不論親情 No Kinship Only The Grudge
好猴王,一隻手扯住,一隻手去耳內掣出棒來,幌一幌,有碗來粗細。那羅剎掙脫手,舉劍來迎。行者隨又掄棒便打。兩個在翠雲山前,不論親情,卻只講仇隙。這一場好殺:好猴王,一只手扯住,一只手去耳内掣出棒来,幌一幌,有碗来粗细。那罗刹挣脱手,举剑来迎。行者随又抡棒便打。两个在翠云山前,不论亲情,却只讲仇隙。这一场好杀:
逐句解 Line by line
Fine Monkey King! With one hand he held her fast, and with the other he reached into his ear and drew out the cudgel; he gave it a shake, and it was as thick as a rice-bowl.
好猴王 is the storyteller's round of applause, marking the turn into action. 幌一幌, "gave it a shake," is the standing formula for the cudgel changing size; 有碗來粗細, "about the thickness of a bowl," is the standing measure.
The Rākṣasī wrenched her hand free and raised her sword to meet him.
掙 is zhèng, to break free by main force, not the zhēng of 掙扎, struggling — 康熙 gives it a rhyme landing on the falling tone. This reading was settled at the close of the previous chapter and meets its first test here.
Pilgrim at once swung up his cudgel and struck.
隨又, "thereupon, at once." Eight characters, and the negotiation that has occupied two long stretches of the chapter is over.
The two of them, before Mount Cuiyun, spoke no more of kinship but only of the grudge.
One line sets the whole scene's two terms against each other: 親情, the relationship being claimed, against 仇隙, the crack of enmity. Pilgrim has spent the entire conversation arguing the first, and the fight concedes the second.
And a fine fight it was:
The tag stands as its own five-character unit at the end of a long prose line, so it alone opens the poem. What follows is the chapter's battle set-piece, ten couplets long.
好猴王 — fine Monkey King — is the storyteller's applause, and it marks the turn from talk to action as reliably as a change of key. What follows is the familiar sequence: one hand holding her, the other into the ear, the cudgel out and shaken to the thickness of a rice-bowl.
Her escape from his grip is the chapter's first live test of a reading settled only at the previous chapter's close: 掙脫, to wrench free, where 掙 takes the falling tone against the level tone of struggling. The difference is invisible in the character and audible only in the pinyin, and a good deal of work went into that one syllable.
The line that closes the prose is the chapter in miniature. Before Mount Cuiyun the two of them 不論親情,卻只講仇隙 — spoke no more of kinship but only of the grudge. Pilgrim has been arguing the sworn brotherhood since the moment the door opened; the fight is his admission that it was never going to be enough.