Canonical Classics ← 第十七回
第十七回
孫sūn行xíng者zhě大dà鬧nào黑hēi風fēng山shān
觀guān世shì音yīn收shōu伏fú熊xióng羆pí怪guài

Sun the Pilgrim Makes Great Havoc on Black Wind Mountain · Guanshiyin Subdues the Bear-Fiend

行者自述平生
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行者自述平生 The Pilgrim Recites His Own History

自zì小xiǎo神shén通tōng手shǒu段duàn高gāo,隨suí風fēng變biàn化huà逞chěng英yīng豪háo。自zì小xiǎo神shén通tōng手shǒu段duàn高gāo,随suí风fēng变biàn化huà逞chěng英yīng豪háo。
養yǎng性xìng修xiū真zhēn熬áo日rì月yuè,跳tiào出chū輪lún迴huí把bǎ命mìng逃táo。养yǎng性xìng修xiū真zhēn熬áo日rì月yuè,跳tiào出chū轮lún回huí把bǎ命mìng逃táo。
一yì點diǎn誠chéng心xīn曾céng訪fǎng道dào,靈líng臺tái山shān上shàng採cǎi藥yào苗miáo。一yì点diǎn诚chéng心xīn曾céng访fǎng道dào,灵líng台tái山shān上shàng采cǎi药yào苗miáo。
那nà山shān有yǒu個gè老lǎo仙xiān長zhǎng,壽shòu年nián十shí萬wàn八bā千qiān高gāo。那nà山shān有yǒu个gè老lǎo仙xiān长zhǎng,寿shòu年nián十shí万wàn八bā千qiān高gāo。
老lǎo孫sūn拜bài他tā為wéi師shī父fù,指zhǐ我wǒ長cháng生shēng路lù一yì條tiáo。老lǎo孙sūn拜bài他tā为wéi师shī父fù,指zhǐ我wǒ长cháng生shēng路lù一yì条tiáo。
他tā說shuō身shēn內nèi有yǒu丹dān藥yào,外wài邊biān採cǎi取qǔ枉wǎng徒tú勞láo。他tā说shuō身shēn内nèi有yǒu丹dān药yào,外wài边biān采cǎi取qǔ枉wǎng徒tú劳láo。
得dé傳chuán大dà品pǐn天tiān仙xiān訣jué,若ruò無wú根gēn本běn實shí難nán熬áo。得dé传chuán大dà品pǐn天tiān仙xiān诀jué,若ruò无wú根gēn本běn实shí难nán熬áo。
回huí光guāng內nèi照zhào寧níng心xīn坐zuò,身shēn中zhōng日rì月yuè坎kǎn離lí交jiāo。回huí光guāng内nèi照zhào宁níng心xīn坐zuò,身shēn中zhōng日rì月yuè坎kǎn离lí交jiāo。
萬wàn事shì不bù思sī全quán寡guǎ慾yù,六liù根gēn清qīng淨jìng體tǐ堅jiān牢láo。万wàn事shì不bù思sī全quán寡guǎ欲yù,六liù根gēn清qīng净jìng体tǐ坚jiān牢láo。
返fǎn老lǎo還huán童tóng容róng易yì得dé,超chāo凡fán入rù聖shèng路lù非fēi遙yáo。返fǎn老lǎo还huán童tóng容róng易yì得dé,超chāo凡fán入rù圣shèng路lù非fēi遥yáo。
三sān年nián無wú漏lòu成chéng仙xiān體tǐ,不bù同tóng俗sú輩bèi受shòu煎jiān熬áo。三sān年nián无wú漏lòu成chéng仙xiān体tǐ,不bù同tóng俗sú辈bèi受shòu煎jiān熬áo。
十shí洲zhōu三sān島dǎo還hái遊yóu戲xì,海hǎi角jiǎo天tiān涯yá轉zhuǎn一yì遭zāo。十shí洲zhōu三sān岛dǎo还hái游yóu戏xì,海hǎi角jiǎo天tiān涯yá转zhuǎn一yì遭zāo。
活huó該gāi三sān百bǎi多duō餘yú歲suì,不bù得dé飛fēi昇shēng上shàng九jiǔ霄xiāo。活huó该gāi三sān百bǎi多duō余yú岁suì,不bù得dé飞fēi升shēng上shàng九jiǔ霄xiāo。
下xià海hǎi降xiáng龍lóng真zhēn寶bǎo貝bèi,才cái有yǒu金jīn箍gū棒bàng一yì條tiáo。下xià海hǎi降xiáng龙lóng真zhēn宝bǎo贝bèi,才cái有yǒu金jīn箍gū棒bàng一yì条tiáo。
花huā果guǒ山shān前qián為wéi帥shuài首shǒu,水shuǐ簾lián洞dòng裡lǐ聚jù群qún妖yāo。花huā果guǒ山shān前qián为wéi帅shuài首shǒu,水shuǐ帘lián洞dòng里lǐ聚jù群qún妖yāo。
