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竊扇驚魔
He Steals the Fan and Rouses the Fiend
話說孫大聖撥轉觔斗雲,佇立山前,想著要救師父,把那淨瓶兒牢扣腰間,徑來洞口打探。見那門開兩扇,靜悄悄的不聞消耗。隨即輕輕移步,潛入裡邊。只見那魔斜倚石案,呼呼睡著。芭蕉扇褪出肩衣,半蓋著腦後;七星劍還斜倚案邊。卻被他輕輕的走上前拔了扇子,急回頭,呼的一聲,跑將出去。原來這扇柄兒刮著那怪的頭髮,早驚醒他。擡頭看時,是孫行者偷了,急慌忙執劍來趕。那大聖早已跳出門前,將扇子撒在腰間,雙手掄開鐵棒,與那魔抵敵。话说孙大圣拨转觔斗云,伫立山前,想著要救师父,把那净瓶儿牢扣腰间,径来洞口打探。见那门开两扇,静悄悄的不闻消耗。随即轻轻移步,潜入里边。只见那魔斜倚石案,呼呼睡著。芭蕉扇褪出肩衣,半盖著脑后;七星剑还斜倚案边。却被他轻轻的走上前拔了扇子,急回头,呼的一声,跑将出去。原来这扇柄儿刮著那怪的头发,早惊醒他。抬头看时,是孙行者偷了,急慌忙执剑来赶。那大圣早已跳出门前,将扇子撒在腰间,双手抡开铁棒,与那魔抵敌。
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話說孫大聖撥轉觔斗雲,佇立山前,想著要救師父,把那淨瓶兒牢扣腰間,徑來洞口打探。
话说孙大圣拨转觔斗云,伫立山前,想著要救师父,把那净瓶儿牢扣腰间,径来洞口打探。
The tale tells how Sun the Great Sage wheeled his somersault-cloud about and stood before the mountain, minded to save his master; he lashed the little Pure Vase fast at his waist and came straight to the cave-mouth to spy things out.
撥轉 (bō zhuǎn) — "wheeled about." 淨瓶兒, "the little Pure Vase," 兒 the suffix (er); 牢扣腰間, "lashed fast at the waist," 間 read jiān.
見那門開兩扇,靜悄悄的不聞消耗。
见那门开两扇,静悄悄的不闻消耗。
He saw the two leaves of the door standing open, silent and still, with no sound of stirring within.
不聞消耗 — "no sound of movement heard"; the sleeping cave gives Wukong his opening.
隨即輕輕移步,潛入裡邊。
随即轻轻移步,潜入里边。
At once he moved softly, step by light step, and slipped inside.
潛入裡邊 — "stole in within." Wukong’s stealth is described in a series of quiet, careful verbs.
只見那魔斜倚石案,呼呼睡著。
只见那魔斜倚石案,呼呼睡著。
He saw the fiend leaning aslant against the stone table, sound asleep and snoring.
呼呼睡著 — "snoring, fast asleep," 著 read zháo (resultative "asleep").
芭蕉扇褪出肩衣,半蓋著腦後;
芭蕉扇褪出肩衣,半盖著脑后;
The Plantain Fan had slid out past his shoulder-robe, half covering the back of his head;
半蓋著腦後 — "half covering the back of the head," 著 here durative (zhe). The fan’s loose position is what makes the theft possible.
七星劍還斜倚案邊。
七星剑还斜倚案边。
the Seven-Star Sword still leaned aslant at the table’s edge.
還斜倚 — "still leaned aslant," 還 read hái, "still."
卻被他輕輕的走上前拔了扇子,急回頭,呼的一聲,跑將出去。
却被他轻轻的走上前拔了扇子,急回头,呼的一声,跑将出去。
So he crept softly up, pulled the fan free, whipped his head round, gave a whoosh, and went running out.
呼的一聲 — "with a whoosh"; 跑將出去, "ran out," 將 the coverb (jiāng). The theft is done in an instant.
原來這扇柄兒刮著那怪的頭髮,早驚醒他。
原来这扇柄儿刮著那怪的头发,早惊醒他。
But it turned out this fan-handle scraped against the fiend’s hair, and startled him awake at once.
扇柄兒 — "the fan-handle," 兒 the suffix (er); 刮著, "scraped against," 著 durative (zhe). The small mischance undoes the stealth.
擡頭看時,是孫行者偷了,急慌忙執劍來趕。
抬头看时,是孙行者偷了,急慌忙执剑来赶。
Raising his head to look, he saw it was Sun Xingzhe who had stolen it, and in a flurry he snatched up his sword and gave chase.
擡頭看時 — "lifting his head to look." The fiend wakes to find his treasure gone and its thief in flight.
那大聖早已跳出門前,將扇子撒在腰間,雙手掄開鐵棒,與那魔抵敵。
那大圣早已跳出门前,将扇子撒在腰间,双手抡开铁棒,与那魔抵敌。
The Great Sage had already leapt out before the door, thrown the fan at his waist, and with both hands whirled up his iron cudgel to face the fiend.
撒在腰間 — "stowed at his waist," 間 read jiān. 雙手掄開, "whirled up with both hands"; Wukong turns from thief to combatant in a breath.
總評 Commentary
The theft of the Plantain Fan is a small masterpiece of comic timing. Wukong, the vase lashed at his waist, steals into the silent cave where the fiend lies snoring, the fan slid loose behind his shoulder; softly he pulls it free and bolts — only for the fan-handle to graze the demon’s hair and wake him. The whole reversal turns on that one accidental scrape.
The passage is built on the contrast between stealth and its undoing. The careful, tiptoeing verbs of the approach give way, in an instant, to the whoosh of flight, the fiend’s startled waking, and the snatch of his sword. By its end Wukong has turned in a breath from burglar to open combatant — fan stowed, cudgel whirled — and the fight is joined again.