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自立齊天
The Banner of the Great Sage
正飲酒歡會間,有人來報道:「大王,門外有兩個獨角鬼王,要見大王。」猴王道:「教他進來。」那鬼王整衣跑入洞中,倒身下拜。美猴王問他:「你見我何幹?」鬼王道:「久聞大王招賢,無由得見;今見大王授了天籙,得意榮歸,特獻赭黃袍一件,與大王稱慶。肯不棄鄙賤,收納小人,亦得效犬馬之勞。」猴王大喜,將赭黃袍穿起。眾等欣然排班朝拜。即將鬼王封為前部總督先鋒。鬼王謝恩畢,復啟道:「大王在天許久,所授何職?」猴王道:「玉帝輕賢,封我做個甚麼『弼馬溫』。」鬼王聽言,又奏道:「大王有此神通,如何與他養馬?就做個齊天大聖,有何不可?」猴王聞說,歡喜不勝,連道幾個「好!好!好!」教四健將:「就替我快置個旌旗,旗上寫『齊天大聖』四大字,立竿張掛。自此以後,只稱我為齊天大聖,不許再稱大王。亦可傳與各洞妖王,一體知悉。」此不在話下。正饮酒欢会间,有人来报道:「大王,门外有两个独角鬼王,要见大王。」猴王道:「教他进来。」那鬼王整衣跑入洞中,倒身下拜。美猴王问他:「你见我何干?」鬼王道:「久闻大王招贤,无由得见;今见大王授了天箓,得意荣归,特献赭黄袍一件,与大王称庆。肯不弃鄙贱,收纳小人,亦得效犬马之劳。」猴王大喜,将赭黄袍穿起。众等欣然排班朝拜。即将鬼王封为前部总督先锋。鬼王谢恩毕,复启道:「大王在天许久,所授何职?」猴王道:「玉帝轻贤,封我做个甚么『弼马温』。」鬼王听言,又奏道:「大王有此神通,如何与他养马?就做个齐天大圣,有何不可?」猴王闻说,欢喜不胜,连道几个「好!好!好!」教四健将:「就替我快置个旌旗,旗上写『齐天大圣』四大字,立竿张挂。自此以后,只称我为齐天大圣,不许再称大王。亦可传与各洞妖王,一体知悉。」此不在话下。
逐句解 Line by line
正飲酒歡會間,有人來報道:「大王,門外有兩個獨角鬼王,要見大王。」
正饮酒欢会间,有人来报道:「大王,门外有两个独角鬼王,要见大王。」
As they were merrily drinking, someone came to report, “Great King, outside the gate are two single-horned demon-kings asking to see you.”
獨角鬼王, the single-horned demon-kings; 角 is jiǎo (“horn”). They arrive as flatterers at the precise moment Wukong's pride is rawest.
猴王道:「教他進來。」
猴王道:「教他进来。」
The Monkey King said, “Show them in.”
教他進來 — 教 causative jiào, “bid them enter.”
那鬼王整衣跑入洞中,倒身下拜。
那鬼王整衣跑入洞中,倒身下拜。
The demon-kings straightened their robes, hurried into the cave, and threw themselves down to bow.
倒身下拜, “threw themselves down to bow”; here 倒 is dǎo (“to fling down, prostrate”), the same dǎo as in 推倒 earlier, not dào.
美猴王問他:「你見我何幹?」
美猴王问他:「你见我何干?」
The Handsome Monkey King asked them, “What do you come to see me about?”
何幹, “on what business?”
鬼王道:「久聞大王招賢,無由得見;今見大王授了天籙,得意榮歸,特獻赭黃袍一件,與大王稱慶。肯不棄鄙賤,收納小人,亦得效犬馬之勞。」
鬼王道:「久闻大王招贤,无由得见;今见大王授了天箓,得意荣归,特献赭黄袍一件,与大王称庆。肯不弃鄙贱,收纳小人,亦得效犬马之劳。」
They said, “Long have we heard that the Great King seeks out the worthy, but we had no way to gain an audience. Now, seeing that the Great King has received a heavenly register and come home in triumph, we present an ochre-yellow robe to offer our congratulations. If you will not scorn our lowliness and will take us in, we too may render the service of dog and horse.”
The flatterers' gambit: an 赭黃袍 (ochre-yellow robe), a colour edging toward the imperial, offered as homage. 效犬馬之勞 (“render the service of dog and horse”) is conventional self-abasement; 一件 takes yí, 不棄 bú, by sandhi.
猴王大喜,將赭黃袍穿起。
猴王大喜,将赭黄袍穿起。
Greatly pleased, the Monkey King put on the ochre robe.
將 here is the object-marker jiāng (= 把): “put on the robe.” The ochre robe is the first prop of his self-coronation.
眾等欣然排班朝拜。
众等欣然排班朝拜。
The assembled host joyfully drew up in ranks to pay homage.
