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蓮花洞
The Lotus-Flower Cave
那樵子止不住呵呵冷笑道:「你這個風潑和尚,想是在方上雲遊,學了些書符咒水的法術,只可驅邪縛鬼,還不曾撞見這等狠毒的怪哩。」行者道:「怎見他狠毒?」樵子道:「此山徑過有六百里遠近,名喚平頂山。山中有一洞,名喚蓮花洞。洞裡有兩個魔頭,他畫影圖形,要捉和尚;抄名訪姓,要吃唐僧。你若別處來的還好,但犯了一個『唐』字兒,莫想去得,去得。」行者道:「我們正是唐朝來的。」樵子道:「他正要吃你們哩。」那樵子止不住呵呵冷笑道:「你这个风泼和尚,想是在方上云游,学了些书符咒水的法术,只可驱邪缚鬼,还不曾撞见这等狠毒的怪哩。」行者道:「怎见他狠毒?」樵子道:「此山径过有六百里远近,名唤平顶山。山中有一洞,名唤莲花洞。洞里有两个魔头,他画影图形,要捉和尚;抄名访姓,要吃唐僧。你若别处来的还好,但犯了一个『唐』字儿,莫想去得,去得。」行者道:「我们正是唐朝来的。」樵子道:「他正要吃你们哩。」
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那樵子止不住呵呵冷笑道:「你這個風潑和尚,想是在方上雲遊,學了些書符咒水的法術,只可驅邪縛鬼,還不曾撞見這等狠毒的怪哩。」
那樵子止不住呵呵冷笑道:「你这个风泼和尚,想是在方上云游,学了些书符咒水的法术,只可驱邪缚鬼,还不曾撞见这等狠毒的怪哩。」
The woodcutter could not hold back a cold, snorting laugh: “You crazy, brazen monk — you have been roaming the regions, I suppose, and picked up some tricks of writing charms and conjuring with water, good enough to drive off sprites and bind ghosts; but you have never yet run up against fiends as fell as these.”
書符咒水 (shū fú zhòu shuǐ), "writing talismans and charming water," Daoist exorcistic arts. 那 nà; 還 hái.
行者道:「怎見他狠毒?」
行者道:「怎见他狠毒?」
Said Pilgrim: “How are they so fell?”
狠毒 (hěndú), "fell, savage."
樵子道:「此山徑過有六百里遠近,名喚平頂山。
樵子道:「此山径过有六百里远近,名唤平顶山。
Said the woodcutter: “This mountain measures some six hundred li across, and is called the Level-Top Mountain.
平頂山 (Píngdǐng shān), "Level-Top Mountain." 名喚, "is named."
山中有一洞,名喚蓮花洞。
山中有一洞,名唤莲花洞。
Within the mountain is a cave, called the Lotus-Flower Cave.
蓮花洞 (Liánhuā dòng), "Lotus-Flower Cave." 山中 — 中 read zhōng.
洞裡有兩個魔頭,他畫影圖形,要捉和尚;抄名訪姓,要吃唐僧。
洞里有两个魔头,他画影图形,要捉和尚;抄名访姓,要吃唐僧。
In the cave are two demon-chiefs. They paint likenesses and draw forms, meaning to seize monks; they copy down names and inquire after surnames, meaning to eat the Tang Monk.
畫影圖形 (huà yǐng tú xíng), "to paint likenesses and draw forms." 抄名訪姓, "to copy names and seek surnames."
你若別處來的還好,但犯了一個『唐』字兒,莫想去得,去得。」
你若别处来的还好,但犯了一个『唐』字儿,莫想去得,去得。」
Had you come from anywhere else, it would be well enough; but bear the one word ‘Tang,’ and you may give up all thought of getting through — getting through at all.”
『唐』字兒 (Táng zì er), "the word ‘Tang.’" 還 hái; 兒 suffixal er; 去得 — 得 potential de (twice).
行者道:「我們正是唐朝來的。」
行者道:「我们正是唐朝来的。」
Said Pilgrim: “We are the very ones come from the Tang court.”
唐朝 (Táng cháo), "the Tang court." 朝 read cháo.
樵子道:「他正要吃你們哩。」
樵子道:「他正要吃你们哩。」
Said the woodcutter: “Then it is precisely you they wish to eat.”
正要 (zhèng yào), "precisely wish to."
總評 Commentary
The woodcutter, dropping his affable manner for a cold laugh, at last names the danger: the Level-Top Mountain, six hundred li across; the Lotus-Flower Cave; and its two demon-chiefs, who “paint likenesses and draw forms” (畫影圖形) to catch monks and “copy down names” (抄名訪姓) specifically to devour the Tang Monk. That the demons hunt by portrait and register gives the threat a bureaucratic exactness that mirrors — and inverts — Pilgrim’s own deportation-directory of the previous passage.
The warning turns on the single word 唐: it is not monks in general but this pilgrim, bearing the Tang name, whom the fiends await. Pilgrim’s flat admission — “We are the very ones come from the Tang court” — walks the band knowingly into the trap the officer has just described, a characteristic move that lets the plot proceed with no concealment of the stakes.