米麵皆無 The Mountains Are Gone
玉帝見了道:「那廝們既有善念,看三事如何?」正說處,忽有披香殿看管的將官報道:「所立米、麵山俱倒了,霎時間米、麵皆無,鎖梃亦斷。」玉帝见了道:「那厮们既有善念,看三事如何?」正说处,忽有披香殿看管的将官报道:「所立米、面山俱倒了,霎时间米、面皆无,锁梃亦断。」
逐句解 Line by line
The Jade Emperor read them and said, "Since those fellows have had a good thought — go and see how the three things stand."
那廝們, those fellows, pluralised. The Jade Emperor has extended his contemptuous word from the prefect to the whole prefecture, and it is the last time he uses it.
He was still speaking when the officer in charge of the Hall of Diffused Fragrance came in with a report: "The mountains of rice and flour that were set up have both fallen. In an instant the rice and the flour were gone entirely, and the shackle has snapped as well."
倒 is dǎo, to topple — the last of the chapter's twelve, and the one every other has been building towards. 看管 takes kān, the looking-after reading. 霎時間 is in the space of an instant.
The report comes in while the Jade Emperor is still mid-sentence, which is the novel's way of telling you it had already happened.
The mountains did not diminish. They fell, and the rice and flour were gone entirely, in an instant — exactly as the Preceptors said they would. The chick and the lapdog turn out to have been irrelevant all along, which is what everyone in the Hall of Diffused Fragrance except Pilgrim seemed to know.
And the officer who reports it is the man whose job was to watch two heaps of food and a lamp. He has presumably been doing it for three years.