滿天星月 Stars And Moon Fill The Sky
三藏師徒們吃了齋,漸漸天昏。只見那枷鎖的和尚拿了兩把笤帚進來,三藏甚喜。正說處,一個小和尚點了燈來請洗澡。此時滿天星月光輝,譙樓上更鼓齊發。三藏师徒们吃了斋,渐渐天昏。只见那枷锁的和尚拿了两把笤帚进来,三藏甚喜。正说处,一个小和尚点了灯来请洗澡。此时满天星月光辉,谯楼上更鼓齐发。
逐句解 Line by line
Tripitaka and his disciples ate their meal, and little by little the sky darkened.
漸漸 is a doubled frame and keeps full tones at both syllables. The sentence does the work of a scene division: the meal ends and the light goes.
Then the monks in the cangues came in carrying two brooms, and Tripitaka was very pleased.
甚 is the intensifier here, shèn, very pleased — against 甚時分 thirteen segments earlier, where the same character asks a question. Two brooms, because Pilgrim is going up too.
Just as they were speaking, a young monk brought a lamp and asked him to come and bathe.
正說處 is the other 處: the chù of a place, borrowed to mean a moment — at the point where they were speaking. It stands fifteen segments from 如何處之, where the same character is a verb and takes chǔ.
By now the sky was full of the light of stars and moon, and from the watchtower the drums of the night-watch sounded together.
譙樓 is the drum-tower over a city gate, and 更鼓 the drum that marks the night-watches; 更 takes gēng in that sense and not the gèng of comparison. The line is the chapter turning from afternoon into night.
Four short sentences move the chapter from a meal to full dark, and each one puts an object in place for what follows: the brooms, the lamp, the bath, the stars. Nothing is described at length and nothing is wasted.
The arrangement is one the novel has used before, with this same temple in it. In the thirteenth chapter Tripitaka reached 法門寺 on his second day out of Chang'an, the meal was eaten, the evening came on unnoticed, and a poem about starlight and a clear moon followed under the very formula that is about to introduce the poem here. He named that temple three passages back.