Canonical Classics ← 第八十九回
第八十九回
huángshījīngshèdīngyàn
jīnnàobàotóushān

The Yellow Lion Spirit Lays On a Rake Banquet in Vain · Metal, Wood and Earth Plot an Uproar at Leopard-Head Mountain

三僧攢一怪
模式 Mode Read Study
拼音 Pinyin Off
字體 Script
原文 Original text 繁體 Traditional Reader's edition 含詞賦 With rhapsody

三僧攢一怪 Three Monks Close On One

zhèchángcóngtiānjǐngzhōngdòuchūqiánménkànsānsēngcuánguàihǎoshāzhèchángcóngtiānjǐngzhōngdòuchūqiánménkànsānsēngcuánguàihǎoshā

bàngruòfēnggǔngǔnbàngruòfēnggǔngǔn
xiángyāozhàng滿mǎntiānxiámíngchǎnshēnyúnshēngxiángyāozhàngmǎntiānxiámíngchǎnshēnyúnshēng
hǎosānxiānliàndānhuǒguāngcǎihuǎngjīngshénguǐhǎosānxiānliàndānhuǒguāngcǎihuǎngjīngshénguǐ
xíngzhěshīwēishènyǒunéngyāojīngdàobǎoduōxíngzhěshīwēishènyǒunéngyāojīngdàobǎoduō
tiānpéngjièxiǎnshéntōngjiàngshāsēngyīnggèngměitiānpéngjièxiǎnshéntōngjiàngshāsēngyīnggèngměi
xiōngyùnmóukǒudòngzhōngxīngdòuxiōngyùnmóukǒudòngzhōngxīngdòu
guàiháoqiángnòngqiǎoguāiyīngxióngkānguàiháoqiángnòngqiǎoguāiyīngxióngkān
dāngshíshāzhìtóu西yāoxiéruǎnnánxiāngdāngshíshāzhìtóu西yāoxiéruǎnnánxiāng

逐句解 Line by line

zhèchángcóngtiānjǐngzhōngdòuchūqiánménkànsānsēngcuánguàihǎoshā zhèchángcóngtiānjǐngzhōngdòuchūqiánménkànsānsēngcuánguàihǎoshā

This bout carried them fighting out of the courtyard to the front gate. Look at the three monks closing on the one fiend — a fine fight it was:

is cháng here, the measure word for an episode or a bout, which is the standing house reading; the other one, for a place, is wrong for a thing that happens. is cuán, to converge or close in from several sides at once — not the hoarding reading the graph bases at. Three onto one, from three directions.

bàngruòfēnggǔngǔn bàngruòfēnggǔngǔn

Whirring, the rod like wind; rolling, the rake like rain.

Five graphs a side, each opening on a doubled sound-word. Wind and rain are the standard pairing for two forces arriving together, and the verse spends its first line establishing that this is a storm rather than a duel.

xiángyāozhàng滿mǎntiānxiámíngchǎnshēnyúnshēng xiángyāozhàngmǎntiānxiámíngchǎnshēnyúnshēng

The demon-quelling staff swings up, and the sky fills with rosy cloud; the four-bright spade thrusts out, and the clouds grow figured silk.

keeps xiáng, the subduing reading of the staff's own name. The line lengthens to seven graphs a side and the weapons stop being weapons: what we watch is the coloured light coming off them.

hǎosānxiānliàndānhuǒguāngcǎihuǎngjīngshénguǐ hǎosānxiānliàndānhuǒguāngcǎihuǎngjīngshénguǐ

Like three immortals refining the great elixir, the fire-light flashing colours to startle gods and ghosts.

The image is a furnace. Three adepts working a cauldron of cinnabar was the central picture of Chinese alchemy, and the verse casts the three brothers in that scene — the monster is the ingredient being worked on.

xíngzhěshīwēishènyǒunéngyāojīngdàobǎoduō xíngzhěshīwēishènyǒunéngyāojīngdàobǎoduō

Pilgrim shows his power, well able for it; the fiend has stolen treasure, and much in the wrong.

The verse pauses the fighting to give the moral score. Chinese battle verse does this without embarrassment: it tells you who is right while it tells you who is winning.

tiānpéngjièxiǎnshéntōngjiàngshāsēngyīnggèngměi tiānpéngjièxiǎnshéntōngjiàngshāsēngyīnggèngměi

Marshal of the Heavenly Reeds, Eight Rules, displays his magic; the great general Sha Monk is finer still.

is jiàng here, the noun — a general — and it is the one place in the chapter where this graph is not the little word that carries an object forward. 天蓬 is Eight Rules's old rank in heaven, Marshal of the Heavenly Reeds, and the verse produces it here as a formal roll-call. It gives both brothers their titles rather than their nicknames, which is how a battle piece dresses its combatants.

xiōngyùnmóukǒudòngzhōngxīngdòu xiōngyùnmóukǒudòngzhōngxīngdòu

The brothers, of one mind, work their plan together; and in the Tiger-Mouth Cave the fight rises up.

is xīng, the verb meaning to rise or start up, not the noun for high spirits. And the line names the thing that actually wins this fight: not power but agreement — the three of them thinking alike.

guàiháoqiángnòngqiǎoguāiyīngxióngkān guàiháoqiángnòngqiǎoguāiyīngxióngkān

That fiend is bold and strong, and plays it clever and sly; four heroes well matched against each other.

The verse counts the monster as one of the four heroes, which is generous and entirely conventional — a fight is worth describing only if the loser was worth fighting.

dāngshíshāzhìtóu西yāoxiéruǎnnánxiāng dāngshíshāzhìtóu西yāoxiéruǎnnánxiāng

They fought that day until the sun went west, and the fiend's strength grew soft, and he could hold no longer.

The whole afternoon in fourteen graphs. The verse ends on the sun going down because that is what decides it: nobody is beaten, the monster simply runs out of daylight and strength together.


總評 Commentary

Battle rhapsodies in this novel follow a fixed shape, and this one is a clean example: the weapons first, then the light coming off them, then a roll-call of the fighters with their proper titles, then the verdict. Nobody is wounded and no blow is described. What is being celebrated is the spectacle.

The alchemical image at the centre repays a second look. Three immortals tending a furnace of cinnabar was the standard picture of the inner work of self-perfection, and the whole novel can be read as an allegory of it — the chapter title names the brothers as Metal, Wood and Earth, three of the five phases. So the verse is describing a brawl in a courtyard and a spiritual operation at the same time, and means both.

The line that decides it is the plain one: the brothers are of one mind. This chapter has spent its first half showing them accusing smiths, disbelieving each other and wrecking their own plan. In the fight they finally act as one thing, and that is the only advantage the verse credits them with.