在厅上查点人夫,要往那里接官。忽见唐僧来到,个个心惊,齐道:「是甚么人?是甚么人?往那里走?」
逐句解 Line by line
Now in that hall there were two commissioners, a chief and a deputy, both up in the main room counting out bearers, meaning to go somewhere and receive an official.
一正一副 — one chief, one deputy — is an ordinary pair of numbers, and both instances of 一 shift tone in the ordinary way before the falling tone that follows. Neither is one of the fixed uses that hold their citation tone.
Seeing the Tang Monk arrive, every one of them took fright, and they cried out together, "What sort of people are these?
甚 takes shén when it is paired with 麼. Standing on its own it would read shèn, as it did when the pilgrims were arguing below the wall.
"What sort of people are these? Where do you think you are going?"
The repeated question is in the source, not a copyist's slip. The closing four characters fold back into it: a tail that shuts its own quotation and carries no attribution of its own joins what precedes it, and the joined unit then stands at eight characters, which is exactly where folding stops.
The commissioners are caught mid-task, and the task is telling. They are mustering bearers to go out and meet somebody of consequence; the pilgrims arrive at exactly the wrong moment, into a room already busy with the reception of a different guest.
The doubled question does what doubling does — it registers alarm without the narrator having to name it. They ask twice because nobody answers the first time.