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第八十九回
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The Yellow Lion Spirit Lays On a Rake Banquet in Vain · Metal, Wood and Earth Plot an Uproar at Leopard-Head Mountain

桃源洞
模式 Mode Read Study
拼音 Pinyin Off
字體 Script 繁
原文 Original text 繁體 Traditional Reader's edition 含詞賦 With rhapsody

桃源洞 Not Unlike Peach Blossom Spring

但dàn見jiàn那nà門mén兒ér外wài:但dàn见jiàn那nà门mén儿ér外wài:

周zhōu圍wéi山shān遶rào翠cuì,一yí脈mài氣qì連lián城chéng。周zhōu围wéi山shān绕rào翠cuì,一yí脉mài气qì连lián城chéng。
峭qiào壁bì扳bān青qīng蔓màn,高gāo崖yá掛guà紫zǐ荊jīng。峭qiào壁bì扳bān青qīng蔓màn,高gāo崖yá挂guà紫zǐ荆jīng。
鳥niǎo聲shēng深shēn樹shù匝zā,花huā影yǐng洞dòng門mén迎yíng。鸟niǎo声shēng深shēn树shù匝zā,花huā影yǐng洞dòng门mén迎yíng。
不bú亞yà桃táo源yuán洞dòng,堪kān宜yí避bì世shì情qíng。不bú亚yà桃táo源yuán洞dòng,堪kān宜yí避bì世shì情qíng。

逐句解 Line by line

但dàn見jiàn那nà門mén兒ér外wài: 但dàn见jiàn那nà门mén儿ér外wài:

And this is what was to be seen outside that gate:

但見 — only see, or one saw only — is the standard cue for a descriptive set-piece, and here it introduces four balanced five-graph lines rather than a long rhapsody.

周zhōu圍wéi山shān遶rào翠cuì,一yí脈mài氣qì連lián城chéng。 周zhōu围wéi山shān绕rào翠cuì,一yí脉mài气qì连lián城chéng。

All round, the hills wind green; a single vein of air joins it to the city.

遶 is an older way of writing the graph for encircling, and the line picks up the dragon vein from the mountain set-piece earlier: the same ridge of energy that ran down to Jade-Flower Prefecture is here at the monster's door.

峭qiào壁bì扳bān青qīng蔓màn,高gāo崖yá掛guà紫zǐ荊jīng。 峭qiào壁bì扳bān青qīng蔓màn,高gāo崖yá挂guà紫zǐ荆jīng。

On sheer cliffs, green creepers climb; from high crags hang purple redbuds.

Both halves put the place first and the plant second, which keeps the two lines locked together. Redbud is a spring-flowering tree, and its presence makes this a pleasant, seasonal, entirely unthreatening cliff.

鳥niǎo聲shēng深shēn樹shù匝zā,花huā影yǐng洞dòng門mén迎yíng。 鸟niǎo声shēng深shēn树shù匝zā,花huā影yǐng洞dòng门mén迎yíng。

Birdsong rings round the deep trees; flower-shadows greet the cave mouth.

The cave mouth is welcoming visitors, and the verb is doing that on purpose. Four graphs earlier this place was called a tiger's mouth.

不bú亞yà桃táo源yuán洞dòng,堪kān宜yí避bì世shì情qíng。 不bú亚yà桃táo源yuán洞dòng,堪kān宜yí避bì世shì情qíng。

It yields nothing to the Peach Blossom Spring, and is fit for fleeing the world.

The comparison is to the most famous hidden valley in Chinese literature — the fisherman's paradise of Tao Yuanming's fable, a place outside time where refugees from war live in peace. The verse ends by calling a monster's lair the ideal hermitage, and means it.


總評 Commentary

Four lines, and every one of them is beautiful. That is the point. The novel has just spent eight lines describing a doorkeeper as a nightmare, and now describes the door itself as somewhere a poet might retire to.

The Peach Blossom Spring is the reference that seals it. Tao Yuanming's story of a fisherman stumbling into a valley of people who fled the wars centuries before is the standard Chinese image for an unspoiled refuge, and invoking it here is close to calling the Tiger-Mouth Cave a paradise.

There is a real idea underneath the joke. Monsters in this book almost always live somewhere lovely, and their caves are furnished with the vocabulary of retirement and retreat. What separates a fiend's hideout from a hermit's is not the landscape but what is being done inside it — and inside this one there is a stolen woman and a stolen rake.