玉yù皇huáng大dà帝dì傳chuán宣xuān詔zhào,封fēng我wǒ齊qí天tiān極jí品pǐn高gāo。玉yù皇huáng大dà帝dì传chuán宣xuān诏zhào,封fēng我wǒ齐qí天tiān极jí品pǐn高gāo。
幾jǐ番fān大dà鬧nào靈líng霄xiāo殿diàn,數shù次cì曾céng偷tōu王wáng母mǔ桃táo。几jǐ番fān大dà闹nào灵líng霄xiāo殿diàn,数shù次cì曾céng偷tōu王wáng母mǔ桃táo。
天tiān兵bīng十shí萬wàn來lái降xiáng我wǒ,層céng層céng密mì密mì布bù槍qiāng刀dāo。天tiān兵bīng十shí万wàn来lái降xiáng我wǒ,层céng层céng密mì密mì布bù枪qiāng刀dāo。
戰zhàn退tuì天tiān王wáng歸guī上shàng界jiè,哪né吒zhā負fù痛tòng領lǐng兵bīng逃táo。战zhàn退tuì天tiān王wáng归guī上shàng界jiè,哪né咤zhā负fù痛tòng领lǐng兵bīng逃táo。
顯xiǎn聖shèng真zhēn君jūn能néng變biàn化huà,老lǎo孫sūn硬yìng賭dǔ跌diē平píng交jiāo。显xiǎn圣shèng真zhēn君jūn能néng变biàn化huà,老lǎo孙sūn硬yìng赌dǔ跌diē平píng交jiāo。
道dào祖zǔ觀guān音yīn同tóng玉yù帝dì,南nán天tiān門mén上shàng看kàn降xiáng妖yāo。道dào祖zǔ观guān音yīn同tóng玉yù帝dì,南nán天tiān门mén上shàng看kàn降xiáng妖yāo。
卻què被bèi老lǎo君jūn助zhù一yí陣zhèn,二èr郎láng擒qín我wǒ到dào天tiān曹cáo。却què被bèi老lǎo君jūn助zhù一yí阵zhèn,二èr郎láng擒qín我wǒ到dào天tiān曹cáo。
將jiāng身shēn綁bǎng在zài降xiáng妖yāo柱zhù,即jí命mìng神shén兵bīng把bǎ首shǒu梟xiāo。将jiāng身shēn绑bǎng在zài降xiáng妖yāo柱zhù,即jí命mìng神shén兵bīng把bǎ首shǒu枭xiāo。
刀dāo砍kǎn鎚chuí敲qiāo不bù得dé壞huài,又yòu教jiào雷léi打dǎ火huǒ來lái燒shāo。刀dāo砍kǎn锤chuí敲qiāo不bù得dé坏huài,又yòu教jiào雷léi打dǎ火huǒ来lái烧shāo。
老lǎo孫sūn其qí實shí有yǒu手shǒu段duàn,全quán然rán不bú怕pà半bàn分fēn毫háo。老lǎo孙sūn其qí实shí有yǒu手shǒu段duàn,全quán然rán不bú怕pà半bàn分fēn毫háo。
送sòng在zài老lǎo君jūn爐lú裡lǐ煉liàn,六liù丁dīng神shén火huǒ慢màn煎jiān熬áo。送sòng在zài老lǎo君jūn炉lú里lǐ炼liàn,六liù丁dīng神shén火huǒ慢màn煎jiān熬áo。
日rì滿mǎn開kāi爐lú我wǒ跳tiào出chū,手shǒu持chí鐵tiě棒bàng遶rào天tiān跑pǎo。日rì满mǎn开kāi炉lú我wǒ跳tiào出chū,手shǒu持chí铁tiě棒bàng绕rào天tiān跑pǎo。
縱zòng橫héng到dào處chù無wú遮zhē擋dǎng,三sān十shí三sān天tiān鬧nào一yì遭zāo。纵zòng横héng到dào处chù无wú遮zhē挡dǎng,三sān十shí三sān天tiān闹nào一yì遭zāo。
我wǒ佛fó如rú來lái施shī法fǎ力lì,五wǔ行xíng山shān壓yā老lǎo孫sūn腰yāo。我wǒ佛fó如rú来lái施shī法fǎ力lì,五wǔ行xíng山shān压yā老lǎo孙sūn腰yāo。
整zhěng整zhěng壓yā該gāi五wǔ百bǎi載zǎi,幸xìng逢féng三sān藏zàng出chū唐táng朝cháo。整zhěng整zhěng压yā该gāi五wǔ百bǎi载zǎi,幸xìng逢féng三sān藏zàng出chū唐táng朝cháo。
吾wú今jīn皈guī正zhèng西xī方fāng去qù,轉zhuǎn上shàng雷léi音yīn見jiàn玉yù毫háo。吾wú今jīn皈guī正zhèng西xī方fāng去qù,转zhuǎn上shàng雷léi音yīn见jiàn玉yù毫háo。
你nǐ去qù乾qián坤kūn四sì海hǎi問wèn一yí問wèn,我wǒ是shì歷lì代dài馳chí名míng第dì一yì妖yāo。」你nǐ去qù干qián坤kūn四sì海hǎi问wèn一yí问wèn,我wǒ是shì历lì代dài驰chí名míng第dì一yì妖yāo。」

