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二次招安
The Second Summons
金星復出南天門,直至花果山水簾洞外觀看。這番比前不同,威風凜凜,殺氣森森,各樣妖精,無般不有。一個個都執劍拈槍,拿刀弄杖的在那裡咆哮跳躍。一見金星,皆上前動手。金星道:「那眾頭目來,累你去報你大聖知之:吾乃上帝遣來天使,有聖旨在此請他。」眾妖即跑入報道:「外面有一老者,他說是上界天使,有旨意請你。」悟空道:「來得好,來得好。想是前番來的那太白金星。那次請我上界,雖是官爵不堪,卻也天上走了一次,認得那天門內外之路。今番又來,定有好意。」教眾頭目大開旗鼓,擺隊迎接。大聖即帶引群猴,頂冠貫甲,甲上罩了赭黃袍,足踏雲履,急出洞門,躬身施禮,高叫道:「老星請進,恕我失迎之罪。」金星趨步向前,徑入洞內,面南立著道:「今告大聖:前者因大聖嫌惡官小,躲離御馬監,當有本監中大小官員奏了玉帝。玉帝傳旨道:『凡授官職,皆由卑而尊,為何嫌小?』即有李天王領哪吒下界取戰。不知大聖神通,故遭敗北,回天奏道:『大聖立一竿旗,要做齊天大聖。眾武將還要支吾,是老漢力為大聖冒罪奏聞,免興師旅,請大王授籙。玉帝准奏,因此來請。」悟空笑道:「前番動勞,今又蒙愛,多謝,多謝!但不知上天可與我齊天大聖之官銜也?」金星道:「老漢以此銜奏准,方敢領旨而來;如有不遂,只坐罪老漢便是。」金星复出南天门,直至花果山水帘洞外观看。这番比前不同,威风凛凛,杀气森森,各样妖精,无般不有。一个个都执剑拈枪,拿刀弄杖的在那里咆哮跳跃。一见金星,皆上前动手。金星道:「那众头目来,累你去报你大圣知之:吾乃上帝遣来天使,有圣旨在此请他。」众妖即跑入报道:「外面有一老者,他说是上界天使,有旨意请你。」悟空道:「来得好,来得好。想是前番来的那太白金星。那次请我上界,虽是官爵不堪,却也天上走了一次,认得那天门内外之路。今番又来,定有好意。」教众头目大开旗鼓,摆队迎接。大圣即带引群猴,顶冠贯甲,甲上罩了赭黄袍,足踏云履,急出洞门,躬身施礼,高叫道:「老星请进,恕我失迎之罪。」金星趋步向前,径入洞内,面南立著道:「今告大圣:前者因大圣嫌恶官小,躲离御马监,当有本监中大小官员奏了玉帝。玉帝传旨道:『凡授官职,皆由卑而尊,为何嫌小?』即有李天王领哪咤下界取战。不知大圣神通,故遭败北,回天奏道:『大圣立一竿旗,要做齐天大圣。众武将还要支吾,是老汉力为大圣冒罪奏闻,免兴师旅,请大王授箓。玉帝准奏,因此来请。」悟空笑道:「前番动劳,今又蒙爱,多谢,多谢!但不知上天可与我齐天大圣之官衔也?」金星道:「老汉以此衔奏准,方敢领旨而来;如有不遂,只坐罪老汉便是。」
逐句解 Line by line
金星復出南天門,直至花果山水簾洞外觀看。
金星复出南天门,直至花果山水帘洞外观看。
The Star-Lord again went out by the Southern Gate and came straight to the Water-Curtain Cave on Flower-Fruit Mountain to look.
觀看 takes 看 as kàn; the Star-Lord's second descent.
這番比前不同,威風凜凜,殺氣森森,各樣妖精,無般不有。
这番比前不同,威风凛凛,杀气森森,各样妖精,无般不有。
This time it was unlike before: the air bristled with martial might and killing menace, and demons of every kind, of no sort lacking.
這番比前不同 — the mountain is now openly armed, after the victory over Heaven's host. 不同 takes bù; 無般不有 (“of no kind lacking”) takes bù.
