Canonical Classics ← 第九十八回
第九十八回
yuánshúxúnfāngtuōqiào
gōngchéngxíng滿mǎnjiànzhēn

The Ape Grown Ripe and the Horse Grown Tame, the Shell Is Shed at Last · Merit Achieved and the Practice Full, They See True Suchness

幾層傑閣
模式 Mode Read Study
拼音 Pinyin Off
字體 Script
原文 Original text 繁體 Traditional Reader's edition 含詞賦 With rhapsody

幾層傑閣 A Stretch of High Towers

shīmen宿xiǎoxíngyòujīngyǒuliùjiàndàigāolóucéngjiézhēnshìshīmen宿xiǎoxíngyòujīngyǒuliùjiàndàigāolóucéngjiézhēnshì

chōngtiānbǎichǐsǒnghànlíngkōngchōngtiānbǎichǐsǒnghànlíngkōng
tóuguānluòyǐnshǒuzhāifēixīngtóuguānluòyǐnshǒuzhāifēixīng
huòchuāngxuāntūnzhòucuóédòngjiēyúnpínghuòchuāngxuāntūnzhòucuóédòngjiēyúnpíng
huángxìnláiqiūshùlǎocǎiluánshūdàowǎnfēngqīnghuángxìnláiqiūshùlǎocǎiluánshūdàowǎnfēngqīng
nǎishìlínggōngbǎoquèlínguǎnzhūtíngnǎishìlínggōngbǎoquèlínguǎnzhūtíng
zhēntángtándàozhòuchuánjīngzhēntángtándàozhòuchuánjīng
huāxiàngchūnláiměisōnglínguòqīnghuāxiàngchūnláiměisōnglínguòqīng
zhīxiānguǒniánniánxiùdānfèngxiángwàngǎnlíngzhīxiānguǒniánniánxiùdānfèngxiángwàngǎnlíng

sānzàngbiānyáozhǐdào:「kōnghǎochù。」sānzàngbiānyáozhǐdào:「kōnghǎochù。」


逐句解 Line by line

shīmen宿xiǎoxíngyòujīngyǒuliùjiàndàigāolóucéngjié shīmen宿xiǎoxíngyòujīngyǒuliùjiàndàigāolóucéngjié

Master and disciples lodged by night and set out at dawn, and when another six or seven days had passed they suddenly saw a range of high towers and several tiers of soaring pavilions.

夜宿曉行 — lodged by night, travelled at dawn. This is the whole fourteen-year journey compressed into four characters, and it is worth knowing that the novel uses this exact phrase only twice: here, and in Chapter 14, a few pages after Monkey came out from under his mountain and the walking began. The first leg and the last leg, and nothing in between. 六七日, six or seven days — the book has stopped counting precisely, which after a hundred chapters of exact tallies is its own kind of signal. 忽見, suddenly they saw, is the novel's standard way of putting something in the road. Usually what is suddenly seen is a mountain with a cave in it.

zhēnshì zhēnshì

And truly it was:

The cue. 真個是 announces a set-piece, and what follows is the chapter's first — eight lines describing a building. This is one of the four announcements in the chapter that a reader can spot coming. Three others arrive with no set phrase at all, just a name and a colon, and one of them is only forty characters away.

chōngtiānbǎichǐsǒnghànlíngkōng chōngtiānbǎichǐsǒnghànlíngkōng

A hundred chǐ thrusting at the sky, / rearing to the River of Heaven, riding upon air.

百尺 — a hundred chǐ. The chǐ is the Chinese foot, and it is left in Chinese here rather than turned into English feet, because a Ming chǐ was about a third of a metre and swapping in a different unit would quietly change the building. A hundred of them is roughly thirty metres — a ten-storey tower. ⚠ 聳漢 hides a small trap. That second character is the one that names the Han dynasty and the Chinese people, and here it means neither: it is the sky-river, the Milky Way, from the old name for it. The tower reaches up to the galaxy.

tóuguānluòyǐnshǒuzhāifēixīng tóuguānluòyǐnshǒuzhāifēixīng

Bow the head, and watch the sun go down; / put out the hand, and pick the flying stars.

The oldest way in Chinese verse to say a building is tall: describe what you could do from the top of it. You look down at the sunset, and you reach out and take a star the way you would take fruit off a branch. 低頭, bowing the head, is going to come straight back. Thirty characters from here Tripitaka raises his head to look at a boy in a gateway, and the book uses the matching word for it.

huòchuāngxuāntūnzhòucuóédòngjiēyúnpíng huòchuāngxuāntūnzhòucuóédòngjiēyúnpíng

Wide-flung casements and galleries swallow all space and time; / craggy ridgepoles and eaves come up against the screen of cloud.

豁達 is huò dá, wide open and free of obstruction. The first character has another life in a phrase about staking everything on one throw, where it is read huō, and that is the reading a dictionary reaches for first — but a window is not staking anything. It appears once in the whole novel, right here. 宇宙 is usually translated universe, and the two characters are worth separating: the first is roof and eaves, everywhere in space; the second is past and future, everywhere in time. The windows swallow both. It turns up three times in this chapter and again in the very next line.

huángxìnláiqiūshùlǎocǎiluánshūdàowǎnfēngqīng huángxìnláiqiūshùlǎocǎiluánshūdàowǎnfēngqīng

The yellow crane brings word, and the autumn trees grow old; / the painted luan carries letters, and the evening wind is clear.