逐句解 Line by line

自zì小xiǎo神shén通tōng手shǒu段duàn高gāo,隨suí風fēng變biàn化huà逞chěng英yīng豪háo。 自zì小xiǎo神shén通tōng手shǒu段duàn高gāo,随suí风fēng变biàn化huà逞chěng英yīng豪háo。

From my youth my divine powers and my arts stood high; changing with the wind, I played the hero.

What follows is thirty-two couplets in the seven-character line, rhyming all the way through in -ao: 高, 豪, 逃, 苗 and onwards to the end. It is the Pilgrim's entire life story, delivered as a boast, to a bear.

養yǎng性xìng修xiū真zhēn熬áo日rì月yuè,跳tiào出chū輪lún迴huí把bǎ命mìng逃táo。 养yǎng性xìng修xiū真zhēn熬áo日rì月yuè,跳tiào出chū轮lún回huí把bǎ命mìng逃táo。

Nourishing nature and refining the true, I endured sun and moon; leaping clear of the Wheel, I fled away with my life.

養性修真, nourishing the nature and refining the true, is inner-alchemy vocabulary — and the reader has just heard the same vocabulary in the mouths of the three fiends on the grass slope. 熬, áo, is to endure by being boiled. The character comes back twice more in this poem, and the last time the thing being boiled is him.

一yì點diǎn誠chéng心xīn曾céng訪fǎng道dào,靈líng臺tái山shān上shàng採cǎi藥yào苗miáo。 一yì点diǎn诚chéng心xīn曾céng访fǎng道dào,灵líng台tái山shān上shàng采cǎi药yào苗miáo。

With one point of sincere heart I once went seeking the Way, and on Spirit Terrace Mountain gathered the sprouts of the drug.

靈臺, the Spirit Terrace, is a mountain in the novel and also, in the alchemical texts, the heart. In 一點誠心 the 一 sits before third-tone 點 and so comes out yì.

那nà山shān有yǒu個gè老lǎo仙xiān長zhǎng,壽shòu年nián十shí萬wàn八bā千qiān高gāo。 那nà山shān有yǒu个gè老lǎo仙xiān长zhǎng,寿shòu年nián十shí万wàn八bā千qiān高gāo。

On that mountain there dwelt an aged immortal elder, whose years stood high at a hundred and eight thousand.

仙長 takes 長 as zhǎng, an elder. Subhūti is never actually named in this poem — only located.

