棒槍鏖戰 Cudgel and Spear in Pitched Battle
正講處,只聽得那山坡下鑼鼓齊鳴,喊聲振地。原來是兕大王帥眾精靈來趕行者。行者見了,叫道:「好好好,正合吾意。列位請坐,待老孫再去捉他。」好大聖,舉鐵棒劈面迎來,喝道:「潑魔那裡走!看棍!」那怪使槍支住,罵道:「賊猴頭!著實無禮。你怎麼白晝劫吾物件?」行者道:「我把你這個不知死的孽畜!你倒弄圈套白晝搶奪我物,那件兒是你的?不要走,吃老爺一棍!」那怪物掄槍隔架。這一場好戰:正讲处,只听得那山坡下锣鼓齐鸣,喊声振地。原来是兕大王帅众精灵来赶行者。行者见了,叫道:「好好好,正合吾意。列位请坐,待老孙再去捉他。」好大圣,举铁棒劈面迎来,喝道:「泼魔那里走!看棍!」那怪使枪支住,骂道:「贼猴头!着实无礼。你怎么白昼劫吾物件?」行者道:「我把你这个不知死的孽畜!你倒弄圈套白昼抢夺我物,那件儿是你的?不要走,吃老爷一棍!」那怪物抡枪隔架。这一场好战:
逐句解 Line by line
Just as they were talking, there came from below the mountain slope a clashing of gongs and drums together, and a shouting that shook the ground.
Gongs and drums under the slope: the demon is coming out to fight. 正講處 uses the 正…處 frame, "just at the point of —"; 處 is chù. 只聽得: 得 is dé. 那山坡 points at a particular slope, so 那 is nà.
It was the Rhinoceros King, leading out his host of sprites in pursuit of Pilgrim.
兕大王. The 兕 (sì) is the one-horned wild ox of the old books — the beast in the Analects tag 虎兕出於柙, "the tiger and the wild ox break out of their cage." The demon's true shape, revealed at the very end of the chapter, is Lord Lao's blue ox, so the title has been telling the reader the answer from the first line. 帥眾: 帥 is shuài, standing in for 率, "to lead."
Pilgrim saw them and cried: "Good, good, good — this falls out just as I would have it. Be seated, my lords, and let Old Monkey go and take him."
見了: 了 is le. 列位 is the polite plural, "you gentlemen", addressed to the assembled gods. 正合吾意 means "falls in exactly with what I wanted."
The fine Great Sage raised his iron cudgel and came on straight in the monster's face, roaring: "Where do you think you are going, wretched fiend? Mind the cudgel!"
那裡走 is not asking for directions; it is the challenge "where do you think you are going?" — so 那 is nǎ. 看棍: 看 is kàn. This is the warning shouted a beat before the blow lands, exactly like 看刀 or 看箭 — the fighter's equivalent of "heads up." 劈面 is "full in the face." 喝道: 喝 is hè, to shout, never the hē of drinking.
The monster fended him off with his spear and cursed him: "Thieving ape's head! This is downright insolence.
那怪 points, so 那 is nà. 著實: 著 is zhuó in this set phrase, "downright, in very truth." 支住 is to prop a weapon across and stop a blow.
"How dare you plunder my goods in broad daylight?"
白晝, "broad daylight." Keep an eye on it — Pilgrim throws the identical phrase back at him two lines later, which is the point of the whole exchange. 物件 means articles, gear, stuff.
Pilgrim said: "Why, you accursed beast, too dull to know your own death is upon you!
我把你這個… is the standard opening of a vernacular tirade, and it is deliberately left hanging: the verb never arrives, swallowed by the insult that follows. 孽畜: 畜 is chù, the noun "beast", not the verb xù, to rear animals.
"It is you who work a snare-ring and seize my things in broad daylight — which of them is yours? Don't run: take a rod from your lord and master!"
Here is the retort, and the joke is exact. 你倒弄圈套: 倒 is dào, "you, on the contrary —", not the dǎo of knocking over. 那件兒 asks "which one", so 那 is nǎ, with 兒 as er. And 圈套 is a pun the English cannot quite hold: the word for a trap or snare is built on 圈, the ring — so the demon's ring is literally a ring-trap. Pilgrim is calling the thing what it is and insulting him with it at the same time.
The monster swung up his spear and warded off the blow.
那怪物 points, so 那 is nà. 隔架 is "to block and parry", the standard verb that closes an exchange of insults and opens the set-piece poem.
It was a fine fight:
The tag line that announces the verse gets a segment of its own and is not itself verse. 一 before 場 (chǎng, third tone) shifts to yì under the ordinary tone rule for 一.
The Great Sage put forth his fierce might; / the fiend would neither yield nor bend.
The poem opens in five-syllable lines and moves to seven at the fourth couplet — a couplet being a matched pair of lines — and holds seven to the end. Several lines carry a lead-in tag — 這一個, 那一個, 只見那 — sitting outside the count. A single rhyme runs the whole way through, the 尤 class: 柔 休 頭 流 愁 頭 擻 遊 籌 休. 順柔 is "to submit and soften."
