Canonical Classics ← 第八十九回
第八十九回
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The Yellow Lion Spirit Lays On a Rake Banquet in Vain · Metal, Wood and Earth Plot an Uproar at Leopard-Head Mountain

昏昏沉沉
模式 Mode Read Study
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字體 Script
原文 Original text 繁體 Traditional Reader's edition

昏昏沉沉 We Woke Only Just Now

zuózhèzǎowǎnlǐngleyínzimǎizhūyángzǒuzhìshān西biānzhīshàngjiànmáoliǎnléigōngzuǐdeshàngcuìlemenkǒumenjiùjiǎoruǎnkǒuqiángnéngyánnéngbèibāndǎoyínzisōulepáiérjiěleliǎnghūnhūnchénchénzhídàoshícáixǐngdàojiājiànyānhuǒwèifángshèjìnjiēshāoleyòujiànzhǔgōngbìngxiǎotóuzàishāngxīntòngzhīzhèhuǒshìzěnshēngde。」zuózhèzǎowǎnlǐngleyínzimǎizhūyángzǒuzhìshān西biānzhīshàngjiànmáoliǎnléigōngzuǐdeshàngcuìlemenkǒumenjiùjiǎoruǎnkǒuqiángnéngyánnéngbèibāndǎoyínzisōulepáiérjiěleliǎnghūnhūnchénchénzhídàoshícáixǐngdàojiājiànyānhuǒwèifángshèjìnjiēshāoleyòujiànzhǔgōngbìngxiǎotóuzàishāngxīntòngzhīzhèhuǒshìzěnshēngde。」


逐句解 Line by line

zuózhèzǎowǎnlǐngleyínzimǎizhūyángzǒuzhìshān西biānzhīshàngjiànmáoliǎnléigōngzuǐdeshàngcuìlemenkǒumenjiùjiǎoruǎnkǒuqiángnéngyánnéng zuózhèzǎowǎnlǐngleyínzimǎizhūyángzǒuzhìshān西biānzhīshàngjiànmáoliǎnléigōngzuǐdeshàngcuìlemenkǒumenjiùjiǎoruǎnkǒuqiángnéngyánnéng

"Yesterday about this hour we drew the silver and went off to buy pigs and sheep, and on the highroad west of the mountain we met a monk with a hairy face and a thunder-god's beak. He spat at us once, and our legs went soft and our mouths went stiff, and we could not speak and could not move a step.

The whole encounter from the other side, and it lasts one line. What Pilgrim did in a sentence of narrative took these two a day and a night to live through. 腳軟口強 balances soft against stiff — the legs give way, the mouth locks.

bèibāndǎoyínzisōulepáiérjiěle bèibāndǎoyínzisōulepáiérjiěle

"He turned us over, searched away our silver, and untied our tablets.

Fifteen graphs, and every item is one we watched him take. The tablets are the part that mattered, though the two of them still have no idea why.

liǎnghūnhūnchénchénzhídàoshícáixǐng liǎnghūnhūnchénchénzhídàoshícáixǐng

"The two of us were dazed and befogged, and only came round at this very hour.

昏昏沉沉 doubles both halves of a word for muddled and heavy-headed. Pilgrim said the spell would hold until this hour the next day, and it has held to the hour exactly.

dàojiājiànyānhuǒwèifángshèjìnjiēshāole dàojiājiànyānhuǒwèifángshèjìnjiēshāole

"And when we got home, the smoke and fire were not out yet, and the buildings were all burnt.

They walked home from the road expecting supper. The novel gives them the smoke first, as it gave it to the rescue party a moment ago.

yòujiànzhǔgōngbìngxiǎotóu yòujiànzhǔgōngbìngxiǎotóu

"And we could not find our master, nor the chiefs, great or small.

The most ordinary sentence in the chapter and one of the worst. They are looking for colleagues, and the reader knows exactly where those colleagues are, because we watched them being gathered up with the furniture.

zàishāngxīntòng zàishāngxīntòng

"So we are here grieving and weeping.

Seven graphs of explanation offered to a master who has just accused them of being impostors.

zhīzhèhuǒshìzěnshēngde。」 zhīzhèhuǒshìzěnshēngde。」

"We do not know how this fire started."

They never will. Nobody in the story ever tells them, and the chapter moves on without pausing over it.


總評 Commentary

Everything these two say is true, and every part of it is something the reader watched happen. That is the whole design of the passage: it retells the chapter's cleverest moment from the point of view of the people it was done to, and the cleverness does not survive the retelling.

The timing is exact and rather cruel. Pilgrim told his brother the spell would hold until this hour tomorrow, and it does — so the two servants regain the use of their legs at precisely the moment there is nothing left to walk back to. The magic works perfectly and that is the problem.

They ask how the fire started and get no answer. The novel could easily have given them one; instead it lets the question sit, and moves straight into the Yellow Lion's grief. It is the last thing either of them says in the chapter.