老lǎo孫sūn拜bài他tā為wéi師shī父fù,指zhǐ我wǒ長cháng生shēng路lù一yì條tiáo。 老lǎo孙sūn拜bài他tā为wéi师shī父fù,指zhǐ我wǒ长cháng生shēng路lù一yì条tiáo。

Old Sun bowed and took him for a master, and he pointed me out one road to long life.

為師父 takes the copular wéi; 長生, long life, takes cháng. Two characters that should never be read on autopilot, both inside fourteen.

他tā說shuō身shēn內nèi有yǒu丹dān藥yào,外wài邊biān採cǎi取qǔ枉wǎng徒tú勞láo。 他tā说shuō身shēn内nèi有yǒu丹dān药yào,外wài边biān采cǎi取qǔ枉wǎng徒tú劳láo。

He said the elixir lies within the body; to gather it outside is labour thrown away.

The doctrine is standard internal alchemy, and it lands as a rebuke to the outer arts — 摶砂煉汞, kneading cinnabar and smelting quicksilver — that the three fiends were discussing when the Pilgrim first laid eyes on them.

得dé傳chuán大dà品pǐn天tiān仙xiān訣jué,若ruò無wú根gēn本běn實shí難nán熬áo。 得dé传chuán大dà品pǐn天tiān仙xiān诀jué,若ruò无wú根gēn本běn实shí难nán熬áo。

I got the transmission of the Great Grade of Heavenly Immortal; but lacking the root, the enduring is hard indeed.

得傳 takes the full verb dé, obtained the transmission. 大品天仙訣 is the Great Grade formula of the heavenly immortal. 根本 is the root — natural capacity, without which the technique is useless.

回huí光guāng內nèi照zhào寧níng心xīn坐zuò,身shēn中zhōng日rì月yuè坎kǎn離lí交jiāo。 回huí光guāng内nèi照zhào宁níng心xīn坐zuò,身shēn中zhōng日rì月yuè坎kǎn离lí交jiāo。

Turning the light to shine within, I sat and stilled the heart; within the body sun and moon, and Kan and Li conjoined.

回光內照 is turning the light back to shine inward. 坎離 are Kan and Li, two of the eight three-line figures of the Yijing — trigrams — standing here for Water and Fire, and getting the two of them to meet is the central operation of the inner elixir. Think of it as the body's own furnace being properly stoked.

萬wàn事shì不bù思sī全quán寡guǎ慾yù,六liù根gēn清qīng淨jìng體tǐ堅jiān牢láo。 万wàn事shì不bù思sī全quán寡guǎ欲yù,六liù根gēn清qīng净jìng体tǐ坚jiān牢láo。

Thinking on nothing, wholly sparing of desire; the six roots made clean, the body firm and sound.

六根 are the six sense-faculties of Buddhist analysis — eye, ear, nose, tongue, body, mind. So the couplet is Buddhist in its vocabulary and Taoist in its goal, and the poem sails over the join without noticing it is there.

返fǎn老lǎo還huán童tóng容róng易yì得dé,超chāo凡fán入rù聖shèng路lù非fēi遙yáo。 返fǎn老lǎo还huán童tóng容róng易yì得dé,超chāo凡fán入rù圣shèng路lù非fēi遥yáo。

To turn back age and come again to childhood is easily got; to pass beyond the common and enter the holy — the road is not far.

返老還童, turning back age and returning to childhood, takes 還 as huán, to return; and 容易得 takes 得 as dé, to obtain. Both are the full verb readings.

三sān年nián無wú漏lòu成chéng仙xiān體tǐ,不bù同tóng俗sú輩bèi受shòu煎jiān熬áo。 三sān年nián无wú漏lòu成chéng仙xiān体tǐ,不bù同tóng俗sú辈bèi受shòu煎jiān熬áo。

Three years without leakage, and the immortal body was formed, unlike the vulgar sort who suffer the boiling and the seething.

無漏, without leakage, is Chinese for Sanskrit anāsrava — and also the alchemical term for a vessel sealed tight. 煎熬 is the boiling and seething the common sort undergo. The Pilgrim will undergo it himself, at couplet twenty-six.