一個個都執劍拈槍,拿刀弄杖的在那裡咆哮跳躍。
一个个都执剑拈枪,拿刀弄杖的在那里咆哮跳跃。
Each and every one gripped sword and leveled spear, held saber and brandished staff, roaring and leaping there.
一個個 takes yí before fourth-tone 個; 在那裡 is demonstrative nà lǐ (“there”).
一見金星,皆上前動手。
一见金星,皆上前动手。
The moment they saw the Star-Lord, they all rushed up to lay hands on him.
一見 takes yí before fourth-tone 見.
金星道:「那眾頭目來,累你去報你大聖知之:吾乃上帝遣來天使,有聖旨在此請他。」
金星道:「那众头目来,累你去报你大圣知之:吾乃上帝遣来天使,有圣旨在此请他。」
The Star-Lord said, “You captains there, come — I must trouble you to go and report to your Great Sage: I am a heavenly envoy sent by the High Emperor, with a holy decree here to summon him.”
累你, “I must trouble you” (累, lèi); the Star-Lord, mobbed, keeps his courtly manner. 那眾頭目 takes 那 as demonstrative nà.
眾妖即跑入報道:「外面有一老者,他說是上界天使,有旨意請你。」
众妖即跑入报道:「外面有一老者,他说是上界天使,有旨意请你。」
The demons ran in at once to report, “Outside there is an old man who says he is an envoy from the heavenly realm, with a decree to summon you.”
The captains relay the summons; an “old man” bearing a decree.
悟空道:「來得好,來得好。想是前番來的那太白金星。那次請我上界,雖是官爵不堪,卻也天上走了一次,認得那天門內外之路。今番又來,定有好意。」
悟空道:「来得好,来得好。想是前番来的那太白金星。那次请我上界,虽是官爵不堪,却也天上走了一次,认得那天门内外之路。今番又来,定有好意。」
Wukong said, “Well come, well come! It must be that Star-Lord Venus who came before. That time he invited me up to Heaven — though the post was beneath me, still I made the trip aloft and learned the roads within and without the heavenly gate. His coming again now must mean good news.”
Wukong's pleasure is half vanity, half worldly calculation — he recalls the previous trip as having taught him “the roads within and without the heavenly gate.” 不堪 takes bù; 走了一次 takes yí; the three 那 are demonstrative nà.
教眾頭目大開旗鼓,擺隊迎接。
教众头目大开旗鼓,摆队迎接。
He bade his captains throw wide the flags and drums and draw up ranks to welcome him.
教 is causative jiào (“bade”); the welcome is now a sovereign's reception, flags and drums thrown wide.
大聖即帶引群猴,頂冠貫甲,甲上罩了赭黃袍,足踏雲履,急出洞門,躬身施禮,高叫道:「老星請進,恕我失迎之罪。」
大圣即带引群猴,顶冠贯甲,甲上罩了赭黄袍,足踏云履,急出洞门,躬身施礼,高叫道:「老星请进,恕我失迎之罪。」
The Great Sage at once led his monkeys out, his crown on his head and his mail on, an ochre-yellow robe over the mail and cloud-shoes on his feet; he hurried out the cave mouth, bowed, and called aloud, “Venerable Star, please come in — forgive my failure to welcome you properly.”
The Great Sage receives the envoy in full regalia — crown, mail, the 赭黃袍 (ochre robe) over it, 雲履 (cloud-shoes). The deference (躬身施禮) is real but staged from a position of strength.
