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含詞賦 With rhapsody
空中望城
Surveying the City from the Air
不多時,東方發白。行者又吩咐了八戒、沙僧,教他兩個:「不可攪擾僧人,出來亂走。待我成功之後,共汝等同行。」才別了,唿哨,一觔斗,跳在空中。睜火眼平西看處,果見有一座城池。你道怎麼就看見了?當時說那城池離寺只有四十里,故此憑高就望見了。行者近前仔細看處,又見那怪霧愁雲漠漠,妖風怨氣紛紛。行者在空中讚嘆道:不多时,东方发白。行者又吩咐了八戒、沙僧,教他两个:「不可搅扰僧人,出来乱走。待我成功之后,共汝等同行。」才别了,唿哨,一觔斗,跳在空中。睁火眼平西看处,果见有一座城池。你道怎么就看见了?当时说那城池离寺只有四十里,故此凭高就望见了。行者近前仔细看处,又见那怪雾愁云漠漠,妖风怨气纷纷。行者在空中赞叹道:
「若是真王登寶座,自有祥光五色雲。「若是真王登宝座,自有祥光五色云。
只因妖怪侵龍位,騰騰黑氣鎖金門。」只因妖怪侵龙位,腾腾黑气锁金门。」
逐句解 Line by line
不多時,東方發白。
不多时,东方发白。
In a little while, the east grew white.
東方發白 (dōng fāng fā bái) "the east grew light," i.e. dawn.
行者又吩咐了八戒、沙僧,教他兩個:「不可攪擾僧人,出來亂走。
行者又吩咐了八戒、沙僧,教他两个:「不可搅扰僧人,出来乱走。
Pilgrim once more charged Bajie and Sha Seng, bidding the two of them: “Do not disturb the monks, nor go running about outside.
吩咐了 (fēn fù le) "gave charge," le; 教他兩個 (jiào tā liǎng gè) "bade the two of them," causative 教 = jiào; 攪擾 (jiǎo rǎo) "to disturb."
待我成功之後,共汝等同行。」
待我成功之后,共汝等同行。」
Wait till I have succeeded, and I will go on together with you all.”
同行 (tóng xíng) "to travel together," 行 = xíng.
才別了,唿哨,一觔斗,跳在空中。
才别了,唿哨,一觔斗,跳在空中。
Just then he took his leave, gave a whistle, and with one somersault sprang into the air.
一觔斗 (yì jīn dǒu) "one somersault," 斗 = dǒu; 空中 (kōng zhōng) "in the air," zhōng; 唿哨 (hū shào) "a whistle."
睜火眼平西看處,果見有一座城池。
睁火眼平西看处,果见有一座城池。
Opening his fiery eyes and looking level toward the west, he did indeed see a walled city.
睜火眼 (zhēng huǒ yǎn) "opening the fiery eyes" (Wukong’s fire-eyes golden-pupils); 一座 (yí zuò) "one," by sandhi.
你道怎麼就看見了?
你道怎么就看见了?
You ask how he could see it just so?
怎麼就 (zěn me jiù) "how, just then."
當時說那城池離寺只有四十里,故此憑高就望見了。
当时说那城池离寺只有四十里,故此凭高就望见了。
In those days it was said the city lay but forty li from the temple, and so, from his height, he glimpsed it at once.
當時 (dāng shí) "at that time," 當 = dāng; 那城池 (nà chéng chí) deictic nà; 四十里 (sì shí lǐ), li a Chinese unit of distance.
行者近前仔細看處,又見那怪霧愁雲漠漠,妖風怨氣紛紛。
行者近前仔细看处,又见那怪雾愁云漠漠,妖风怨气纷纷。
Pilgrim drew near and looked carefully, and again he saw that fiendish mist and mournful cloud lay thick, that a demon wind and rancorous vapor swirled.
仔細 (zǐ xì) "carefully," 仔 = zǐ; 那怪霧 (nà guài wù) deictic nà; 漠漠 (mò mò) "spreading thick."
行者在空中讚嘆道:
行者在空中赞叹道:
Pilgrim, up in the air, gave voice to praise:
空中 (kōng zhōng) "in the air," zhōng; 讚嘆 (zàn tàn) "to sigh in praise," the lead-in to the embedded verse.
「若是真王登寶座,自有祥光五色雲。
「若是真王登宝座,自有祥光五色云。
If a true king mounts the throne of treasure, of itself there is auspicious light and five-colored cloud;
寶座 (bǎo zuò) "the throne"; 祥光 (xiáng guāng) "auspicious radiance"; 五色雲 (wǔ sè yún) "five-colored clouds," an omen of rightful rule.
只因妖怪侵龍位,騰騰黑氣鎖金門。」
只因妖怪侵龙位,腾腾黑气锁金门。」
only because a fiend has usurped the dragon-seat, roiling black vapors lock the golden gate.
龍位 (lóng wèi) "the dragon-throne"; 騰騰 (téng téng) "rising, roiling"; 鎖金門 (suǒ jīn mén) "lock the golden gate."
總評 Commentary
The scene shifts to Wukong’s aerial reconnaissance, with the fine fantastic detail of his fire-eyes golden-pupils catching the city forty li off from his height. What he sees is not a capital at peace but one shrouded in fiend-mist and demon-wind — the visible corruption of a usurped throne.
The ominous aura, rendered first in prose, is then crystallized in a quatrain that states the chapter’s cosmological premise outright: a true king draws auspicious light and five-colored cloud, while a usurping fiend brings roiling black vapors that “lock the golden gate.” The sky itself reads out the throne’s illegitimacy, and Wukong reads the sky.