十shí洲zhōu三sān島dǎo還hái遊yóu戲xì,海hǎi角jiǎo天tiān涯yá轉zhuǎn一yì遭zāo。 十shí洲zhōu三sān岛dǎo还hái游yóu戏xì,海hǎi角jiǎo天tiān涯yá转zhuǎn一yì遭zāo。

The Ten Islets and the Three Isles I roamed besides, and made one circuit of the sea's corners and the sky's edge.

還 is the adverb here, hái, besides — not the huán of the couplet just above. 十洲三島, the Ten Islets and Three Isles, are the islands of the immortals.

活huó該gāi三sān百bǎi多duō餘yú歲suì,不bù得dé飛fēi昇shēng上shàng九jiǔ霄xiāo。 活huó该gāi三sān百bǎi多duō余yú岁suì,不bù得dé飞fēi升shēng上shàng九jiǔ霄xiāo。

Three hundred years and more were allotted me to live, yet I could not rise in flight to the ninth empyrean.

活該 means was allotted to live, not the modern serves-him-right. This is the first moment the poem admits to a limit.

下xià海hǎi降xiáng龍lóng真zhēn寶bǎo貝bèi,才cái有yǒu金jīn箍gū棒bàng一yì條tiáo。 下xià海hǎi降xiáng龙lóng真zhēn宝bǎo贝bèi,才cái有yǒu金jīn箍gū棒bàng一yì条tiáo。

I went down into the sea and subdued the dragon for a true treasure: only then did I come by the one golden-hooped rod.

降龍 takes 降 as xiáng, to subdue — the reading it keeps at every one of its five appearances in this poem where the object is a fiend or a dragon.

花huā果guǒ山shān前qián為wéi帥shuài首shǒu,水shuǐ簾lián洞dòng裡lǐ聚jù群qún妖yāo。 花huā果guǒ山shān前qián为wéi帅shuài首shǒu,水shuǐ帘lián洞dòng里lǐ聚jù群qún妖yāo。

Before Flower-Fruit Mountain I was chief and captain; within the Water-Curtain Cave I gathered a throng of fiends.

為帥首 takes the copular wéi. The novel's first seven chapters are being compressed here at a rate of roughly one chapter per couplet.

玉yù皇huáng大dà帝dì傳chuán宣xuān詔zhào,封fēng我wǒ齊qí天tiān極jí品pǐn高gāo。 玉yù皇huáng大dà帝dì传chuán宣xuān诏zhào,封fēng我wǒ齐qí天tiān极jí品pǐn高gāo。

The Jade Emperor sent down a summoning edict and enfeoffed me Equal to Heaven, of the highest grade.

齊天, Equal to Heaven. The title was a bribe, and the poem does not mention that.

幾jǐ番fān大dà鬧nào靈líng霄xiāo殿diàn,數shù次cì曾céng偷tōu王wáng母mǔ桃táo。 几jǐ番fān大dà闹nào灵líng霄xiāo殿diàn,数shù次cì曾céng偷tōu王wáng母mǔ桃táo。

Many a time I made great havoc in the Hall of Divine Mists; more than once I stole the peaches of the Queen Mother.

靈霄殿, the Hall of Divine Mists, is the Jade Emperor's throne room. 數次 reads shù, several times.

天tiān兵bīng十shí萬wàn來lái降xiáng我wǒ,層céng層céng密mì密mì布bù槍qiāng刀dāo。 天tiān兵bīng十shí万wàn来lái降xiáng我wǒ,层céng层céng密mì密mì布bù枪qiāng刀dāo。

A hundred thousand heavenly soldiers came to subdue me, ranged rank on rank, thick with spear and blade.

降我: xiáng again. In 層層密密 the doubling of both characters does exactly the work of the massed ranks it is describing.

戰zhàn退tuì天tiān王wáng歸guī上shàng界jiè,哪né吒zhā負fù痛tòng領lǐng兵bīng逃táo。 战zhàn退tuì天tiān王wáng归guī上shàng界jiè,哪né咤zhā负fù痛tòng领lǐng兵bīng逃táo。

I beat the Heavenly King back to the upper realm, and Nezha, nursing his hurt, led off his troops and fled.

哪吒 is read né zhā. 負痛 is carrying his wound.

