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暮春便道省親
Homeward in Late Spring
正是暮春天氣,正是暮春天气,
和風吹柳綠,和风吹柳绿,
細雨點花紅。细雨点花红。
光蕊便道回家,同妻交拜母親張氏。張氏道:「恭喜我兒,且又娶親回來。」光蕊道:「孩兒叨賴母親福庇,忝中狀元,欽賜遊街,經過丞相殷府門前,遇拋打繡毬適中,蒙丞相即將小姐招孩兒為婿。朝廷除孩兒為江州州主,今來接取母親,同去赴任。」張氏大喜,收拾行程。光蕊便道回家,同妻交拜母亲张氏。张氏道:「恭喜我儿,且又娶亲回来。」光蕊道:「孩儿叨赖母亲福庇,忝中状元,钦赐游街,经过丞相殷府门前,遇抛打绣毬适中,蒙丞相即将小姐招孩儿为婿。朝廷除孩儿为江州州主,今来接取母亲,同去赴任。」张氏大喜,收拾行程。
逐句解 Line by line
正是暮春天氣,
正是暮春天气,
It was just the season of late spring —
正是 introduces the seasonal couplet that follows.
和風吹柳綠,
和风吹柳绿,
A mild breeze blows the willows green,
A parallel couplet: 和風/細雨, 吹/點, 柳綠/花紅 answer one another word for word — the stock 暮春 (late-spring) tableau, a moment of ease before disaster.
細雨點花紅。
细雨点花红。
fine rain flecks the blossoms red.
The second line completes the parallel, 點 ('to dot, fleck') set against 吹 ('to blow').
光蕊便道回家,同妻交拜母親張氏。
光蕊便道回家,同妻交拜母亲张氏。
Guangrui turned homeward by the way, and with his wife made the bow to his mother, Madam Zhang.
便道, 'taking the route, by way of'; the bride is presented to her mother-in-law.
張氏道:「恭喜我兒,且又娶親回來。」
张氏道:「恭喜我儿,且又娶亲回来。」
Madam Zhang said, 'Congratulations, my son — and you have brought home a bride besides.'
娶親, to take a wife.
光蕊道:「孩兒叨賴母親福庇,忝中狀元,欽賜遊街,經過丞相殷府門前,遇拋打繡毬適中,
光蕊道:「孩儿叨赖母亲福庇,忝中状元,钦赐游街,经过丞相殷府门前,遇抛打绣毬适中,
Guangrui said, 'Thanks to my mother's sheltering blessing, your son has unworthily taken first place and was granted the procession through the streets; passing before the gate of Chancellor Yin's residence, I chanced to be struck square by her thrown embroidered ball,
叨賴 ('to owe undeservedly,' 叨 = tāo) and 忝中 ('to take, to one's disgrace,' 忝 = tiǎn) are humble formulas; 中 is zhòng in both 忝中 and 適中. 相 in 丞相 reads xiàng.
蒙丞相即將小姐招孩兒為婿。
蒙丞相即将小姐招孩儿为婿。
whereupon the Chancellor at once gave his daughter to take your son for a husband.'
為婿, 'as son-in-law' — 為 is wéi; 相 reads xiàng.
朝廷除孩兒為江州州主,今來接取母親,同去赴任。」
朝廷除孩儿为江州州主,今来接取母亲,同去赴任。」
'The court has made your son Governor of Jiangzhou, and I have now come to fetch you, that you may go with us to take up the post.'
為江州州主, 'as Governor of Jiangzhou' — 為 is wéi.
張氏大喜,收拾行程。
张氏大喜,收拾行程。
Madam Zhang was overjoyed and made ready for the journey.
行程, the journey; 行 is xíng.
總評 Commentary
The chapter's one verse moment is a slight seasonal couplet — 和風吹柳綠,細雨點花紅 — the stock 暮春 tableau that frames the homecoming with deceptive calm. Guangrui's report to his mother is a small exercise in filial courtesy: every success is credited to her — 叨賴母親福庇, 'thanks to my mother's sheltering blessing' — and turned into the occasion for fetching her along to his post. The verb 叨 (here tāo) is self-deprecating, 'to receive what one does not deserve'; 忝 (tiǎn) works the same humble register about the 狀元 title. The warmth of the scene is exactly what the next two passages will undo.