二魔獻策 The Second Fiend's Counsel
老魔聽說,暴躁如雷道:「罷了,罷了,這就是孫行者假妝神仙騙哄去了。那猴頭神通廣大,處處人熟,不知那個毛神放他出來,騙去寶貝。」二魔道:「兄長息怒。叵耐那猴頭著然無禮,既有手段,便走了也罷,怎麼又騙寶貝?我若沒本事拿他,永不在西方路上為怪。」老魔道:「怎生拿他?」二魔道:「我們有五件寶貝,去了兩件,還有三件,務要拿住他。」老魔道:「還有那三件?」二魔道:「還有七星劍與芭蕉扇在我身邊,那一條幌金繩,在壓龍山壓龍洞老母親那裡收著哩。如今差兩個小妖去請母親來吃唐僧肉,就教他帶幌金繩來拿孫行者。」老魔道:「差那個去?」二魔道:「不差這樣廢物去。」老魔听说,暴躁如雷道:「罢了,罢了,这就是孙行者假妆神仙骗哄去了。那猴头神通广大,处处人熟,不知那个毛神放他出来,骗去宝贝。」二魔道:「兄长息怒。叵耐那猴头着然无礼,既有手段,便走了也罢,怎么又骗宝贝?我若没本事拿他,永不在西方路上为怪。」老魔道:「怎生拿他?」二魔道:「我们有五件宝贝,去了两件,还有三件,务要拿住他。」老魔道:「还有那三件?」二魔道:「还有七星剑与芭蕉扇在我身边,那一条幌金绳,在压龙山压龙洞老母亲那里收着哩。如今差两个小妖去请母亲来吃唐僧肉,就教他带幌金绳来拿孙行者。」老魔道:「差那个去?」二魔道:「不差这样废物去。」
逐句解 Line by line
Hearing this, the old fiend flew into a rage like thunder: “Done for, done for! This is Sun the Pilgrim, who tricked them by feigning an immortal. That monkey-head has vast magic powers and knows people everywhere; there's no telling which petty spirit let him out to swindle away our treasures.”
罷了,罷了 bà le, bà le — done for, done for. This is the one place 罷 takes its full tone: as an exclamation of collapse it is bà, quite unlike the coaxing particle a few passages back. Then the two 那 again, doing opposite work in consecutive breaths: 那猴頭 nà hóu tóu, that monkey-head, points, while 那個毛神 nǎ ge máo shén, which petty spirit, gropes for an unknown culprit.
The second fiend said: “Elder brother, calm your anger. Insufferable that the monkey-head should be so utterly without manners — if he had powers and merely made off, so be it; but why must he also steal our treasures? If I've no skill to take him, may I never work my mischief on the western road again.”
兄長 xiōng zhǎng, elder brother — 長 read zhǎng, senior. 著然無禮 zhuó rán wú lǐ, utterly without manners: 著然 is a fixed adverb and takes 著 as zhuó, the literary reading. The oath is worth pausing on — 永不…為怪 yǒng bù … wéi guài, never again be a demon — where 為 is the verb wéi, to act as. He is staking his professional identity, which is about the strongest thing a fiend can wager.
The old fiend said: “How will you take him?” The second said: “We have five treasures; two are gone, three remain, and take him we surely will.” The old fiend said: “Which three are left?” The second said: “The seven-star sword and the plantain fan are still at my side; that one length of gold-glinting cord is kept by our old mother at Dragon-Crushing Cave on Dragon-Crushing Mountain. Let us now send two imps to invite Mother to come and eat the Tang Monk's flesh, and have her bring the gold-glinting cord to catch Sun the Pilgrim.”
The inventory that shapes the rest of the chapter: five treasures, two gone, three left — the seven-star sword, the plantain fan, and the 幌金繩 huǎng jīn shéng, the gold-glinting cord, held by the mother. 差兩個 chāi liǎng ge, dispatch two, takes 差 as chāi, to send on an errand. And the 那 sort themselves once more: 還有那三件 hái yǒu nǎ sān jiàn, which three are left, is the question, while 那一條 nà yì tiáo, that one length, and 那裡收著 nà lǐ shōu zhe, kept over there, both point.
The old fiend said: “Whom shall we send?” The second said: “Not such useless creatures as these.”
差那個去 chāi nǎ ge qù, whom to send — the questioning nǎ. In 不差 bù chāi, not send, the negative keeps its full bù, because 差 read chāi is a level tone and gives it nothing to bounce off.
The two brothers divide the villainy into complementary temperaments: thunderous rage answered by tactical calm. The elder's despairing 罷了,罷了 measures the size of the loss; the younger's oath to give up demonhood altogether if he fails measures the size of his resolve. Between them the story resets — the imps' disgrace is finished with, and a fresh and better-armed scheme takes shape.
This is also the passage that lays out the board. Three treasures remain, and one of them is at Dragon-Crushing Cave in the keeping of a mother we have not met. The plan to summon her under the pretext of a feast on the Tang Monk introduces the family beyond the brothers, along with the cord that will shortly bind the Great Sage. And every particular of the trap is spoken over the head of a fly on the door-frame.