顯xiǎn聖shèng真zhēn君jūn能néng變biàn化huà,老lǎo孫sūn硬yìng賭dǔ跌diē平píng交jiāo。 显xiǎn圣shèng真zhēn君jūn能néng变biàn化huà,老lǎo孙sūn硬yìng赌dǔ跌diē平píng交jiāo。

The Illustrious Sage, that True Lord, was a master of transformations; old Sun staked all and fought him to a fall and a draw.

顯聖真君 is Erlang. 跌平交 is a fall that comes out level on both sides — a draw. The Pilgrim concedes it, which is the poem's second admission.

道dào祖zǔ觀guān音yīn同tóng玉yù帝dì,南nán天tiān門mén上shàng看kàn降xiáng妖yāo。 道dào祖zǔ观guān音yīn同tóng玉yù帝dì,南nán天tiān门mén上shàng看kàn降xiáng妖yāo。

The Patriarch of the Way, Guanyin, and the Jade Emperor together looked down from the Southern Gate of Heaven at the subduing of the fiend.

看降妖: xiáng. And look at who is standing at the gate watching — 觀音, the Bodhisattva who is going to end this chapter by subduing a fiend herself, and who once watched the Pilgrim subdued by exactly the same procedure.

卻què被bèi老lǎo君jūn助zhù一yí陣zhèn,二èr郎láng擒qín我wǒ到dào天tiān曹cáo。 却què被bèi老lǎo君jūn助zhù一yí阵zhèn,二èr郎láng擒qín我wǒ到dào天tiān曹cáo。

But Lord Lao lent his aid for one bout, and Erlang took me captive to the Courts of Heaven.

助一陣: 一 before fourth-tone 陣 gives yí. Lord Lao's diamond snare, which is what actually brought him down, goes unmentioned.

將jiāng身shēn綁bǎng在zài降xiáng妖yāo柱zhù,即jí命mìng神shén兵bīng把bǎ首shǒu梟xiāo。 将jiāng身shēn绑bǎng在zài降xiáng妖yāo柱zhù,即jí命mìng神shén兵bīng把bǎ首shǒu枭xiāo。

They bound my body to the fiend-subduing pillar and straightway bade the divine soldiers strike the head from it.

降妖柱: xiáng. 將身 — 將 is the verb here, jiāng, taking the body as its object. 梟, xiāo, is to hang up a severed head as a public display.

刀dāo砍kǎn鎚chuí敲qiāo不bù得dé壞huài,又yòu教jiào雷léi打dǎ火huǒ來lái燒shāo。 刀dāo砍kǎn锤chuí敲qiāo不bù得dé坏huài,又yòu教jiào雷léi打dǎ火huǒ来lái烧shāo。

Sword hacked and hammer beat, and I could not be marred; then they had the thunder smite me, and fire come to burn.

不得壞: the tone of 不 is computed from the dictionary tone of 得, dé, second tone, and so stays bù. 教 is the causative jiào.

老lǎo孫sūn其qí實shí有yǒu手shǒu段duàn,全quán然rán不bú怕pà半bàn分fēn毫háo。 老lǎo孙sūn其qí实shí有yǒu手shǒu段duàn,全quán然rán不bú怕pà半bàn分fēn毫háo。

Old Sun has arts in very truth, and feared not the half of a hair of it.

半分毫, half a fen and half a hair — the smallest units anyone bothers to name. The boast is planted at exactly the point where the poem has just conceded the most.

送sòng在zài老lǎo君jūn爐lú裡lǐ煉liàn,六liù丁dīng神shén火huǒ慢màn煎jiān熬áo。 送sòng在zài老lǎo君jūn炉lú里lǐ炼liàn,六liù丁dīng神shén火huǒ慢màn煎jiān熬áo。

They put me in Lord Lao's furnace to be smelted, and the divine fire of the Six Ding boiled me slowly.

六丁 are the six Ding spirits who mind the furnace. 煎熬 comes round again, and this time the thing in the pot is him.

日rì滿mǎn開kāi爐lú我wǒ跳tiào出chū,手shǒu持chí鐵tiě棒bàng遶rào天tiān跑pǎo。 日rì满mǎn开kāi炉lú我wǒ跳tiào出chū,手shǒu持chí铁tiě棒bàng绕rào天tiān跑pǎo。

The days full, the furnace opened, and out I sprang; iron rod in hand, I ran my circuit round the sky.