朝拜 takes 朝 as cháo (“to pay homage”).
即將鬼王封為前部總督先鋒。
即将鬼王封为前部总督先锋。
He at once appointed the Demon-Kings Vanguard Commanders of the front division.
即將: 將 the object-marker again; 封為 takes 為 as wéi (“appoint as”). The new vassals are rewarded on the spot.
鬼王謝恩畢,復啟道:「大王在天許久,所授何職?」
鬼王谢恩毕,复启道:「大王在天许久,所授何职?」
Their thanks done, the Demon-Kings spoke again: “The Great King was so long in Heaven — what office were you granted?”
復啟, “spoke again”; the demon-kings draw out the grievance that will let them make their suggestion.
猴王道:「玉帝輕賢,封我做個甚麼『弼馬溫』。」
猴王道:「玉帝轻贤,封我做个甚么『弼马温』。」
The Monkey King said, “The Jade Emperor slights the worthy; he made me some kind of ‘Bìmǎwēn.’”
玉帝輕賢 — “the Jade Emperor slights the worthy”: Wukong's grievance now hardened into a charge against Heaven itself.
鬼王聽言,又奏道:「大王有此神通,如何與他養馬?就做個齊天大聖,有何不可?」
鬼王听言,又奏道:「大王有此神通,如何与他养马?就做个齐天大圣,有何不可?」
Hearing this, the Demon-Kings reported further, “With such powers as the Great King's, why tend his horses? Why not style yourself Great Sage Equal to Heaven — what could be wrong with that?”
The fateful suggestion. 齊天大聖 — “Great Sage Equal to Heaven” — is a title of pure self-assertion, claiming parity with Heaven; 不可 takes bù before third-tone 可.
猴王聞說,歡喜不勝,連道幾個「好!好!好!」
猴王闻说,欢喜不胜,连道几个「好!好!好!」
Hearing it, the Monkey King was overjoyed beyond bearing and said again and again, “Good! Good! Good!”
歡喜不勝 (“overjoyed beyond bearing”); 不勝 takes bù before first-tone 勝 (shèng). The empty grandeur of the title is exactly what delights him — the inverse of the substantive job he spurned.
教四健將:「就替我快置個旌旗,旗上寫『齊天大聖』四大字,立竿張掛。自此以後,只稱我為齊天大聖,不許再稱大王。亦可傳與各洞妖王,一體知悉。」
教四健将:「就替我快置个旌旗,旗上写『齐天大圣』四大字,立竿张挂。自此以后,只称我为齐天大圣,不许再称大王。亦可传与各洞妖王,一体知悉。」
He bade the Four Mighty Generals, “Quickly set up a banner for me, and on it write the four great characters ‘Great Sage Equal to Heaven’; raise the pole and hang it out. From now on call me only Great Sage Equal to Heaven, and no longer Great King. Let this be passed to the demon-kings of all the caves, that every one may know it.”
教 causative jiào; 稱我為 takes 為 as wéi. He legislates his own name: henceforth only 齊天大聖, never 大王. 不許 takes bù, 一體 yì.
此不在話下。
此不在话下。
Of this no more need be said.
此不在話下 — “of this no more need be said,” the storyteller's formula that closes the scene and turns the camera back to Heaven. 不在 takes bú before fourth-tone 在.
總評 Commentary
The scene that opens the chapter's second half — and its second couplet-line, 名注齊天 — turns on perfect timing. The single-horned demon-kings arrive as flatterers exactly when Wukong's pride is rawest, bearing an 赭黃袍, an ochre robe whose colour edges toward the imperial. They draw out his grievance, then plant the suggestion that will define him: if Heaven undervalues you, style yourself 齊天大聖, “Great Sage Equal to Heaven.”
The irony is precise and devastating. Wukong has just flung away a real office — laborious, ranked, with horses in his actual charge — because it was beneath his dignity; he now seizes, with delight (歡喜不勝), a title that is pure assertion, commanding nothing, governing nothing, conferring no duty or domain. What the stable-post had in substance and lacked in honor, the new title has in honor and lacks in substance. He even legislates the name into being, forbidding the old 大王 — self-coronation by decree. The being who could not bear to be a nobody would rather be an empty Somebody than a useful subordinate.
For the inner-alchemical reader this is the 心猿 at its most characteristic and most dangerous: the mind inflating itself to the measure of Heaven. 齊天 — “equal to Heaven” — is the precise overreach the cultivation tradition warns against, the ego claiming parity with the cosmic order rather than aligning to it. And the claim is made not in solitude but socially, ratified by flatterers and broadcast to every cave: the inflated self seeks an audience. The title will draw down the punitive expeditions of the scenes to come — yet, as the chapter's structure has already hinted, Heaven will subdue this rebellion in the end not by force but by granting the empty name and hollowing it further.