再戰無功 The Second Stalemate
二人整鬥有兩個時辰,不分勝敗。這才是銅盆逢鐵帚,玉磬對金鐘。卻說那大聖保著唐僧,立於左右,眼巴巴的望著他兩個在水上爭持,只是他不好動手。只見那八戒虛幌一鈀,佯輸詐敗,轉回頭往東岸上走。那怪隨後趕來,將近到了岸邊。這行者忍耐不住,撇了師父,掣鐵棒,跳到河邊,望妖精劈頭就打。那妖物不敢相迎,颼的又鑽入河內。八戒嚷道:「你這弼馬溫,徹是個急猴子!你再緩緩些兒,等我哄他到了高處,你卻阻住河邊,教他不能回首啊,卻不拿住他也?他這進去,幾時又肯出來?」行者笑道:「獃子,莫嚷,莫嚷。我們且回去見師父去來。」二人整斗有两个时辰,不分胜败。这才是铜盆逢铁帚,玉磬对金钟。却说那大圣保著唐僧,立于左右,眼巴巴的望著他两个在水上争持,只是他不好动手。只见那八戒虚幌一钯,佯输诈败,转回头往东岸上走。那怪随后赶来,将近到了岸边。这行者忍耐不住,撇了师父,掣铁棒,跳到河边,望妖精劈头就打。那妖物不敢相迎,飕的又钻入河内。八戒嚷道:「你这弼马温,彻是个急猴子!你再缓缓些儿,等我哄他到了高处,你却阻住河边,教他不能回首啊,却不拿住他也?他这进去,几时又肯出来?」行者笑道:「呆子,莫嚷,莫嚷。我们且回去见师父去来。」
逐句解 Line by line
The two fought a full two watches without either gaining the day. It was, in truth, a bronze basin meeting an iron broom, a jade chime answering a golden bell.
兩個時辰 ('two double-hours,' some four hours) and 不分勝敗 ('victory undecided'; 分 fēn). The paired similes 銅盆逢鐵帚…玉磬對金鐘 ('bronze basin against iron broom, jade chime against golden bell') figure two evenly matched, resounding adversaries.
Now the Great Sage, guarding the Tang Monk and standing close at his side, watched with staring eyes as the two contended upon the water,
保著…望著 ('guarding … watching'; 著 zhe, durative in both). 眼巴巴的 ('with fixed, longing eyes') again catches the monkey's itch to be in the fight he is barred from.
only he could not well lend a hand. Then he saw Bajie feint with his rake, make a show of losing, turn tail and head for the eastern bank.
虛幌一鈀 ('a feint with the rake'; 鈀 pá) and 佯輸詐敗 ('feigning defeat, shamming a rout') — Bajie executes the ruse the monkey set: lose on purpose and draw the demon ashore.
The monster came chasing after, and had all but reached the bank,
將近到了岸邊 ('was nearing the bank'; 將 jiāng, 'about to'). The bait works — the demon is drawn to the very edge, where the monkey lies in wait.
when the Pilgrim, unable to hold back, left the master, drew his iron rod, sprang to the riverside, and struck straight down at the monster's head.
忍耐不住 ('unable to contain himself') — the very impatience that spoiled the first duel undoes the ruse again: the monkey strikes too soon, before the demon is fully ashore.
The fiend dared not stand and meet him, and with a whoosh dived once more into the river.
不敢相迎 ('dared not close with him'; 相 xiāng). 颼的 ('with a rush, a whoosh') and 又鑽入河內 ('bored again into the river') — the same futile pattern repeats, the demon safely back in the water.
Bajie bawled: 'You Ban-Horse-Plague, you're an out-and-out impatient monkey! If you'd only hold off a bit longer,
弼馬溫 ('Ban-Horse-Plague') is the demeaning title the monkey was once fobbed off with in Heaven, now Bajie's taunt; 急猴子 ('hot-headed monkey') names the fault exactly.
'wait till I've lured him up to high ground, then bar the riverside so he can't turn back — wouldn't we have him then?'
哄他到了高處 ('coax him up to the heights') and 阻住河邊 ('block the riverbank'; 教 jiào, the causative) — Bajie proposes the obvious correction: cut off the demon's retreat before striking.
'Now that he's gone back in, when will he ever be willing to come out again?'
幾時又肯出來 ('when will he agree to come out?') states the impasse plainly: each premature blow only drives the demon deeper into the one place he cannot be reached.
The Pilgrim said with a laugh: 'Idiot, stop your bawling, stop your bawling. Let's go back and see the master for now.'
獃子 ('Idiot,' 子 zi) is the monkey's habitual name for Bajie. His breezy 莫嚷 ('don't shout') brushes off the complaint and turns the pair back to Sanzang, the stalemate unbroken.
The second duel, four hours long, ends as the first did — a dead heat, figured in the ringing similes of bronze basin and iron broom, jade chime and golden bell. The narrative's interest lies less in the fight than in the Great Sage on the bank, once more reduced to a spectator 'with staring eyes,' unable to join. The ruse he devised does begin to work: Bajie feigns defeat and draws the demon almost ashore.
But the monkey's besetting fault undoes it. Exactly as before, he cannot 'hold back,' leaves the master, and strikes too soon — before the demon is clear of the water — so that the fiend dives away untouched. Bajie's exasperated taunt, 急猴子 ('hot-headed monkey'), and his sensible proposal to cut off the retreat first, name both the problem and its remedy; but the monkey only laughs it off. The repetition is deliberate: the pilgrims' own strengths — the monkey's eagerness for a fight — are precisely what keep the barrier in place, and the impasse can be broken only from outside.