黃袍出洞 The Yellow Robe
卻說那八戒、沙僧在門前正等,只見妖魔來得兇險。你道他怎生打扮:却说那八戒、沙僧在门前正等,只见妖魔来得凶险。你道他怎生打扮:
逐句解 Line by line
Now as Bajie and Sha Monk stood waiting at the gate, they saw the fiend come out in fearsome force. And how was he arrayed? Behold:
那 is nà; 來得 takes the unstressed de. The second portrait of the same demon, and nothing about it will resemble the first.
Blue face, red whiskers, crimson hair astream; gold-mounted armor, ablaze with abundant light.
Seven-character lines this time, regular and stately — the metre of a hero, not of the staccato grotesque asleep on the couch. Same creature, upgraded genre.
A belt of tridacna-shell wraps his belly and lines his waist; a cloud-patterned cord clasps his chest and laces his mail.
磲石 is tridacna, giant clam shell, one of the seven treasures of Buddhist listing and a rich man's belt fitting. 步雲絛 is a cloud-tread sash. This is expensive kit, described the way the novel describes a general.
At ease before the mountain, the wind roars and roars; roaming glum beyond the seas, the waves surge and surge.
吼吼 and 滔滔 each double their own character — roaring and roaring, surging and surging — the doubling that gives Chinese description its rocking, continuous motion. Wind answers wave across the couplet, with the demon standing still in the middle of both.
A pair of indigo, sinew-scorched hands grips fast the soul-hunting, life-taking sabre.
焦觔 is scorched sinew, with 觔 again standing in for the standard 筋. 追魂取命刀 is the soul-hunting, life-taking sabre — and naming a weapon is how this novel signals that its owner is somebody.
Would you know this creature's name and style? Two ringing graphs proclaim him: Yellow Robe.
The name is held back to the very last line, which is standard practice for this kind of portrait: array first, identity after. 喚黃袍 — called Yellow Robe. He is named for the garment the reader first saw slung over him while he slept.
Unlike the sleeping-fiend rhapsody at the pagoda, which mixed the hideous and the delicate to grotesque effect, this portrait is straightforwardly martial and even handsome: gold armour, a tridacna belt, a cloud-sash, a warrior standing at ease before his own mountain. The demon is presented as a formidable and dignified opponent, which raises the stakes of the coming fight and quietly plants the truth about where he came from.
Withholding the name to the last line is a standard flourish of the form: only after the full array does the verse hand over the two characters, Yellow Robe. The dignity here is not ironic as it was at the pagoda. It is a genuine measure of the enemy, and it prepares a revelation several chapters in the making — that this is no common ogre but the Kui-wood Wolf of the twenty-eight lunar mansions, serving out a sentence on earth for a love affair in heaven.