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南柯誓願
The Fabricated Dream
公主道:「郎君啊,我才時睡在羅幃之內,夢魂中,忽見個金甲神人。」妖魔道:「那個金甲神?上我門怎的?」公主道:「是我幼時在宮內,對人暗許下一樁心願:若得招個賢郎駙馬,上名山,拜仙府,齋僧佈施。自從配了你,夫妻們歡會,到今不曾題起。那金甲神人來討誓願,喝我醒來,卻是南柯一夢。因此,急整容來郎君處訴知,不期那樁上綁著一個僧人。萬望郎君慈憫,看我薄意,饒了那個和尚罷,只當與我齋僧還願。不知郎君肯否?」那怪道:「渾家,你卻多心吶,甚麼打緊之事。我要吃人,那裡不撈幾個吃吃,這個把和尚到得那裡?放他去罷。」公主道:「郎君啊,我才时睡在罗帏之内,梦魂中,忽见个金甲神人。」妖魔道:「那个金甲神?上我门怎的?」公主道:「是我幼时在宫内,对人暗许下一桩心愿:若得招个贤郎驸马,上名山,拜仙府,斋僧布施。自从配了你,夫妻们欢会,到今不曾题起。那金甲神人来讨誓愿,喝我醒来,却是南柯一梦。因此,急整容来郎君处诉知,不期那桩上绑著一个僧人。万望郎君慈悯,看我薄意,饶了那个和尚罢,只当与我斋僧还愿。不知郎君肯否?」那怪道:「浑家,你却多心呐,甚么打紧之事。我要吃人,那里不捞几个吃吃,这个把和尚到得那里?放他去罢。」
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公主道:「郎君啊,我才時睡在羅幃之內,夢魂中,忽見個金甲神人。」
公主道:「郎君啊,我才时睡在罗帏之内,梦魂中,忽见个金甲神人。」
Said the princess, 'My lord — just now, as I slept within the gauze bed-curtains, in the very soul of my dream, I suddenly beheld a spirit in golden armor.'
才時 = "just now"; 羅幃 = "the gauze [bed-]curtains." 夢魂中 (中 = zhōng) — "in the depth of dream." The 金甲神人 ("golden-armored divine man") is her invention, a pretext to move the ogre to piety. 郎君 is a wife's affectionate address to her husband.
妖魔道:「那個金甲神?上我門怎的?」
妖魔道:「那个金甲神?上我门怎的?」
Said the fiend, 'That golden-armored god? What did it come to my door for?'
The ogre picks up her figure with an anaphoric 那個 ("that [one you speak of]," nà) and a blunt question. His curiosity is the opening her stratagem needs.
公主道:「是我幼時在宮內,對人暗許下一樁心願:若得招個賢郎駙馬,上名山,拜仙府,齋僧佈施。自從配了你,夫妻們歡會,到今不曾題起。那金甲神人來討誓願,喝我醒來,卻是南柯一夢。因此,急整容來郎君處訴知,不期那樁上綁著一個僧人。萬望郎君慈憫,看我薄意,饒了那個和尚罷,只當與我齋僧還願。不知郎君肯否?」
公主道:「是我幼时在宫内,对人暗许下一桩心愿:若得招个贤郎驸马,上名山,拜仙府,斋僧布施。自从配了你,夫妻们欢会,到今不曾题起。那金甲神人来讨誓愿,喝我醒来,却是南柯一梦。因此,急整容来郎君处诉知,不期那桩上绑著一个僧人。万望郎君慈悯,看我薄意,饶了那个和尚罢,只当与我斋僧还愿。不知郎君肯否?」
Said the princess, 'When I was a girl in the palace, I secretly vowed a vow to Heaven: that should I win a worthy husband and consort, I would go up to the famous mountains, do reverence at the abbeys of the immortals, and feast the monks and give alms. Since I was matched with you, in the pleasures of our union, I have never once spoken of it to this day. That golden-armored spirit came to demand the vow of me, and startled me awake with a shout — and it was but a Dream of the Southern Bough. And so I hastened, my dress scarce ordered, to my lord's chamber to tell of it — little thinking that a monk stood bound there at the post. I beg my lord's compassion: for the sake of my poor good will, spare that monk, and let it stand for the feasting of monks and the redeeming of my vow. Does my lord consent, or no?'
The speech is a sustained fabrication. 許下心願 / 討誓願 / 還願 turn on the language of vows (還 = huán, "to redeem [a vow]"). 若得招 takes 得 as dé ("get to win"); 賢郎駙馬 = "a worthy husband, an imperial son-in-law." 南柯一夢 ("a Dream of the Southern Bough") alludes to the Tang tale of Chunyu Fen's illusory lifetime within an anthill — a byword for the vanity of dreams. 薄意 (薄 = bó) = "slight good will," a humble self-reference. Her petition recasts the captive monk as an object of merit-making.
那怪道:「渾家,你卻多心吶,甚麼打緊之事。我要吃人,那裡不撈幾個吃吃,這個把和尚到得那裡?放他去罷。」
那怪道:「浑家,你却多心呐,甚么打紧之事。我要吃人,那里不捞几个吃吃,这个把和尚到得那里?放他去罢。」
Said the fiend, 'Wife, you are making too much of it — what pressing matter is this? If I want to eat men, where could I not scoop up a few to eat? What does this one monk amount to? Let him go, then.'
多心 = "to be over-suspicious, to fret needlessly." The two 那裡 here are rhetorical (nǎ, "where / anywhere"): 那裡不撈幾個 = "where could I not grab a few," and 到得那裡 = "amounts to what" (得 the structural de). The ogre's careless magnanimity, born of surfeit, seals Tripitaka's release.
總評 Commentary
The fabricated dream is a small masterpiece of strategic piety. The princess invents a maiden's vow — mountains, immortals' shrines, the feasting of monks — never fulfilled since her marriage, and a golden-armored spirit who has come in the night to call the debt due; the whole apparatus is designed so that mercy toward the bound monk can be presented not as sympathy for a stranger but as the settling of the ogre's own household's account with Heaven. She even reaches for a literary sanction, glossing her invention as 南柯一夢, the Tang byword for the emptiness of dreams, which both authenticates the vision and disclaims it.
The irony the passage delivers is that her artistry is almost superfluous. The ogre consents, but not for the reasons she has so carefully manufactured: he waves the petition away out of sheer surfeit — if he wants to eat men he can seize them anywhere, and one monk is beneath notice. It is appetite, not piety, that saves Tripitaka; the monster's very grossness, his careless plenty, does the work the princess's delicate fiction was meant to do. The novel thus lets the rescue succeed while quietly puncturing the pretense that dresses it.