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大膽攙越
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大膽攙越 The Duke Answers In Kind

四sì老lǎo聽tīng畢bì,俱jù極jí讚zàn揚yáng。十shí八bā公gōng道dào:「老lǎo拙zhuō無wú能néng,大dà膽dǎn攙chān越yuè,也yě勉miǎn和hè一yì首shǒu。」四sì老lǎo听tīng毕bì,俱jù极jí赞zàn扬yáng。十shí八bā公gōng道dào:「老lǎo拙zhuō无wú能néng,大dà胆dǎn搀chān越yuè,也yě勉miǎn和hè一yì首shǒu。」


逐句解 Line by line

四sì老lǎo聽tīng畢bì,俱jù極jí讚zàn揚yáng。 四sì老lǎo听tīng毕bì,俱jù极jí赞zàn扬yáng。

The four old men heard it out and praised it to the skies.

Eight characters of narration, and therefore outside the showcase that follows: a showcase may hold prose that builds its verse, but not prose that tells the story.

十shí八bā公gōng道dào:「老lǎo拙zhuō無wú能néng,大dà膽dǎn攙chān越yuè,也yě勉miǎn和hè一yì首shǒu。」 十shí八bā公gōng道dào:「老lǎo拙zhuō无wú能néng,大dà胆dǎn搀chān越yuè,也yě勉miǎn和hè一yì首shǒu。」

The Eighteenth Duke said, "This old dullard has no ability, but makes bold to push in ahead and will venture an answering piece of his own."

和 is again hè, to answer a poem in its own rhyme. 攙越 is cutting in out of turn, and the apology is pure form: he is the host and takes the first answer as of right.


總評 Commentary

Two segments of connective tissue, and they are worth separating out because the first of them is narration. The four old men heard it and praised it: that is the storyteller reporting, not a contributor negotiating, and prose of that kind stays outside a showcase however close it sits to the verse.

The Eighteenth Duke's apology for cutting in ahead of the others is pure form. He is the host, he is the one who carried Tripitaka here, and the answering poems will go round in the same order the first ones did.