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第八十九回
黃huáng獅shī精jīng虛xū設shè釘dīng鈀pá宴yàn
金jīn木mù土tǔ計jì鬧nào豹bào頭tóu山shān

The Yellow Lion Spirit Lays On a Rake Banquet in Vain · Metal, Wood and Earth Plot an Uproar at Leopard-Head Mountain

三僧攢一怪
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原文 Original text 繁體 Traditional Reader's edition 含詞賦 With rhapsody

三僧攢一怪 Three Monks Close On One

這zhè一yì場cháng,從cóng天tiān井jǐng中zhōng鬥dòu出chū前qián門mén,看kàn他tā三sān僧sēng攢cuán一yí怪guài,好hǎo殺shā:这zhè一yì场cháng,从cóng天tiān井jǐng中zhōng斗dòu出chū前qián门mén,看kàn他tā三sān僧sēng攒cuán一yí怪guài,好hǎo杀shā:

呼hū呼hū棒bàng若ruò風fēng,滾gǔn滾gǔn鈀pá如rú雨yǔ。呼hū呼hū棒bàng若ruò风fēng,滚gǔn滚gǔn钯pá如rú雨yǔ。
降xiáng妖yāo杖zhàng舉jǔ滿mǎn天tiān霞xiá,四sì明míng鏟chǎn伸shēn雲yún生shēng綺qǐ。降xiáng妖yāo杖zhàng举jǔ满mǎn天tiān霞xiá,四sì明míng铲chǎn伸shēn云yún生shēng绮qǐ。
好hǎo似sì三sān仙xiān煉liàn大dà丹dān,火huǒ光guāng彩cǎi晃huǎng驚jīng神shén鬼guǐ。好hǎo似sì三sān仙xiān炼liàn大dà丹dān,火huǒ光guāng彩cǎi晃huǎng惊jīng神shén鬼guǐ。
行xíng者zhě施shī威wēi甚shèn有yǒu能néng,妖yāo精jīng盜dào寶bǎo多duō無wú禮lǐ。行xíng者zhě施shī威wēi甚shèn有yǒu能néng,妖yāo精jīng盗dào宝bǎo多duō无wú礼lǐ。
天tiān蓬péng八bā戒jiè顯xiǎn神shén通tōng,大dà將jiàng沙shā僧sēng英yīng更gèng美měi。天tiān蓬péng八bā戒jiè显xiǎn神shén通tōng,大dà将jiàng沙shā僧sēng英yīng更gèng美měi。
弟dì兄xiōng合hé意yì運yùn機jī謀móu,虎hǔ口kǒu洞dòng中zhōng興xīng鬥dòu起qǐ。弟dì兄xiōng合hé意yì运yùn机jī谋móu,虎hǔ口kǒu洞dòng中zhōng兴xīng斗dòu起qǐ。
那nà怪guài豪háo強qiáng弄nòng巧qiǎo乖guāi,四sì個gè英yīng雄xióng堪kān廝sī比bǐ。那nà怪guài豪háo强qiáng弄nòng巧qiǎo乖guāi,四sì个gè英yīng雄xióng堪kān厮sī比bǐ。
當dāng時shí殺shā至zhì日rì頭tóu西xī,妖yāo邪xié力lì軟ruǎn難nán相xiāng抵dǐ。当dāng时shí杀shā至zhì日rì头tóu西xī,妖yāo邪xié力lì软ruǎn难nán相xiāng抵dǐ。

逐句解 Line by line

這zhè一yì場cháng,從cóng天tiān井jǐng中zhōng鬥dòu出chū前qián門mén,看kàn他tā三sān僧sēng攢cuán一yí怪guài,好hǎo殺shā: 这zhè一yì场cháng,从cóng天tiān井jǐng中zhōng斗dòu出chū前qián门mén,看kàn他tā三sān僧sēng攒cuán一yí怪guài,好hǎo杀shā:

This bout carried them fighting out of the courtyard to the front gate. Look at the three monks closing on the one fiend — a fine fight it was:

場 is cháng here, the measure word for an episode or a bout, which is the standing house reading; the other one, for a place, is wrong for a thing that happens. 攢 is cuán, to converge or close in from several sides at once — not the hoarding reading the graph bases at. Three onto one, from three directions.

呼hū呼hū棒bàng若ruò風fēng,滾gǔn滾gǔn鈀pá如rú雨yǔ。 呼hū呼hū棒bàng若ruò风fēng,滚gǔn滚gǔn钯pá如rú雨yǔ。

Whirring, the rod like wind; rolling, the rake like rain.

Five graphs a side, each opening on a doubled sound-word. Wind and rain are the standard pairing for two forces arriving together, and the verse spends its first line establishing that this is a storm rather than a duel.

