Canonical Classics ← 第九十四回
第九十四回
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Four Monks Feast at Their Ease in the Royal Garden · A Single Monster Cherishes Her Longing to No Purpose

巧樣宮妝,嫦娥怎比
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原文 Original text 繁體 Traditional Reader's edition 含詞賦 With rhapsody

巧樣宮妝,嫦娥怎比 How Should the Moon Lady Compare?

yúnyún

xīnránjiéhūnyīnēnàiměiqiǎoyànggōngzhuāngchángézěnxīnránjiéhūnyīnēnàiměiqiǎoyànggōngzhuāngchángézěn
lóngchāifèngchāiyànyànfēijīnyīngchúnhàochǐzhūyánniǎonuóhuāqīnglóngchāifèngchāiyànyànfēijīnyīngchúnhào齿chǐzhūyánniǎonuóhuāqīng
jǐnchóngchóngcǎicóngzhōngjǐnchóngchóngcǎicóngzhōng
xiāngqiānjīnduìxiāngqiānjīnduì

huìyúnhuìyún

huìhuìhuìyāoráojiāomèisàimáoqiángchǔmèiqīngguóqīngchénghuāhuìhuìhuìyāoráojiāomèisàimáoqiángchǔmèiqīngguóqīngchénghuā
zhuāngshìgèngxiānyánchāihuánduōyànlánxīnhuìxìngqīnggāofěnliǎnbīngróngguìdàiméixiànyuǎnshānwēiyǎotiǎoyānrǎncuánjǐnduìzhuāngshìgèngxiānyánchāihuánduōyànlánxīnhuìxìngqīnggāofěnliǎnbīngróngguìdàiméi线xiànyuǎnshānwēiyǎotiǎoyānrǎncuánjǐnduì

逐句解 Line by line

yún yún

The Lyric of Joy runs:

The first of four titles, each a single character with the word for a lyric after it. Set the four characters together and they spell out the phrase the narrator used a line ago.

xīnránjiéhūnyīnēnàiměiqiǎoyànggōngzhuāngchángézěn xīnránjiéhūnyīnēnàiměiqiǎoyànggōngzhuāngchángézěn

Joy, joy, joy — and gladness in it. The marriage is made, the love of it is sweet. Deft in her palace dress — how should the moon lady compare? Dragon pin and phoenix pin, glittering, flying with gold thread.

The lyric opens by saying its own title three times, which is what all four of them do, and the effect is a chant rather than a poem. 嫦娥怎比 is the second and last time this chapter names Chang'e, the woman who swallowed the drug of immortality and rose to live alone in the moon. The first was Eight Rules confessing that he got drunk and made sport with her, which is what got him thrown out of heaven. So the yardstick this bride is being measured against is a woman one of the men in the building has personally offended. The novel puts the two mentions two thousand six hundred and eighty-six characters apart and says nothing.

lóngchāifèngchāiyànyànfēijīnyīngchúnhàochǐzhūyánniǎonuóhuāqīng lóngchāifèngchāiyànyànfēijīnyīngchúnhào齿chǐzhūyánniǎonuóhuāqīng

Cherry lips, white teeth, a red face, slender and swaying, a body light as a flower.

A catalogue of features, and every item of it is standing stock. 櫻唇皓齒 — cherry lips and white teeth — is the fixed pair for a beauty and has been for centuries. in 嬝娜 is nuó, slender and swaying, not the the character takes when it is transcribing a foreign name. This is a description that could be pasted onto any bride in any book, which is worth holding on to, since the point of the scene is that this bride is not what she appears.

jǐnchóngchóngcǎicóngzhōng jǐnchóngchóngcǎicóngzhōng

Brocade layer on layer, in among the five colours;

Three characters and then three more. 錦重重 uses the doubled character with the reading chóng, a layer, rather than the zhòng of weight — the two senses live in one character and this chapter uses both.

xiāngqiānjīnduì xiāngqiānjīnduì

fragrance stirring and stirring, among the thousand of gold.

⚠ THE ONE UNSETTLED READING IN THIS CHAPTER, and it is a matter of printing rather than sense. The doubled word here is written with two different characters — 拂佛 — where the matching phrase above it, 錦重重, doubles one character twice. This chapter itself writes the same doubled word the ordinary way, 薰風拂拂, in the summer screen poem eight hundred and ninety-nine characters earlier. And measured over all hundred chapters, 拂佛 occurs here and nowhere else, while the ordinary spelling occurs in two other chapters. So the second character is almost certainly standing in for the first, the way this edition confuses near-identical characters elsewhere. The text is encoded as printed and the reading given is the one the second character takes everywhere else in this book, where it is the Buddha. The alternative is flagged rather than applied.

huìyún huìyún

The Lyric of Meeting runs:

The second title, and the second character of the phrase.

huìhuìhuìyāoráojiāomèisàimáoqiángchǔmèiqīngguóqīngchénghuā huìhuìhuìyāoráojiāomèisàimáoqiángchǔmèiqīngguóqīngchénghuā

Meeting, meeting, meeting — bewitching and lovely. She outdoes Mao Qiang, she puts the girls of Chu to shame. A ruin of kingdoms and a ruin of cities, she stands against flowers, she stands against jade. Her adornment is fresher still, her pins and rings the more brilliant.

Mao Qiang was a beauty of the state of Yue, and she is named in the old philosophers as the standard case — the woman all men called lovely and all fish fled from. 傾國傾城 is still one of the commonest phrases in Chinese for a beautiful woman, and it is grimmer than it sounds: it means she topples cities and topples kingdoms. It comes from a Han song about a girl whose one glance cost a city and whose second cost a state. Applied to this bride, in this chapter, it is exact.

zhuāngshìgèngxiānyánchāihuánduōyànlánxīnhuìxìngqīnggāofěnliǎnbīngróngguìdàiméixiànyuǎnshānwēiyǎotiǎoyānrǎncuánjǐnduì zhuāngshìgèngxiānyánchāihuánduōyànlánxīnhuìxìngqīnggāofěnliǎnbīngróngguìdàiméi线xiànyuǎnshānwēiyǎotiǎoyānrǎncuánjǐnduì

Orchid heart and iris nature, pure and lofty; powdered face and ice-clear skin, honoured and noble. Dark brows in a single line, faint as distant hills; graceful and delicate, gathered in ranks of brocade.

遠山 brows — eyebrows drawn as a far range of hills — is a real cosmetic style with a name and a history, credited to a Han beauty and imitated for centuries afterwards. is cuán again, gathering in — the same reading it took in Tripitaka's autumn poem about chrysanthemums a few hundred characters ago, and the same one it takes here about women in a line.


總評 Commentary

Two of four lyrics, and they are doing something the chapter has not done before: describing the bride. Every reader has been waiting for this since the last chapter, when an old abbot showed Pilgrim a girl chained in a cell claiming to be the princess of this country.

What we get is a wall of convention. Cherry lips, white teeth, distant-hill brows, better than Chang'e, topples cities. Not one detail in either lyric could not be pasted onto any beautiful woman in any Ming book, and that is the joke and the point together: the poems tell us nothing because there is nothing to tell. Nobody in the palace has looked at her properly, and the verse looks at her exactly as hard as they do.

The one phrase that means what it says is the one nobody intends literally. She is a beauty who topples kingdoms. The chapter has four hundred characters left to run.