The two houses matched their valour together; / which of them would consent to break off?
那個肯干休 is a rhetorical question, so 那 is nǎ, "which of them —?" 干休 means to let a matter drop. In traditional spelling 干 is always gān (干戈, 何干, 若干); the gàn that means "to do" is a different character, 幹. 兩家 is "the two sides" of a contest, not two households.
This one's iron rod was like a dragon's tail; / that one's long spear was like a python's head.
The 這一個…那一個 frame — this one … that one — is the standard call-and-answer device of fighting verse, pairing the two combatants clause by clause all the way down. 那 is the pointing nà; 長槍: 長 is cháng, "long", not zhǎng.
This one's rod came in a play of strokes like the sounding wind; / that one's spear held its fierce guard like running water.
解數 is a term straight out of the martial-arts hall: a set sequence of moves, what a modern school would call a form or kata. 解 is xiè here (not jiě), and 數 is the noun shù. The pair 風響 / 水流 sets sound against motion.
One saw only the coloured mists hanging dense, the ridges darkened; / the auspicious clouds massed thick, the woodlands sunk in gloom.
那 points, so nà. 朦朦 and 靉靆 are both two-syllable words for light going out of the sky, the second an old poetic term for piled-up cloud. The landscape darkening as the fight goes on is a convention of the form — the weather takes sides.
The birds that filled the sky all stayed their wings; / the wolves and vermin of the four wilds drew in their heads.
盡縮頭: 盡 is jìn, "one and all", the reading used throughout this edition; the concessive sense that would be jǐn is written with a different character, 儘. 狼蟲 — "wolves and crawling things" — is a fixed pair meaning wild animals generally.
On that side the little imps raised their war-cry; / on this side Pilgrim shook himself to the work.
那陣上 points, so 那 is nà. 這壁廂, "over on this side", answers it. Having matched the two weapons against each other, the poem now matches the two camps.
One iron rod, and no man to match it, / has beaten its way ten thousand lǐ about the West.
一條: 一 shifts to yì before 條 (tiáo, second tone). 里 stays in Chinese as lǐ rather than becoming a mile, because it is nowhere near one: a Ming lǐ ran to something like 576 metres, roughly a third of a mile. 萬里, ten thousand of them, is not meant as a measurement anyway — it is the ordinary way of saying "the whole world over", the way English says "the ends of the earth". The couplet is Wukong's credential, stated in two lines, and it is a trailer for the enormous autobiographical poem he recites later in this same chapter.
That shaft of a long spear is a true opponent, / that has held the Golden Helm forever and is reckoned first among them.
那 points, so nà; 長槍: 長 is cháng. 稱上籌: 稱 is chēng, "to be reckoned as"; 上籌 is the top tally-stick, first place. On the place-name 金兜 see the note to the passage as a whole.
Meeting like this, there can be no fair parting; / till high and low are seen, they swear not to give over.
相遇: 相 is xiāng, marking a thing done mutually. 無好散: 散 is sàn, the verb "to break up, to part." 不見高低 — "until it is seen which is the higher" — closes the poem on the terms of the contest, and the next passage will leave those terms unsettled.
The slanging match before the fight repays close reading, because both sides are arguing about property. The demon accuses Pilgrim of theft in broad daylight (白晝); Pilgrim hands the phrase straight back and adds the question that settles the moral ledger of the entire arc — 那件兒是你的, "which of these things is yours?" Every object in that cave arrived by way of the ring. The demon is a fence complaining about burglary. And the chapter's ending completes the joke at his expense: the ring itself is stolen goods, lifted out of Lord Lao's own treasury by a servant who had swallowed an elixir pill and gone to sleep.
There is a pun in the middle of it that English cannot carry. The word Pilgrim uses for the demon's device, 圈套, is the ordinary word for a snare or a trap — and it is built on 圈, the character for a ring or hoop. So "you work a snare-ring" is at once an accusation of trickery and a plain description of the object. The demon is caught by the language before he is caught by anything else.
The battle poem is a standard set-piece of the genre, but a well-made one. It opens in five-syllable lines and widens to seven at the fourth couplet; it runs the this-one-and-that-one call-and-answer down two couplets, pairing rod against spear, then stroke against guard and sound against water; then it pulls back to the landscape, where birds stop in mid-air and beasts pull their heads in, and out again to the two camps, before returning to the two weapons and closing on the vow not to part until the thing is settled. One rhyme carries the whole way. A textual point: at 永鎮金兜稱上籌 the Sìdétáng edition prints the place-name with a character made of 山 set over and beside 兜, which does not exist in the standard character set at all; the Wikisource transcription prints plain 兜 with an editorial note, and that is what is encoded here, at all eight occurrences in the chapter.