降xiáng妖yāo杖zhàng舉jǔ滿mǎn天tiān霞xiá,四sì明míng鏟chǎn伸shēn雲yún生shēng綺qǐ。 降xiáng妖yāo杖zhàng举jǔ满mǎn天tiān霞xiá,四sì明míng铲chǎn伸shēn云yún生shēng绮qǐ。

The demon-quelling staff swings up, and the sky fills with rosy cloud; the four-bright spade thrusts out, and the clouds grow figured silk.

降 keeps xiáng, the subduing reading of the staff's own name. The line lengthens to seven graphs a side and the weapons stop being weapons: what we watch is the coloured light coming off them.

好hǎo似sì三sān仙xiān煉liàn大dà丹dān,火huǒ光guāng彩cǎi晃huǎng驚jīng神shén鬼guǐ。 好hǎo似sì三sān仙xiān炼liàn大dà丹dān,火huǒ光guāng彩cǎi晃huǎng惊jīng神shén鬼guǐ。

Like three immortals refining the great elixir, the fire-light flashing colours to startle gods and ghosts.

The image is a furnace. Three adepts working a cauldron of cinnabar was the central picture of Chinese alchemy, and the verse casts the three brothers in that scene — the monster is the ingredient being worked on.

行xíng者zhě施shī威wēi甚shèn有yǒu能néng,妖yāo精jīng盜dào寶bǎo多duō無wú禮lǐ。 行xíng者zhě施shī威wēi甚shèn有yǒu能néng,妖yāo精jīng盗dào宝bǎo多duō无wú礼lǐ。

Pilgrim shows his power, well able for it; the fiend has stolen treasure, and much in the wrong.

The verse pauses the fighting to give the moral score. Chinese battle verse does this without embarrassment: it tells you who is right while it tells you who is winning.

天tiān蓬péng八bā戒jiè顯xiǎn神shén通tōng,大dà將jiàng沙shā僧sēng英yīng更gèng美měi。 天tiān蓬péng八bā戒jiè显xiǎn神shén通tōng,大dà将jiàng沙shā僧sēng英yīng更gèng美měi。

Marshal of the Heavenly Reeds, Eight Rules, displays his magic; the great general Sha Monk is finer still.

將 is jiàng here, the noun — a general — and it is the one place in the chapter where this graph is not the little word that carries an object forward. 天蓬 is Eight Rules's old rank in heaven, Marshal of the Heavenly Reeds, and the verse produces it here as a formal roll-call. It gives both brothers their titles rather than their nicknames, which is how a battle piece dresses its combatants.

弟dì兄xiōng合hé意yì運yùn機jī謀móu,虎hǔ口kǒu洞dòng中zhōng興xīng鬥dòu起qǐ。 弟dì兄xiōng合hé意yì运yùn机jī谋móu,虎hǔ口kǒu洞dòng中zhōng兴xīng斗dòu起qǐ。

The brothers, of one mind, work their plan together; and in the Tiger-Mouth Cave the fight rises up.

興 is xīng, the verb meaning to rise or start up, not the noun for high spirits. And the line names the thing that actually wins this fight: not power but agreement — the three of them thinking alike.

那nà怪guài豪háo強qiáng弄nòng巧qiǎo乖guāi,四sì個gè英yīng雄xióng堪kān廝sī比bǐ。 那nà怪guài豪háo强qiáng弄nòng巧qiǎo乖guāi,四sì个gè英yīng雄xióng堪kān厮sī比bǐ。

That fiend is bold and strong, and plays it clever and sly; four heroes well matched against each other.

The verse counts the monster as one of the four heroes, which is generous and entirely conventional — a fight is worth describing only if the loser was worth fighting.

當dāng時shí殺shā至zhì日rì頭tóu西xī,妖yāo邪xié力lì軟ruǎn難nán相xiāng抵dǐ。 当dāng时shí杀shā至zhì日rì头tóu西xī,妖yāo邪xié力lì软ruǎn难nán相xiāng抵dǐ。

They fought that day until the sun went west, and the fiend's strength grew soft, and he could hold no longer.

The whole afternoon in fourteen graphs. The verse ends on the sun going down because that is what decides it: nobody is beaten, the monster simply runs out of daylight and strength together.


總評 Commentary

Battle rhapsodies in this novel follow a fixed shape, and this one is a clean example: the weapons first, then the light coming off them, then a roll-call of the fighters with their proper titles, then the verdict. Nobody is wounded and no blow is described. What is being celebrated is the spectacle.

The alchemical image at the centre repays a second look. Three immortals tending a furnace of cinnabar was the standard picture of the inner work of self-perfection, and the whole novel can be read as an allegory of it — the chapter title names the brothers as Metal, Wood and Earth, three of the five phases. So the verse is describing a brawl in a courtyard and a spiritual operation at the same time, and means both.

The line that decides it is the plain one: the brothers are of one mind. This chapter has spent its first half showing them accusing smiths, disbelieving each other and wrecking their own plan. In the fight they finally act as one thing, and that is the only advantage the verse credits them with.