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照嘴一下
A Peck on the Lip
這蟲鷖不大不小的,上秤稱,只有二三兩重。紅銅嘴,黑鐵腳。刷剌的一翅飛下來。那八戒丟倒頭,正睡著哩,被他照嘴唇上扢揸的一下。这虫鹥不大不小的,上秤称,只有二三两重。红铜嘴,黑铁脚。刷剌的一翅飞下来。那八戒丢倒头,正睡著哩,被他照嘴唇上扢揸的一下。
逐句解 Line by line
這蟲鷖不大不小的,上秤稱,只有二三兩重。
这虫鹥不大不小的,上秤称,只有二三两重。
This bird was neither big nor small — set on the scale to weigh, it came to but two or three ounces.
上秤稱 (shàng chèng chēng), "to set on the scale and weigh." 二三兩重 — 重 zhòng (weight).
紅銅嘴,黑鐵腳。
红铜嘴,黑铁脚。
A beak of red copper, feet of black iron.
紅銅 (hóng tóng), "red copper." 黑鐵, "black iron."
刷剌的一翅飛下來。
刷剌的一翅飞下来。
With a rush of its wings it came flying down.
刷剌 (shuā lá), the rush of wings. 飛下來, "came flying down."
那八戒丟倒頭,正睡著哩,被他照嘴唇上扢揸的一下。
那八戒丢倒头,正睡著哩,被他照嘴唇上扢揸的一下。
Eight Rules, his head flung down, was fast asleep — and got a sharp peck square on the lip.
扢揸 (gǔ zhā), the sharp rap of the peck. 那 nà; 丟倒 — 倒 dǎo; 睡著 — 著 zhe.
總評 Commentary
The woodpecker’s smallness is dwelt on — a mere two or three ounces, copper-beaked and iron-footed — before it plummets down and delivers its blow. The narrative times the peck for maximum comic effect: Eight Rules is caught at the very height of his self-satisfied slumber.
The peck “square on the lip” is the sting in the tail of the whole elaborate sequence — Pilgrim’s surveillance rewarded with a moment of pure slapstick retribution. The blow launches the next movement of the chapter, in which the startled Eight Rules, still unaware of who torments him, will blunder toward the very report Pilgrim foresaw.