火眼金睛,為風所傷 The Fiery Eyes Are Blinded
那妖怪使出這陣狂風,就把孫大聖毫毛變的小行者刮得在那半空中卻似紡車兒一般亂轉,莫想掄得棒,如何攏得身?慌得行者將毫毛一抖,收上身來。獨自個舉著鐵棒,上前來打。又被那怪劈臉噴了一口黃風,把兩隻火眼金睛刮得緊緊閉合,莫能睜開。因此難使鐵棒,遂敗下陣來。那妖收風回洞不題。那妖怪使出这阵狂风,就把孙大圣毫毛变的小行者刮得在那半空中却似纺车儿一般乱转,莫想抡得棒,如何拢得身?慌得行者将毫毛一抖,收上身来。独自个举着铁棒,上前来打。又被那怪劈脸喷了一口黄风,把两只火眼金睛刮得紧紧闭合,莫能睁开。因此难使铁棒,遂败下阵来。那妖收风回洞不题。
逐句解 Line by line
The fiend loosed this mad gale, and it whirled the little Pilgrims that the Great Sage's hairs had become round and round in the middle air, for all the world like so many spinning-wheels;
刮得 takes de, the little hinge that hangs a result off a verb. 似 is corrected to sì, and 紡車兒 ends in the small er suffix. The picture is domestic and faintly absurd: a hundred Great Sages spinning in mid-air like the wheels of a household loom.
not one of them could manage to swing his rod, and how were they to gather their bodies together? In alarm the Pilgrim gave his hairs a shake and drew them back onto his body.
Three 得 in one line and two readings between them, so the site needs a positional fixspec: 掄得棒 and 攏得身 are the "could manage to" sense (dé), while 慌得 is the result-hanging de. 將 is jiāng, the marker that sets up the object about to be dealt with.
Alone now, he lifted his iron rod and went forward to strike.
獨自個 is the vernacular "all on his own," and 著 is zhe. The hundred have become one again, and the whole sentence runs eleven characters.
But the fiend blew a mouthful of yellow wind full in his face, and it scoured his two fiery eyes with golden pupils until they were shut fast and could not be opened.
This is the moment the chapter has been built toward. 火眼金睛, the fiery eyes with golden pupils, were baked into him over forty-nine days in Laozi's crucible in chapter 7, and they have never once failed him — they are the eyes that see through every disguise. A mouthful of wind shuts them.
He could not wield the iron rod after that, and so he fell back from the field. The fiend gathered in his wind and returned to his cave, of which no more.
不題, "of which no more," is the storyteller putting a thread down on the table to pick up later. 難 is nán, "hard to," shading here into "could not at all."
The chapter's first movement ends in defeat, and the defeat is very specific. The Pilgrim is not overpowered. He is blinded. 火眼金睛 — the eyes that see through every disguise, the one thing he got out of forty-nine days in the eight-trigram crucible — are shut by a mouthful of wind. Everything that follows in this chapter is a consequence of it: the hunt for an eye-doctor, the ointment applied by night, and the change into a mosquito, of all creatures, that needs its senses more than any other.
There is a structural joke here too. The Pilgrim's answer to being outmatched is always multiplication: a hundred bodies, a hundred rods. The wind answers multiplication with dispersal, and the hairs have to be shaken back onto the single body they were pulled from. He then advances alone and is beaten in one line. The novel is quietly making the point that 身外身 is a trick of quantity, and quantity is not what this adversary is short of.