快早關門 Shut The Doors Shut The Doors
那頭目中有知道的報:「大王,門外小妖已都散了。」老魔道:「怎麼都散了?想是聞得風聲不好也。快早關門,快早關門。」眾妖乒乓把前後門盡皆牢拴緊閉。那头目中有知道的报:「大王,门外小妖已都散了。」老魔道:「怎么都散了?想是闻得风声不好也。快早关门,快早关门。」众妖乒乓把前后门尽皆牢拴紧闭。
逐句解 Line by line
One of the officers who knew reported, "Great King, the little fiends outside have already scattered."
They scattered in the previous chapter, when Wukong first told the pole-grinding story to the outer guard. The chiefs are only now finding out, which tells you how badly their own chain of command is working.
The old fiend said, "What do you mean, all scattered?
The first crack. He is no longer asking about the enemy, he is asking about his own people.
I suppose they got wind of it and thought it looked bad.
聞得 keeps 得 at the full dé — after a verb of perception it is the solid verb, not the light particle, and the sealed chapters have it that way eleven times. 風聲, wind-sound, is still ordinary Chinese for a rumour, so getting wind of something is the same metaphor in both languages.
Shut the doors, quick, shut the doors!"
Said twice, which is the book's way of writing panic. Everything the chiefs do from here is defensive, and every defensive move they make is one Wukong wanted them to make.
With a clatter and a bang the demons bolted and barred every door, front and back.
乒乓 pīng pāng is pure noise — two characters invented to sound like banging, and the same pair that later gave Chinese its name for table tennis.
The chapter has a shape and this is where it becomes visible. Wukong walked in through an open door. He has now talked the demons into locking it behind him. Everything he gains in this scene costs him the way out.
It is worth noticing that he did not plan this. He came in to gather intelligence and told a story that worked too well, and the next four passages are him improvising his way back out of a trap he built himself.