度人成仙 Offering to Lead Them to Immortality
行者道:「我不怪你。常言道:『仙體不踏凡地。』你怎知之?我今日到你山上,要度一個成仙了道的好人。那個肯跟我去?」精細鬼道:「師父,我跟你去。」伶俐蟲道:「師父,我跟你去。」行者道:「我不怪你。常言道:『仙体不踏凡地。』你怎知之?我今日到你山上,要度一个成仙了道的好人。那个肯跟我去?」精细鬼道:「师父,我跟你去。」伶俐虫道:「师父,我跟你去。」
逐句解 Line by line
Pilgrim said: "I don't blame you. As the saying goes, 'An immortal's body treads no common ground' — so how were you to know?
仙體不踏凡地 (xiān tǐ bù tà fán dì), "an immortal's body does not tread common ground," is quoted as a saying, which the edition marks by enclosing it. Pilgrim produces it to excuse their blindness, and in doing so polishes his own halo one more time.
"Today I've come to your mountain to deliver some worthy soul to immortality and the completion of the Way. Which of you will come with me?"
度 (dù) is to carry someone across -- the standard Buddhist and Daoist word for delivering a soul, from the image of ferrying it over water. 成仙了道 (chéng xiān liǎo dào), "become an immortal and finish the Way," with 了 read liǎo, "to complete." 那個 is the question-word nǎ, "which of you."
Fine-and-Keen said: "Master, I'll come with you."
師父 (shī fu), "master." The moment the imp uses that word he has changed sides without noticing, and the whole con is downhill from here.
Clever-Bug said: "Master, I'll come with you."
Both volunteer, in identical words, instantly. Fine-and-Keen and Clever-Bug, whose names the storyteller chose eleven passages ago precisely so that he could do this to them.
Pilgrim finishes the seduction by dangling a prize. Having excused their rudeness with a well-chosen proverb, he offers precisely what a demon's servant might covet -- delivery to immortality and completion of the Way. The pitch is shrewdly aimed, working on greed and on their brand-new reverence at the same time, and it costs him nothing to promise.
Both volunteer at once, in the same words, and the joke is at the expense of their names: Fine-and-Keen and Clever-Bug, neither fine enough nor clever enough to smell it. The scene completes their journey from armed emissaries to fawning students, and puts Pilgrim in position to draw out, in the next passage, the very information the demons meant to use to kill him.