取經之事 How Goes the Scripture Quest
卻說行者一駕觔斗雲,徑到西天門外,早見護國天王引天丁、力士上前迎接道:「大聖,取經之事完乎?」行者道:「也差不遠矣。却说行者一驾觔斗云,径到西天门外,早见护国天王引天丁、力士上前迎接道:「大圣,取经之事完乎?」行者道:「也差不远矣。
逐句解 Line by line
Now then: Pilgrim took one leap of his somersault cloud and came straight to the outside of the Western Gate of Heaven, where the Nation-Guarding Heavenly King, leading his celestial soldiers and strongmen, came forward to meet him. "Great Sage — is the business of the scriptures finished?"
觔斗雲 is the somersault cloud, and 斗 is dǒu — the same reading as the Dipper, and not the dòu that means to fight. One leap of it covers a hundred and eight thousand lǐ, which the novel established in chapter two and never mentions again.
Pilgrim said, "Not far off now."
差不遠, not far short, is a casual estimate — still the ordinary Chinese way of saying near enough. The pilgrimage has run eighty-six chapters and Pilgrim answers the question the way you would answer it at a bus stop.
The gatekeeper's question is a small piece of world-building doing a lot of work. The Heavenly King knows about the quest, has been following it, and asks after it the way a colleague asks about a long project.
Pilgrim's answer is almost comically offhand. Not far off now — and he is right, but the reader should hear the years behind it. There are thirteen chapters left of a hundred.