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第二十四回
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At the Mountain of Ten Thousand Years the Great Immortal Keeps an Old Friend · At the Abbey of the Five Villages Pilgrim Steals the Ginseng-Fruit

八戒聞香
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拼音 Pinyin Off
字體 Script
原文 Original text 繁體 Traditional Reader's edition

八戒聞香 Bajie Gets Wind of It

yuánláiyǒuzhèbānshìlidàofángchúfángjǐnjǐndejiànzhèbiānqiāoqiāodeyánbiān便biàntīngjiànjièzhèngzàichúfángzuòfànxiānqiántīngjiànshuōjīnzidānpánzàixīnyòutīngjiànshuōtángsēngrènshìrénshēnguǒzàifángchīkǒurěnzhùliúxiándào:「zěnerchángxīn?」jiāshēnziyòulángkàngnénggòudòngzhǐděngxíngzhěláijiàozàiguōménqiángèngxīnshāohuǒshídeshēntóutànnǎochūláiguānkànduōshíjiànxíngzhěqiānjiāngláishuānzàihuáishùshàngjìngwǎnghòuzǒudāiziyòngshǒuluànzhāodào:「zhèláizhèlái。」yuánláiyǒuzhèbānshìlidàofángchúfángjǐnjǐndejiànzhèbiānqiāoqiāodeyánbiān便biàntīngjiànjièzhèngzàichúfángzuòfànxiānqiántīngjiànshuōjīnzidānpánzàixīnyòutīngjiànshuōtángsēngrènshìrénshēnguǒzàifángchīkǒurěnzhùliúxiándào:「zěnerchángxīn?」jiāshēnziyòulángkàngnénggòudòngzhǐděngxíngzhěláijiàozàiguōménqiángèngxīnshāohuǒshídeshēntóutànnǎochūláiguānkànduōshíjiànxíngzhěqiānjiāngláishuānzàihuáishùshàngjìngwǎnghòuzǒudāiziyòngshǒuluànzhāodào:「zhèláizhèlái。」


逐句解 Line by line

Ah!

, — a sigh, and here a narrator's aside. The storyteller is leaning in to tell you something the characters do not know.

yuánláiyǒuzhèbānshìli yuánláiyǒuzhèbānshìli

It so fell out that things went like this.

原來, yuán lái, "as it turns out" — the formula that introduces a fact the audience has been missing.

dàofángchúfángjǐnjǐndejiànzhèbiānqiāoqiāodeyánbiān便biàntīngjiàn dàofángchúfángjǐnjǐndejiànzhèbiānqiāoqiāodeyánbiān便biàntīngjiàn

Their Daoist quarters and the kitchen shared a wall right up against each other, so that soft words spoken on the one side were heard at once on the other.

And here it is: the two rooms share a wall. 間壁 takes as jiàn, "separated by a partition, next door" — the 隔壁 sense, distinct from the jiān of "between" or "amid" that turns up later at the ginseng tree. A whispered conversation on one side is audible on the other. The entire plot rests on a piece of building work.

jièzhèngzàichúfángzuòfànxiānqiántīngjiànshuōjīnzidānpánzàixīnyòutīngjiànshuōtángsēngrènshìrénshēnguǒzàifángchī jièzhèngzàichúfángzuòfànxiānqiántīngjiànshuōjīnzidānpánzàixīnyòutīngjiànshuōtángsēngrènshìrénshēnguǒzàifángchī

Bajie, at that moment cooking in the kitchen, had earlier heard talk of taking the golden striker and the cinnabar tray, and had marked it well; and now he heard them say that the Tang Monk had not known it for the ginseng-fruit, so they had carried it off to their room to eat themselves.

Bājiè has been assembling the picture in fragments. First the striker and the tray, which he filed away; now the news that the monk did not recognise the fruit and the boys have taken it off to eat themselves. 已在心, he had taken note.

kǒurěnzhùliúxiándào:「zěnerchángxīn?」 kǒurěnzhùliúxiándào:「zěnerchángxīn?」

His mouth watering past all restraint, he said, "How am I to get one to taste?"

流涎, liú xián, to drool. 嘗新, cháng xīn, to have a taste of something new — the phrase used of first-of-the-season produce, which is a nicely inappropriate register for a fruit that comes round once a millennium. 怎得 takes as .

jiāshēnziyòulángkàngnénggòudòngzhǐděngxíngzhěláijiào jiāshēnziyòulángkàngnénggòudòngzhǐděngxíngzhěláijiào

His own body being clumsy and unwieldy, he could not stir to it, and could only wait for Pilgrim to come and scheme with him.

His obstacle is his own body. 狼犺, láng kàng, is a lovely piece of vernacular for bulky and ungainly — he is too big to sneak anywhere. So he needs an accomplice with a lighter tread. 計較, jì jiào, to plot, to work something out together.

zàiguōménqiángèngxīnshāohuǒshídeshēntóutànnǎochūláiguānkàn zàiguōménqiángèngxīnshāohuǒshídeshēntóutànnǎochūláiguānkàn

Before the stove-mouth he had no more heart for the fire, but kept craning his neck and peering out to look.

He abandons the fire, which is a small betrayal of the one job he was given. 伸頭探腦, shēn tóu tàn nǎo, craning and peering — a stock four-character phrase for furtive looking. 觀看 takes the verb guān, held apart here from the temple-noun guàn.

duōshíjiànxíngzhěqiānjiāngláishuānzàihuáishùshàngjìngwǎnghòuzǒu duōshíjiànxíngzhěqiānjiāngláishuānzàihuáishùshàngjìngwǎnghòuzǒu

Before long he saw Pilgrim leading the horse up; he tied it to a locust tree and went straight round to the back.

牽將 takes as jiāng, a directional particle — "leading it along." 槐樹, the pagoda locust, a common courtyard tree.

dāiziyòngshǒuluànzhāodào:「zhèláizhèlái。」 dāiziyòngshǒuluànzhāodào:「zhèláizhèlái。」

The blockhead beckoned wildly with his hand: "Over here! Over here!"

亂招, luàn zhāo, beckoning frantically. Not a subtle conspirator.


總評 Commentary

A narrator's sigh — , "Ah!" — opens the mischief, and then explains it in one sentence of architecture: the boys' room and the kitchen share a wall, close enough that a whisper on one side carries to the other. The entire disaster of this chapter descends from a piece of building work.

Bājiè, cooking on the other side, has been assembling the story in fragments. First the talk of a golden striker and a cinnabar tray, which he filed away without knowing what it meant. Then the news that the monk did not recognise the fruit, and that the boys had carried it off to eat themselves. By the time he has the whole picture his mouth is watering and he has stopped tending the fire.

What stops him acting is his own body — 狼犺, too bulky and ungainly to sneak anywhere. So he needs somebody quick, and he cranes out of the kitchen door until the quick one comes past. The passage is a small masterclass in vernacular texture: drooling, craning, peering, beckoning wildly with both hands.