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第八十九回
huángshījīngshèdīngyàn
jīnnàobàotóushān

The Yellow Lion Spirit Lays On a Rake Banquet in Vain · Metal, Wood and Earth Plot an Uproar at Leopard-Head Mountain

桃源洞
模式 Mode Read Study
拼音 Pinyin Off
字體 Script
原文 Original text 繁體 Traditional Reader's edition 含詞賦 With rhapsody

桃源洞 Not Unlike Peach Blossom Spring

dànjiànménérwàidànjiànménérwài

zhōuwéishānràocuìmàiliánchéngzhōuwéishānràocuìmàiliánchéng
qiàobānqīngmàngāoguàjīngqiàobānqīngmàngāoguàjīng
niǎoshēngshēnshùhuāyǐngdòngményíngniǎoshēngshēnshùhuāyǐngdòngményíng
táoyuándòngkānshìqíngtáoyuándòngkānshìqíng

逐句解 Line by line

dànjiànménérwài dànjiànménérwài

And this is what was to be seen outside that gate:

但見 — only see, or one saw only — is the standard cue for a descriptive set-piece, and here it introduces four balanced five-graph lines rather than a long rhapsody.

zhōuwéishānràocuìmàiliánchéng zhōuwéishānràocuìmàiliánchéng

All round, the hills wind green; a single vein of air joins it to the city.

is an older way of writing the graph for encircling, and the line picks up the dragon vein from the mountain set-piece earlier: the same ridge of energy that ran down to Jade-Flower Prefecture is here at the monster's door.

qiàobānqīngmàngāoguàjīng qiàobānqīngmàngāoguàjīng

On sheer cliffs, green creepers climb; from high crags hang purple redbuds.

Both halves put the place first and the plant second, which keeps the two lines locked together. Redbud is a spring-flowering tree, and its presence makes this a pleasant, seasonal, entirely unthreatening cliff.

niǎoshēngshēnshùhuāyǐngdòngményíng niǎoshēngshēnshùhuāyǐngdòngményíng

Birdsong rings round the deep trees; flower-shadows greet the cave mouth.

The cave mouth is welcoming visitors, and the verb is doing that on purpose. Four graphs earlier this place was called a tiger's mouth.

táoyuándòngkānshìqíng táoyuándòngkānshìqíng

It yields nothing to the Peach Blossom Spring, and is fit for fleeing the world.

The comparison is to the most famous hidden valley in Chinese literature — the fisherman's paradise of Tao Yuanming's fable, a place outside time where refugees from war live in peace. The verse ends by calling a monster's lair the ideal hermitage, and means it.


總評 Commentary

Four lines, and every one of them is beautiful. That is the point. The novel has just spent eight lines describing a doorkeeper as a nightmare, and now describes the door itself as somewhere a poet might retire to.

The Peach Blossom Spring is the reference that seals it. Tao Yuanming's story of a fisherman stumbling into a valley of people who fled the wars centuries before is the standard Chinese image for an unspoiled refuge, and invoking it here is close to calling the Tiger-Mouth Cave a paradise.

There is a real idea underneath the joke. Monsters in this book almost always live somewhere lovely, and their caves are furnished with the vocabulary of retirement and retreat. What separates a fiend's hideout from a hermit's is not the landscape but what is being done inside it — and inside this one there is a stolen woman and a stolen rake.