金星趨步向前,徑入洞內,面南立著道:「今告大聖:前者因大聖嫌惡官小,躲離御馬監,當有本監中大小官員奏了玉帝。玉帝傳旨道:『凡授官職,皆由卑而尊,為何嫌小?』即有李天王領哪吒下界取戰。不知大聖神通,故遭敗北,回天奏道:『大聖立一竿旗,要做齊天大聖。眾武將還要支吾,是老漢力為大聖冒罪奏聞,免興師旅,請大王授籙。玉帝准奏,因此來請。」
金星趋步向前,径入洞内,面南立著道:「今告大圣:前者因大圣嫌恶官小,躲离御马监,当有本监中大小官员奏了玉帝。玉帝传旨道:『凡授官职,皆由卑而尊,为何嫌小?』即有李天王领哪咤下界取战。不知大圣神通,故遭败北,回天奏道:『大圣立一竿旗,要做齐天大圣。众武将还要支吾,是老汉力为大圣冒罪奏闻,免兴师旅,请大王授箓。玉帝准奏,因此来请。」
The Star-Lord stepped briskly forward, went straight into the cave, and standing facing south said, “I now inform the Great Sage: before, because the Great Sage disliked the smallness of his office and slipped away from the Imperial Stable, the officers great and small of that bureau reported it to the Jade Emperor. The Jade Emperor decreed, ‘In all conferral of office one rises from low to high — why disdain a small one?’ Then Heavenly King Lǐ led Nezha down to give battle. Not knowing the Great Sage's powers, they met defeat, and returning to Heaven reported, ‘The Great Sage has raised a flag and means to be Great Sage Equal to Heaven.’ The generals would still have temporized, but it was this old man who, at the risk of blame, strove on the Great Sage's behalf and memorialized that the army be spared and the Great King be invested. The Jade Emperor approved the memorial, and so I have come to invite you.”
The Star-Lord's long, diplomatic recital — facing south, the posture of one bearing imperial words — reframes the whole quarrel as a misunderstanding now generously resolved, and credits himself with sparing Wukong the army. 面南立著 takes 著 as durative zhe; 為何 takes 為 as wèi; 力為大聖 takes 為 as wèi (“on behalf of”); 授籙, to confer an investiture-register; 眾武將 takes 將 as jiàng.
悟空笑道:「前番動勞,今又蒙愛,多謝,多謝!但不知上天可與我齊天大聖之官銜也?」
悟空笑道:「前番动劳,今又蒙爱,多谢,多谢!但不知上天可与我齐天大圣之官衔也?」
Wukong laughed, “You were put to trouble last time, and now you favor me again — many thanks, many thanks! But I wonder, will Heaven grant me the office and title of Great Sage Equal to Heaven?”
Wukong's one real question cuts through the courtesy: will the title actually be 齊天大聖? 不知 takes bù. His submission is entirely contingent on the name.
金星道:「老漢以此銜奏准,方敢領旨而來;如有不遂,只坐罪老漢便是。」
金星道:「老汉以此衔奏准,方敢领旨而来;如有不遂,只坐罪老汉便是。」
The Star-Lord said, “It was with that very title that this old man got the memorial approved before I dared accept the decree and come; if it is not granted, let the blame fall on this old man alone.”
如有不遂,只坐罪老漢便是 — the Star-Lord stakes his own neck on the title; 不遂 takes bú before fourth-tone 遂. The guarantee seals Wukong's assent.
總評 Commentary
The second embassy mirrors the first but in an inverted key. Where the Star-Lord once came to a mountain he could overawe, he now arrives to one openly bristling with arms, is mobbed at the gate, and must keep his courtly composure among hostile demons. The balance of power has shifted, and both parties know it: Wukong receives the envoy as a sovereign receives an ambassador — flags and drums thrown wide, full regalia, the ochre robe — and his deference, though punctilious, is plainly the courtesy of the stronger party.
太白金星's long south-facing recital is a small masterclass in face-saving diplomacy. He narrates the entire conflict — the flight from the stable, the failed expeditions, the raised banner — as a chain of reasonable misunderstandings now graciously settled, and quietly casts himself as Wukong's advocate who, “at the risk of blame,” spared him the army. None of it is quite false, and all of it is arranged to let everyone climb down with dignity. The empty title is being delivered wrapped in the language of imperial benevolence and personal friendship.
But Wukong's single blunt question — will it really be 齊天大聖? — strips the courtesy to its core. His entire submission is contingent on the name and nothing else; he cares nothing for duties, salary, or station, only for the words on the flag. The Star-Lord's willingness to stake his own neck on the title (只坐罪老漢便是) closes the deal. The irony the chapter has been preparing is now fully in view: Wukong is about to win, with elaborate ceremony, precisely the hollow honor designed to neutralize him — and to walk back up to Heaven believing he has triumphed. The 心猿 has been caught not in a net but in a name it chose for itself.