將功折罪 Merit to Offset the Crime
只是那妖精有本事,汝等可好看馬匹、行李,等老孫上天去求救兵來。」眾僧膽怯道:「爺爺又能上天?」行者笑道:「天宮原是我的舊家。當年我做齊天大聖,因為亂了蟠桃會,被我佛收降。如今沒奈何,保唐僧取經,將功折罪,一路上輔正除邪。我師父該有此難,汝等卻不知也。」眾僧聽此言,又磕頭禮拜。行者出得門,打個唿哨,即時不見。只是那妖精有本事,汝等可好看马匹、行李,等老孙上天去求救兵来。」众僧胆怯道:「爷爷又能上天?」行者笑道:「天宫原是我的旧家。当年我做齐天大圣,因为乱了蟠桃会,被我佛收降。如今没奈何,保唐僧取经,将功折罪,一路上辅正除邪。我师父该有此难,汝等却不知也。」众僧听此言,又磕头礼拜。行者出得门,打个唿哨,即时不见。
逐句解 Line by line
"It is only that the fiends have real ability. Look you well to the horse and the baggage, and let old Monkey go up to heaven and fetch down some rescuing troops."
The plan, announced to a courtyard of village monks as though it were an errand. 求救兵 — to beg rescuing troops — is a phrase from the world of military dispatches, and he uses it about a trip he intends to make on foot through a gate in the sky.
The monks lost their nerve and said, "Your Honour can go up to heaven as well?"
Six characters, and the disbelief in them is the whole comedy of the scene. These are ordinary provincial monks. A man in their courtyard has just said he is going to heaven for reinforcements.
Pilgrim said with a laugh, "The Heavenly Palace was my old home."
舊家 — old home, the place I used to live. Delivered as a joke and meant literally, which is the way this character delivers most things.
"In the old days I was Great Sage Equal to Heaven, and because I threw the Peach Banquet into confusion I was taken in hand by our Buddha.
The novel's own opening seven chapters, in twenty characters. 齊天大聖 is the title he extorted from heaven; the 蟠桃會 is the Peach Banquet he wrecked in chapter 5, eating the immortality peaches and drinking the wine before the guests arrived. 收降 has 降 as xiáng, to subdue and take in — not the jiàng that means to come down. The same character will do both jobs within a few passages of here.
Now there is no help for it: I escort the Tang Monk to fetch the scriptures, setting merit against my crime, and along the road I uphold the right and clear away the wicked.
將功折罪 — take merit and use it to discount a crime — is a phrase out of the law courts, where a convicted man's later service could reduce his sentence. It is still in use. Pilgrim's entire pilgrimage is, in his own description of it, a sentence being served.
My master was due this trouble, and you would not know it."
該有此難 — he was due this calamity. The journey's disasters are scheduled; there are eighty-one of them and this is one. Pilgrim knows the schedule exists and the monks do not, and he says so without unkindness.
When the monks heard this they knocked their heads on the ground and bowed again.
They believed him. Six characters ago they could not credit that he might go to heaven; now they are prostrate.
Pilgrim got out of the door, gave a whistle, and in that instant was gone.
出得門 puts 得 between the verb and its object in the shape that means "managed to", and there the character takes the full dé — the opposite of the light one three passages back, and only the absence of 不 tells them apart. 唿哨 is a whistle through the fingers, the sound this character makes when he leaves in a hurry.
A passage that exists so that the novel can remind you who it is about. Ninety chapters in, Pilgrim is a dutiful escort with a staff and a temper, and it is easy to forget that he once fought the armies of heaven to a standstill and had to be pinned under a mountain for five hundred years. So the novel puts him in front of some frightened villagers and lets him say it out loud.
The way he says it is the interesting part. He does not boast. He describes his past in the flattest possible legal language — I held this title, I committed this offence, I was taken in hand, I am now working off the sentence. 將功折罪 is what a magistrate would write on a case file. He has internalised the judgment against him completely.
And then he whistles and vanishes, which is the other half of him. The whole of Sun Wukong is in these eight lines: a convict serving out a term, and a creature for whom the sky is a place you can simply go.