Cranes and phoenixes are the post office of the immortals. The luán is a bird of the phoenix family, and both of these are standard carriers of messages between the heavens and the earth — the sort of detail a first reader took as read, the way we take a stamp. The second half of each line does something the first half does not: the letters arrive, and then the trees go on ageing and the wind goes on blowing. Post comes and time passes anyway.

nǎishìlínggōngbǎoquèlínguǎnzhūtíng nǎishìlínggōngbǎoquèlínguǎnzhūtíng

This, then, is a palace of spirits and a gate-tower of treasure, / a lodge of fine jade and a courtyard of pearl.

Four two-word pictures in a row, each of them a building material joined to a building. is a fine dark jade — the character occurs once in the whole novel, and it is here. Watch the line lengths across this set-piece and you will see them refuse to settle: four and four, then five and five, then seven and seven twice over, and now seven against four. That unevenness is the form working as intended. A regular poem holds one measure; a piece like this changes measure as it goes, which is why the reader's edition marks it with a different label from a poem.

zhēntángtándàozhòuchuánjīng zhēntángtándàozhòuchuánjīng

In the hall of truth they discourse upon the Way; / through all space and time they hand the scriptures down.

⚠ Read the two halves against each other and something odd shows up. 談道 is to discourse upon the Way — the Daoist word. 傳經 is to hand down the scriptures — the Buddhist one. One line, both houses. That is not carelessness. The building the pilgrims are looking at is a Daoist abbey, and it is the last stop before the Buddha's own mountain. Hold that thought: the man who comes out of it is going to insist on walking them up the road himself.

huāxiàngchūnláiměisōnglínguòqīng huāxiàngchūnláiměisōnglínguòqīng

The flowers turn to the spring and are fair; / the pines stand out the rain and come away green.

After four lines of jade and pearl and galaxies, two lines about a garden. The measure drops back to five characters a side and the vocabulary drops back to flowers, pine, spring, rain. The pairing is exact: flowers meet the season and are lovely for it, pines meet the weather and are greener for it. One thrives on ease, one on being rained on. Given who is about to be told to walk instead of ride, it is a well-placed couplet.

zhīxiānguǒniánniánxiùdānfèngxiángwàngǎnlíng zhīxiānguǒniánniánxiùdānfèngxiángwàngǎnlíng

Purple fungus and the fruit of the immortals put out their best year upon year; / the cinnabar phoenix wheels in stately measure, and ten thousand things feel its power.

紫芝, the purple zhī, is the bracket fungus that grows on old trees and is dried hard as wood. Daoist medicine treated it as a drug of long life, and it is still sold that way today under the name lingzhi. In a garden like this it is not decoration; it is the pharmacy. 年年 — year after year — is the fourth doubled word in this passage, after house-by-house and door-by-door a moment ago. The set-piece keeps reaching for the same device to say without exception. The closing line is deliberately hard to pin down: the red phoenix flies in measured dignity, and ten thousand somethings answer to it. The book does not say what the ten thousand are, and the vagueness is the effect.

sānzàngbiānyáozhǐdào:「kōnghǎochù。」 sānzàngbiānyáozhǐdào:「kōnghǎochù。」

Tripitaka lifted his whip, pointed away into the distance and said, "Wukong — what a fine place that is!"

Eight lines of jade and galaxies, and then the man on the horse says what a fine place. The deflation is the book's own. ⚠ He points with his whip, which means he is still holding it, which means he is still mounted. Nobody has said so. Monkey is about to make the whole of his next speech out of that one unstated fact. 好去處 — a fine place to go. The middle character is the one that also means to handle or deal with a matter; here it is simply a place, and the same word runs through this whole scene four times.


總評 Commentary

The chapter's first set-piece is a description of a building, and the building turns out to be a Daoist abbey standing at the foot of the Buddha's mountain. That is stranger than it looks. The pilgrims have spent a hundred chapters walking towards Buddhist scripture, and a Daoist opens the last door before it — the novel's habitual way of saying that the two houses are floors of one building rather than rival firms. The verse says as much in a single line: in one half they discourse upon the Way, in the other they hand down the scriptures.

The form matters as much as the content. The lines will not settle into a regular measure — four and four, five and five, seven and seven, then seven against four — and that restlessness is what separates a piece like this from a poem. A poem holds its shape. This changes shape as it goes, which is why it is labelled differently in the reader's edition, and why it can put a galaxy and a pine tree in the same breath without either looking out of place.

And then the punchline. Sixty-eight characters of jade, pearl, cinnabar and the Milky Way, and the man they were written for looks up and says what a fine place. Tripitaka has been given the grandest scenery in nine chapters and responds like a tourist. Worse, he says it from the saddle — pointing with his whip, which is how we know he has not got down. His disciple noticed.