遶 writes 繞, to run round, and takes that word's reading, rào. The Pilgrim comes out of the furnace at a sprint.

縱zòng橫héng到dào處chù無wú遮zhē擋dǎng,三sān十shí三sān天tiān鬧nào一yì遭zāo。 纵zòng横héng到dào处chù无wú遮zhē挡dǎng,三sān十shí三sān天tiān闹nào一yì遭zāo。

Ranging at will, nowhere barred, I made one uproar through the Thirty-three Heavens.

三十三天 are the Trāyastriṃśa heavens. 一遭, one circuit — the same word as at couplet twelve. The poem measures out both his freedom and his ruin in laps.

我wǒ佛fó如rú來lái施shī法fǎ力lì,五wǔ行xíng山shān壓yā老lǎo孫sūn腰yāo。 我wǒ佛fó如rú来lái施shī法fǎ力lì,五wǔ行xíng山shān压yā老lǎo孙sūn腰yāo。

My Buddha, the Tathagata, put forth the power of the Law, and the Mountain of Five Phases pressed down on old Sun's waist.

五行山 takes 行 as xíng: these are the Five Phases, not a rank or a row. 我佛如來, my Buddha the Tathāgata — and that possessive is not yet quite earned.

整zhěng整zhěng壓yā該gāi五wǔ百bǎi載zǎi,幸xìng逢féng三sān藏zàng出chū唐táng朝cháo。 整zhěng整zhěng压yā该gāi五wǔ百bǎi载zǎi,幸xìng逢féng三sān藏zàng出chū唐táng朝cháo。

A full five hundred years I lay pressed beneath it, till by good fortune Sanzang came out of the court of Tang.

載 reads zǎi, a year. 幸逢, by good luck met with, is the one piece of unqualified gratitude in the whole poem, and it is given to Sanzang.

吾wú今jīn皈guī正zhèng西xī方fāng去qù,轉zhuǎn上shàng雷léi音yīn見jiàn玉yù毫háo。 吾wú今jīn皈guī正zhèng西xī方fāng去qù,转zhuǎn上shàng雷léi音yīn见jiàn玉yù毫háo。

Now I have turned to the right and go westward, to climb to Thunderclap and look upon the jade tuft.

玉毫 is the tuft of white hair between a Buddha's brows, the ūrṇā. 皈正 is to turn round and take refuge in the right.

你nǐ去qù乾qián坤kūn四sì海hǎi問wèn一yí問wèn,我wǒ是shì歷lì代dài馳chí名míng第dì一yì妖yāo。」 你nǐ去qù干qián坤kūn四sì海hǎi问wèn一yí问wèn,我wǒ是shì历lì代dài驰chí名míng第dì一yì妖yāo。」

Go and ask through heaven and earth and the four seas: I am the first of fiends, famed through the generations."

The last line breaks the seven-character measure — nine characters and nine — and lands the entire recitation on the word 妖, fiend. Two couplets after narrating his own conversion, the Pilgrim signs himself monster, and the monster he is boasting to takes the point immediately. In 第一妖 the 一 sits before first-tone 妖 and gives yì.


總評 Commentary

Four hundred and fifty-two characters, thirty-two couplets, one rhyme sustained throughout: the longest single speech the Pilgrim makes in these early chapters, and he makes it to a bear who asked him a civil question. The poem squeezes the novel's first seven chapters into a boast, and its rhetoric is triumphant from end to end — until you read what it actually concedes. He could not ascend to heaven. Erlang fought him to a draw. Lord Lao took him. Five hundred years under a mountain. The boast is built entirely out of defeats, and the boaster shows no sign of having noticed.

What he does notice, in the very last line, is the word for what he is. 我是歷代馳名第一妖 — the first of fiends, famous down the generations — spoken two couplets after 吾今皈正西方去, I have turned to the right and am going west. The line that breaks the metre is also the line that breaks the argument. Guanyin will spend the end of this chapter proving that a fiend can be turned; the Pilgrim has just proved that one who has been turned may still, given an audience, prefer the older title.