醉臥江山 Drunk Amid Rivers and Hills
漁翁道:「你山青真個不如我的水秀。又有《天仙子》一首:渔翁道:「你山青真个不如我的水秀。又有《天仙子》一首:
樵子道:「你水秀還不如我的山青。也有《天仙子》一首:樵子道:「你水秀还不如我的山青。也有《天仙子》一首:
逐句解 Line by line
The fisherman said: 'Your green hills are truly no match for my clear waters. I have besides a lyric to the tune Immortal of the Skies:'
真個 is a colloquial 'truly, really,' the spoken register showing through the literary one. 《天仙子》 (Tiānxiānzǐ) is a 詞牌 named for a sky-immortal, and in tune-titles the 子 keeps its full reading zǐ, as it does in 《更漏子》 and 《采桑子》. 一首 is 'one piece.'
A single leaf of a boat lodges wherever it will; amid ten thousand folds of misty wave I know no fear.
一葉小舟, 'a one-leaf skiff,' is the oldest image there is for a tiny boat on huge water. 隨所寓 is to settle wherever chance sets you down, and 萬疊 is 'ten-thousand-layered.'
Dropping the hook, casting the net, I take the fresh-scaled catch; no rich sauces, yet all the more savory for that — my old wife and little ones gathered round in a circle of content.
The boast is that plain cooking tastes better. 沒醬膩 is 'no greasy sauce,' 偏有味 'and all the more flavor for it.' In 稚子 the 子 is the full zǐ, 'young children,' and 團圓 is the word for a family closed into a circle, the same word that gives the Mid-Autumn festival its meaning.
When the fish run thick I sell them off in the Chang'an market, trading them for fragrant unstrained wine to drink myself merry.
貨 is verbal once more, 'to sell.' 香醪 (xiāng láo) is fragrant unstrained wine, the cloudy stuff straight off the mash, and 吃個醉 is literally 'to eat oneself a drunk.' (長 in 長安 is cháng.)
My straw rain-cape for a quilt, I lie out on the autumn river, snoring in my sleep, free of every worry, with no hankering after the world's glory and rank.
簑衣 is the woven-grass rain-cape, and no other garment says 'reclusive angler' so economically; it is what the fisherman wears in a thousand paintings. Here he uses it as bedding, 當被, 'to serve as a quilt.' 不戀 is to feel no pull toward a thing. The 」 ends the lyric.
The woodcutter said: 'Your clear waters are still no match for my green hills. I too have a lyric to Immortal of the Skies:'
One line, two readings of the same character. In the trade-name 樵子, 'woodcutter,' the 子 is a bare suffix and goes unstressed as zi; in the tune-name 天仙子 it keeps its full zǐ. 還 is hái, 'still, even so' — the woodcutter conceding nothing.
A thatched cottage of a few rafters, raised at the foot of the hill; pine, bamboo, plum, and orchid — how lovely they truly are.
茆舍, a variant writing of 茅舍, is a thatched hut, and 數椽, 'a few rafters,' is the usual modest way of measuring a small house. 松竹梅蘭, pine and bamboo and plum and orchid, are not decoration but a character reference: these four plants stand for the upright recluse, and every reader would have taken the point.
Threading the woods and crossing the ridges to seek out dry firewood — no one takes it amiss; I sell it as I please, be it little or much, just as the world allows.
乾柴 is dry firewood, with 乾 read gān and not the qián of 乾坤, the heaven-trigram. 從我賣 is 'sold at my own discretion,' 憑世界 'depending on how things go,' and 沒人怪 the freelancer's chief perk: nobody minds.
I take the coin and buy wine to my heart's delight; an earthen bowl, a porcelain cup — how utterly at ease I am.
將 in 將錢, 'taking the money,' is jiāng, and 沽酒 is to buy wine. The 瓦缽磁甌, earthen bowl and porcelain cup, are the rough vessels of the poor and free; 殊 is 'exceedingly.'
Reeling drunk, I lie down in the pine's shade, without a care to snag me, beyond all gain and loss, heedless of the world's rise and fall.
酕醄 (máo táo) is blind drunk, thoroughly gone. Then the register lifts without warning: 掛礙, 'hindrance, snagging attachment,' is a Buddhist term, and a famous one, since it is the word the Heart Sutra uses for what the awakened mind is free of. A woodcutter sleeping it off under a pine has quoted scripture without meaning to. 了 here is the completive le, and 興 in 興與敗 is xīng, 'to rise, flourish.' The 」 closes his turn.
With Immortal of the Skies the debate turns inward, from what each trade puts on the table to what it does to a man's mind. Both lyrics move through the same three stages, work lightly borne, plain food and drink, and finally a carefree drunken sleep, so that the fisherman dozing under his straw cape on the autumn river answers the woodcutter snoring in the shade of the pines.
The vocabulary of detachment sharpens here. 無憂慮 and 不戀…榮與貴 on the water are matched by 無掛礙、無利害 and 不管…興與敗 in the hills. 掛礙 is the one that carries real weight: it is the Heart Sutra's word for the hindrances an awakened mind has shed. Dropped into a drinking song, it lines up two tipsy rustics with a religious ideal of non-attachment, and tunes the whole pastoral overture to the concerns of the novel it introduces.