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Pilgrim Reckons It Out
行者聞言,把功曹叱退,切切在心,按雲頭,徑來山上。只見長老與八戒、沙僧簇擁前進。他卻暗想:「我若把功曹的言語實實告訴師父,師父他不濟事,必就哭了;假若不與他實說,夢著頭,帶著他走,常言道:『乍入蘆圩,不知深淺。』倘或被妖魔撈去,卻不又要老孫費心?且等我照顧八戒一照顧,先著他出頭與那怪打一仗看。若是打得過他,就算他一功;若是沒手段,被怪拿去,等老孫再去救他不遲,卻好顯我本事出名。」正自家計較,以心問心道:「只恐八戒躲懶,便不肯出頭,師父又有些護短。等老孫羈勒他羈勒。」行者闻言,把功曹叱退,切切在心,按云头,径来山上。只见长老与八戒、沙僧簇拥前进。他却暗想:「我若把功曹的言语实实告诉师父,师父他不济事,必就哭了;假若不与他实说,梦著头,带著他走,常言道:『乍入芦圩,不知深浅。』倘或被妖魔捞去,却不又要老孙费心?且等我照顾八戒一照顾,先著他出头与那怪打一仗看。若是打得过他,就算他一功;若是没手段,被怪拿去,等老孙再去救他不迟,却好显我本事出名。」正自家计较,以心问心道:「只恐八戒躲懒,便不肯出头,师父又有些护短。等老孙羁勒他羁勒。」
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行者聞言,把功曹叱退,切切在心,按雲頭,徑來山上。
行者闻言,把功曹叱退,切切在心,按云头,径来山上。
When Pilgrim had heard him out, he dismissed the Merit-Officer with a rebuke, took the warning earnestly to heart, pressed down his cloud, and came straight up the mountain.
叱退 (chì tuì), "to dismiss with a rebuke." 切切在心, "earnestly kept in mind."
只見長老與八戒、沙僧簇擁前進。
只见长老与八戒、沙僧簇拥前进。
There he saw the Elder pressing forward, closely attended by Eight Rules and Sha Monk.
簇擁 (cù yōng), "to throng about, attend closely." 長老 — 長 read zhǎng; 與 here yǔ ("and").
他卻暗想:「我若把功曹的言語實實告訴師父,師父他不濟事,必就哭了;假若不與他實說,夢著頭,帶著他走,常言道:『乍入蘆圩,不知深淺。』倘或被妖魔撈去,卻不又要老孫費心?
他却暗想:「我若把功曹的言语实实告诉师父,师父他不济事,必就哭了;假若不与他实说,梦著头,带著他走,常言道:『乍入芦圩,不知深浅。』倘或被妖魔捞去,却不又要老孙费心?
But he thought to himself: “If I tell the Master the Merit-Officer’s words plainly, he is of no use — he will surely fall to weeping; yet if I do not tell him, but lead him on muddle-headed, then, as the saying goes, ‘Newly come to the reed-marsh, one knows not its depths’ — should he be snatched off by the fiends, would that not again put Old Sun to trouble?
乍入蘆圩,不知深淺 (zhà rù lú wéi, bù zhī shēn qiǎn), "newly into the reed-marsh, one knows not its depths." 夢著頭 / 帶著他 — 著 durative zhe.
且等我照顧八戒一照顧,先著他出頭與那怪打一仗看。若是打得過他,就算他一功;若是沒手段,被怪拿去,等老孫再去救他不遲,卻好顯我本事出名。」
且等我照顾八戒一照顾,先著他出头与那怪打一仗看。若是打得过他,就算他一功;若是没手段,被怪拿去,等老孙再去救他不迟,却好显我本事出名。」
Better let me take a little care of Eight Rules — set him out first to put his head forward and try a bout with the fiend. If he can beat him, we will count it a merit to his name; and if he has no skill and is carried off by the fiend, it will not be too late for Old Sun to go and rescue him then — and that will nicely show off my own powers and make my name.”
先著他出頭 (xiān zhuó tā chū tóu), "first set him to put his head forward" — causative 著 read zhuó. 那 nà; 打得過 — 得 potential de.
正自家計較,以心問心道:「只恐八戒躲懶,便不肯出頭,師父又有些護短。等老孫羈勒他羈勒。」
正自家计较,以心问心道:「只恐八戒躲懒,便不肯出头,师父又有些护短。等老孙羁勒他羁勒。」
Just as he was reckoning it out with himself, questioning his own heart with his heart, he said: “My only fear is that Eight Rules will shirk and be unwilling to put himself forward, and that the Master, too, is a little apt to shield him. Let Old Sun bridle him a bit.”
護短 (hù duǎn), "to shield another’s faults." 羈勒 (jī lè), "to bridle, rein in" — 勒 read lè (twice).
總評 Commentary
Having dismissed the Merit-Officer, Pilgrim resolves the problem of the master’s fragility with a piece of calculated management. He will not tell the Tang Monk the truth — the master “is of no use” and would only weep — but neither will he lead him blind into danger; instead he devises a test, sending Eight Rules out first to try a bout with the fiend. The soliloquy lays bare a Pilgrim who is at once protector and manipulator.
The scheme is unabashedly self-interested: if Eight Rules prevails, well and good; if he is captured, Pilgrim’s own rescue will “show off my powers and make my name.” The closing aside — his fear that Eight Rules will shirk and the master will shield him, and his resolve to “bridle him a bit” (羈勒) — completes the portrait of the monkey as household strategist, working his companions like pieces on a board.