太子索戰,魔王出觀 The Prince Offers Battle, and the Fiend Comes Out to Look at Him
那太子抖擻雄威,與大聖跳在高山,徑至洞口,但見那洞門緊閉,崖下無精。行者上前高叫:「潑魔!快開門,還我師父來也。」那洞裡把門的小妖看見,急報道:「大王,孫行者領著一個小童男,在門前叫戰哩。」那魔王道:「這猴子鐵棒被我奪了,空手難爭,想是請得救兵來也。」叫:「取兵器。」魔王綽槍在手,走到門外觀看,那小童男生得相貌清奇,十分精壯。真個是:那太子抖擞雄威,与大圣跳在高山,径至洞口,但见那洞门紧闭,崖下无精。行者上前高叫:「泼魔!快开门,还我师父来也。」那洞里把门的小妖看见,急报道:「大王,孙行者领着一个小童男,在门前叫战哩。」那魔王道:「这猴子铁棒被我夺了,空手难争,想是请得救兵来也。」叫:「取兵器。」魔王绰枪在手,走到门外观看,那小童男生得相貌清奇,十分精壮。真个是:
逐句解 Line by line
The prince shook out his warlike bearing and leapt with the Great Sage up the high mountain, going straight to the cave mouth; but they found the cave door shut fast and not a goblin below the cliff.
The prince arrives in full fig and finds nobody home. 抖擻雄威 is to shake out one's martial bearing the way a bird shakes out its feathers. 那 appears twice, both times the pointing nà; 太子 takes zǐ.
Pilgrim went up and shouted aloud, "Foul fiend! Open the door at once and give me back my master!"
還我師父 takes huán, to give back — not the hái that means "still," which is the reading a machine will produce every time and which would turn a demand into a shrug. The two are miles apart in sense. The shout leaves the speech open and the demand runs straight on from it.
The little goblins keeping the door inside the cave saw them and reported in haste: "Your Majesty, Sun the Pilgrim has brought a small boy-child, and they are at the door calling for a fight."
那洞裡 takes nà, 看見 takes kàn, 領著 uses 著 as zhe for an action under way, and 一個 gives yí. 小童男 is what a doorkeeper actually sees: not a guardian god of the three altars, just a small boy — which is the joke the fiend picks up again two passages later.
The demon king said, "This monkey had his iron cudgel taken by me and cannot well contend empty-handed. I suppose he has gone and fetched rescuers."
那魔王 takes nà, 猴子 the light zi, 奪了 the light le, 難爭 takes nán, and 請得 takes dé. Note that the fiend reasons just as carefully as Wukong did back in the second passage — and with much better material to work from.
He called, "Bring my weapon."
Four characters. The book gives the fiend the shortest orders and the longest victories.
The demon king took his spear in hand and walked out of the door to look. The small boy-child was of a clear and striking cast of feature, and altogether sturdy.
觀看 puts the two characters of looking side by side, guān then kàn, and the whole segment turns on the act of sizing somebody up. 那小童男 takes nà, 生得 takes dé, 十分 takes fēn, and 相貌 takes xiàng, the looks-and-features reading — not the xiāng meaning "each other" that turns up in 相迎 in the very next passage.
Truly he was:
Three characters of prose to open the showcase: "truly he was —" and then the portrait.
Jade face and tender look, round as the full moon; / Vermilion lips, a squared mouth, showing silver teeth.
What follows is a 贊, a set-piece portrait in five couplets of seven characters — and the crucial thing is whose eyes it is given through. This is what the fiend sees when he opens his own front door.
Eyes flashing lightning, the pupils standing out; / Broad brow gathering rose-cloud, hair bound in a knot.
髽 zhuā is strictly a mourning knot in classical usage, but here it just means the twin topknots Nezha wears in every picture ever made of him. 掣電 is to draw lightning across the sky, the way a hand draws a blade.
Embroidered sashes dancing in the wind, flying coloured flame; / Brocade robe catching the sun, throwing off golden flowers.
The middle couplets move from the face to the kit, which is how a 贊 is built — it takes an inventory rather than painting a picture.
The ringed cord bright and burning, clasping the heart-mirror; / Precious mail glittering, setting off the battle boots.
絛 takes tāo, a woven cord. 心鏡 is the round mirror-plate worn at the breast of a suit of armour, half decoration and half armour proper.
Small of body, loud of voice, and full of splendour: / Guardian of the teaching in the three heavens, the fierce Nezha.
護教 takes jiào, the doctrine reading. The last line finally names him — and names him as an office, 三天護教, guardian of the teaching through the three heavens. That is the reply to the doorkeeper's "small boy-child."
The portrait is placed where it does the most work: between a doorkeeper calling Nezha a small boy-child and the fiend calling him Li's third son. Five couplets stand between the two dismissals and answer both of them.
A 贊 of this kind takes an inventory rather than describing — face, eyes, sashes, robe, cord, mirror, mail, boots — and closes on the title. That happens to be the order in which anybody sizes up an opponent standing in a doorway.
還 takes huán in this passage, to give back, against the hái of 還是如此 and 還有 earlier in the chapter.